中考英语作文妙招(初中英语中考作文的窍门)

中考英语作文妙招(初中英语中考作文的窍门)

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中考英语作文妙招(初中英语中考作文的窍门)

中考英语作文妙招【一】

1。 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:

The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。

用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。

2。 动词的时态

在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3。 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。

4。 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。

The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。

What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5。 叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:

I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。

这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:

I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。

中考英语作文妙招【二】

游园会上,游戏项目精彩纷呈,校园俨然成为了大观园。同学们个个热情高涨,每一个游戏项目都有很多人在排队,简直如黄河之水天上来,奔涌不息。唉,为了能早点玩好所有的游戏,哥哥我也是蛮拼的,转起小脑筋,使出浑身解数,想出一些游园妙招,请看——

妙招N.1 勇闯大难关

游园会一开始,我就直奔“聊聊说说吧”。我心里的小算盘打得可响了:先去“聊聊说说吧”,我们蛋蛋后都会有畏难情绪,可能都比较害怕这个项目,不知道该聊些什么,那我就先去那儿吧!正好我最近写了一篇,我就聊聊《手斧男孩》吧!

嘿,果真,“聊聊说说吧”只有4个人在排队!哇哈哈,天助我也!我只花了5分钟来排队!看看蔷薇花架下的“海报评比”,队伍都排到了长长的蔷薇花架外!等我聊完了,“海报评比”的队伍才往前移动了一点点!看到此景,我不由得小小地嘚瑟了一下:用脑子做事情的人就是不一般!这排队妙招可真给力!大赞!

妙招N.2 同学妙合作

可是,面对种类繁多的游园项目,总用第一招也不行啊!我马上找了小N、小C和小L同学,组成了“时间就是生命,没有最快,只有更快”铿锵四人行团队。

“军师”我挥挥手中的餐巾纸,权当诸葛亮的羽毛扇,干脆利落地分配起任务:“小N,你和小C去‘趣味汉字宫’排队;小L,你和我去‘古诗词闯关’排队!把自己排队的游戏玩好之后,就可以畅通无阻地‘插队’玩另一个游戏了!”

哈哈,我们这一队只用了大约20分钟就玩好了两个游戏,看着其他人探头探脑地伸长脖子,想看看前面的`队伍有多长,又失望地一屁股坐在地上的情景,我们那个得意劲儿呀,甭提了!

妙招N.3 晚点更畅通

唉,一想到“海报评比”,我就头脑发胀。看着那一眼望不到头的“长龙”,看来被称为本次游园最热门的“景点”,真是名不虚传啊!唉!肿么办?我也是没招了!

突然,我的脑子里灵光一现:对了,如果我晚点去,排队的人肯定会少些,大多数人都已经在早些时给老师点评判星级了嘛!之前的时间就可以玩其他游戏了,这样不就是高效利用时间吗!

9点半,我抓着海报直冲“海报评比”,惊呆了:天哪!只有3个人在排队!这和之前的长龙队伍真是天壤之别啊!之前,排队评海报可能要花40分钟左右,我来得较晚,却只花了5分钟左右!这效率怎么能比啊!

游园会结束了,可是我的内心还没有平静下来。做每一件事,甚至是排队这样的小事,都要动动脑子,方能事半功倍!

中考英语作文妙招【三】

我家有一个“瞌睡虫”爸爸。他除了工作,其余时间特别爱睡觉,甚至于雷打不响,天塌下来照样能睡着!

这不暑假到了,爸爸更喜欢睡觉了。那天,我在房间里写作业,听到爸爸的屋里传来“呼噜、呼噜”的`打鼾声。大白天的,爸爸怎么又睡着了呢?我决定到爸爸的房间里去一探究竟。我轻手轻脚推开门,只见爸爸“呼噜”一个接着一个,一声比一声响。

爸爸这是打雷呢还是地震?我想和爸爸开个玩笑,大喊道:“爸,外面下雨了,快关窗啊!”可爸爸一点动静也没有。一计不成,我又喊道:“爸,上学时间到了!”爸爸猛地一下坐了起来,捂着嘴,打着哈欠,道:“儿子,走,我们这就走!”我像做错事被发现似的,赶紧回答:“爸,今天不上学,我见你打呼声太大了。”爸爸抓了抓头,“嗯”了一声,一转身又躺下睡着了。

这还不算,前几天,老爸的手机响了,我一接是一个叔叔打来的,我赶紧推醒爸爸。爸爸半眯着眼,半接手机,含含糊糊地应着:“好的,好的,我一会儿就到!”可挂了电话,爸爸很快就和周公又相会了。不一会儿,他的手机又响了,一接,是刚才的叔叔。我只好又去叫爸爸。于是,我走到他跟前喊他,可我怎么喊都没有用。

情急之下,我只好用小拳头打在他的肚子上。哪知,爸爸像电击似的,对着我大吼:“你疯了,傻小子,没见我正在睡觉吗?”我怯怯地说:“爸爸,叔叔又打电话了。老爸一拍脑袋,赶紧急冲冲跑出去。

说实在,那时我真不理解我的“睡虫”爸爸,他怎么那么爱睡觉,甚至有时候,我认为爸爸上辈子就是“瞌睡虫”投的胎!

直到昨天深夜,我半夜尿急,路过爸爸的书房时,暗黄的灯光下,只见他还在埋头工作呢,我这才明白爸爸爱睡觉的原因了:原来他为了这个家拼命工作,睡得这么迟啊!

这就是我家的“睡虫”爸爸。虽然他爱睡觉,但在这个炎炎夏日里,我要大声对他说:“您是我最爱、最爱的人!”

中考英语作文妙招【四】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对

The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下

正文:

第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由

结论:

第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构

中考英语作文妙招【五】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

中考英语作文妙招【六】

生活如同打结的绳,难解又伤脑,经常是头痛啊!琐事多,烦恼也就多了,但是,在我读完《家有妙招》之后,让我掌握了许多小妙招。

在我眼中的那些大困难的事,就因此一招致胜了。我们常说,学以致用。这本书就给我们诠释了这个成语的最佳意义,也增长了许多知识,更让我认识到更难的事情,不要或板走有经验之路,也要有创新精神,学会改变,学会让智慧永远在我身边陪伴。

我觉得这些小小的智慧,却有大大的收获呀。这不仅给我,而且是所有人可以看到的效果,感受到的神奇,领略到非凡的魅力,是智慧的魅力。《家有妙招》就是一本充满智慧的书。让我深深感受到智慧所涌发出的力量是无穷无尽的。是智慧去做一件事,还是蛮干,效果是完全不同的。

从生活中的一件小事来看,一日三餐是难免的。有的人干脆二餐,弄得手忙脚乱,烟熏火燎的,而有的人毫无惧怕之意,有条不紊地制作出满满一桌美味的食物。

其内在的原因就是态度问题,其差距就是智慧。虽然生活琐事给我们增添了许多烦恼,但是我们可以用我们的智慧来解除。我相信智慧的生活,才是最完美的。

中考英语作文妙招【七】

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.

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