初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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一大早,妈妈就叫我起来,对我说:“颖,今天我们要去拔花生快点起来!”因为我从来没有拔过花生,所以,我认为拔花生是一件非常之容易的事情,而且,也蛮有趣的,带着妈妈的‘拔花生’我来到了田里。
来到田里,映入眼帘的都是花生地,仿伏一片绿色的海洋。说起花生,大家都很熟悉,可说起拔花生,大家就不了解了。我抓住花生的一根茎,用力拔了好多下都拔不起来,这是怎么回事呢?我想,再来一次:我抓住花生的枝叶,“嘿”,使劲一拔,没把花生拔起来,倒把叶子拔了下来,花生还在“睡觉”呢,不想出来,并不是我拔不起来。“再拔一次”,我鼓励自己,“我一定能行!”我又使劲一拔,还是没拔起来。妈妈看见我一株也没拔起来,就给我示范了一遍,只见妈妈先抓住花生的下枝部分,再用力摇几下,轻轻一拔,花生就都“起床”了。“咦,怎么回事?花生这么容易就能拔起来,而我怎么都拔不起呢?哦,原来是许多花生都长在一撮大根下,光抓住一根茎是拔不出来的,要抓住所有的茎和叶用力拉才能拔出来。我把第一棵花生拔了出来,我的脸上都洋溢着幸福、甜蜜的笑容。
哎!这拔花生还真不简单哪。尽管汗从我的头流到背,我还是很高兴,因为我拔了很多花生,也找到了劳动的意义。
经过这次经历,我想到了几句话:世上无难事,只怕有心人。有志者,事竟成。
进入大门,首先映入眼帘的是花坛、喷泉和那平如明镜的'湖水。在大门广场的右边,是一个鸽舍。每天都有许多人到这来喂鸽子。瞧那一只只大腹便便、左摇右摆的鸽子多可爱啊!
继续向前走,不到50米便会有一些租船的码头。登上一只小船,任那春风吹拂着你的脸庞……春风吹起水浪,水浪拖着孤舟,鸟雀在树上欢乐地唱歌……一切都是那样地生机勃勃,让人仿佛置身于世外桃源之中,完全忘了这是在繁华喧嚣的城市里。
小船,渐渐地驶入了湖的深处;风景也越来越美。绿树怀抱着翡翠般的湖泊,鸟儿在漫天飞舞,花朵竞相开放,十分美丽。
之后,小船驶向中心,像一个小岛驶去。小岛不大,但是风景很美丽。岛上还有一个吊床。当你平躺在吊床上,仰望天空,便会不由的哼唱“蓝蓝的天上白云飘,白云下面马儿跑……”
在滨湖公园一片茂密的森林里,有一个面积不算太大但也不能说小的游乐园。这儿有飞毯、碰碰车、旋转木马……我最喜欢玩的就是卡丁车了。想象一下:你坐在卡丁车上,手握方向盘,脚踏油门与刹车,在赛道上尽情奔驰……那该是多么开心啊!
当夜幕即将降临,人们渐渐的散去时,来这儿散步最好。夕阳西下,在湖面上洒满了金光。仰望远方,一栋栋高楼大厦拔地而起,夕阳的余光洒在每一座大楼、每一户人家的窗户上,令人心旷神怡。此时此刻,那一座座大厦似乎在遥望滨湖公园这颗宝珠,如痴、如迷。而我也沉浸在了这一片美景中,如痴、如迷……
春日里的阳光格外明媚,到处生机勃勃,我们每个人的脸上洋溢着喜悦,无法掩饰心里的那份激动,因为今天,我们“阳光班”的成员在老师和妇联的带领下,要去参观太仓市博物馆和城市规划中心展览馆。
太仓市博物馆位于新区行政中心的广场东侧,刚走近博物馆,我就被它新颖的外表所吸引了,与其说它像只藤条编织成的帽子,更不如说它像个“大圆仓”。这种独具一格的建筑,更激发了我走进去一探究竟的。
我满怀好奇和期盼走进了博物馆展厅,首先映进眼帘的是一座晶莹剔透的玻璃桥,我正准备上桥走走时,悬挂在桥上的.一块牌子引起了我的注意:“正在维修,请绕道!”郁闷,只好从桥边走过去,不经意的往桥下瞄了一眼,哇!桥下有许多惟妙惟肖的古代建筑,我在为古代就如此繁华的太仓感到惊讶时,又为自己在太仓生活而感到骄傲,我一边看,一边和同学小声议论着藏品的妙处。几百幅字画让我目不暇接,这些字,有的苍劲有力,有的圆润流畅,有的潇洒狂放……赞叹中,我在心里默默鼓掌。
接着,我们又来到了城市规划中心展览馆,一进门,我就惊奇的发现,地是玻璃的,地下是一条又一条的道路,顺着路标我很快找到了中市路,找到了陆渡中心小学。当我正陶醉其中时,导游姐姐高声喊我们去看电影,我疑惑地走进去,里面有个不大的屏幕和一些椅子。这部小电影是用动画做成的,描绘了以前太仓的历史和以后太仓的繁华景象……时间很快到了,我们依依不舍地回到了学校。
通过这次太仓半日游,我见到了太仓的历史和太仓未来的美好景象。我爱太仓,希望它以后会更加繁荣昌盛。
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