五年级作文英语去哪参观【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级作文英语去哪参观【二】
走进房间以后，我正“沙沙”地写着作业，胳膊不小心碰着了橡皮，橡皮随即掉在了地下。当时，作业就快要写完了，也没顾得看，“哎呀，写错了。”我自言自语道，于是我开始找我的橡皮。
橡皮是绿色的，我的眼睛在急速的寻找着房间一切绿色的东西，我看见了灯台旁边那个绿色的`小东西，手伸去一拿，发现自己找错了，那是一个青蛙型的小钱包。心情失落极了，便去寻问妈妈：“妈妈，你有没有看见我的橡皮呀？”“你看，我叫你天天收拾东西，你就是不听，你现在东西丢了，我怎么可能看见……”哎，早知道就不问你妈妈了，又要听一阵唠叨，于是，我不耐烦地走进了房间，关上了门。我找来找去，找到了一堆带有绿色的物品，但都不是小橡皮。我头晃来晃去，一不留神，发现了掉在地上的小橡皮，把那个错字一改，作业就写完了。
以后，一定要注意整理东西呀！
五年级作文英语去哪参观【三】
暑假里，我陪着爷爷奶奶、外公外婆来到了我向往以久的芜湖市博物馆、规划馆参观游览。
走到博物馆门口，看见那深灰色的刻有中国古典花纹的墙体，顿时感觉到浓郁的文化气息，我迫不及待地走进馆内。在这里，我看到了人类的老祖先——猿猴以及别的原始生物的骨骼化石，了解了人类的进化历程；观赏了古人用的铜镜、石器、青铜器、瓷器、玉器，那纯手工的制作工艺让我惊叹不已……最让老人们激动的是那些城市改造前的老旧照片，只见外婆指着其中的一张芜湖市百货公司的照片，兴奋地对我说：“看，这就是我年青时上班的.地方呀！看那橱窗，当年就是这个样子的！”还有老浮桥、天主教堂、中江宝塔……在这些照片前老人们驻足观看，不时地谈论着当年的情景。从他们的表情可以知道，一定勾起了无限的回忆。来到模拟长街的石板路上，看着各类店铺的模型，长辈们更加高兴，外婆激动地说道：“十里长街，太熟悉的地方了。看，我小时候就来过这家酱坊，还有就是在这家五洋店买洋火的！”奶奶也说：“可不！小时候我总是到这家五洋店买洋火的！那里他家生意可好呢！”听了他们兴高采烈的谈论，长街那繁华、热闹的景像在我脑海里不由得浮现出来……
参观完博物馆，我们又来到与之相邻的规划馆。在这里我第一次见到了芜湖市新火车站的模型，还体验了模拟动车乘坐；3D动感沙盘将芜湖市的整体规划尽现眼前，让大家对规划前景有很直观的了解……外公看完不禁感叹道“现在咱们芜湖真正是个现代化的智慧城市了！”真是做梦都想不到啊！”爷爷接着说道。我也为自己的家乡感到自豪，
今天的参观令我终生难忘，不仅让我了解了家乡芜湖的历史，和长辈们孩提时代的生活环境，更加激发了我建设家乡的使命感，将来我一定要用所学的知识将芜湖建设得更加繁华、美丽！
