五年级公园的人在干什么英语作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级公园的人在干什么英语作文【二】
我曾经是个不爱学习，讨厌学习的男孩，但是一堂课改变了我。
一天，新调来的数学老师王老师，满脸不高兴地走进教室，就开始批评我们了，说：“这次数学试卷做的很糟糕，全班只有一个同学得了100分。”大家听了，头底的都很低。过了一会儿，王老师话语缓和了一些，对我们说：“你们猜猜这100分是谁啊？”同学们叽叽喳喳猜开了。
同学中有说张三的，也有说李四的。老师只是摇头。过了一会儿，一位同学对老师说：“王老师，是谁？你快说呀！”王老师笑着说：“张凤刚同学，这个100分会不会是你的？”我还没回答，教室里又议论开了。
“老师，这不可能。”
“对，王老师，怎么会是他呢？”
轰，我羞极了。“静一静”，王老师对大家说：“考100分的正是张凤刚同学。”又说：“我们不能小看别人，别人也会有进步的时候啊。”
这时，教室里响起了噼里啪啦的掌声。
从那以后，我发现自己变了，变得更爱学习了。
五年级公园的人在干什么英语作文【三】
近来，我发现爷爷变了，变得糊涂起来了。
今天中午，我在院子里玩，听见爷爷自己在他的房里唠叨起来。我不知道爷爷在唠叨什么，就和妹妹去问他：“爷爷，你怎么啦？”不料，爷爷却指着我和妹妹大骂起来：“你们几个捣蛋鬼，把我的割草刀拿去哪里玩了？拿回来给我！”我和妹妹根本没拿过他的割草刀，我去哪里拿给他？我只好和妹妹帮他找，却没有找到，爷爷当然骂得更加厉害了。突然，妹妹大叫起来：“你看，爷爷的刀插在自己的腰背后。”爷爷摸了摸自己的后背，说：“这不是骑着马去寻马吗？”
记得还有一次，爸爸给了爷爷三十元钱，我当时也在场。爸爸出去了，我也跟着出去。过了一会儿，爷爷就大骂起来：“钱刚刚拿在手里，哪里去了？”爸爸闻声赶去帮爷爷找钱，也找不到。爷爷以为是我拿了他的钱，爸爸发起脾气就要打我。这时，爷爷哈哈大笑起来，原来爷爷把钱放在床板下面了。我站在旁边，都要气人了，爷爷每次糊涂起来总是冤枉人。
我爷爷以前不是这样的，为什么一下子变得这么糊涂起来了呢？我问了别人才知道，是因为爷爷老了，记忆力迅速减退的缘故。
爷爷老了，老糊涂了。
