一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。
●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word.
●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word into serious consideration.
去年夏天去露营的时候,我在玩游戏时,没注意前方,一不小心撞到一位叔叔,使他手上的汤溢了出来,我赶紧弯腰向对方赔不是,把头抬起来时,只见对方脸上堆满笑容,丝毫没有任何怒气的对我说:“下次小心一点!”说完就走了,因礼貌的`道歉,化解了当时的尴尬。
在暑假期间,爸爸心来潮的带我去看电影,回程的路途中,后方的车子为了超车,便和我们的车擦撞,爸爸赶紧下车察看,只见对方车主下车瞪了一眼后,就上车了,爸爸上车便和我说:“人如果没有礼貌只会让人更讨厌,最没有修养的人就是这种人,儿子啊!你长大后绝对不能成为那种不懂礼貌又没有修养的人呀!”
前几天,我自己一个人对着校园的墙壁投球,结果一不小心力道太大,球还没打到墙壁,就弹射出去了,我苦恼着球飞到哪里了?正好撞见同班同学,于是我很有礼貌的请他一同帮忙寻找,他二话不说马上帮忙,果然没多久他就在草丛里找到了球,我十分感谢他的帮忙,不然一个人在如此广阔的校园里找球,也不知道球找不找的到呢!
自古以来,中国就被称为“礼仪之邦”可见我们多么重视礼仪,有礼貌不但提升了我们的气质,也使别人更尊敬我们,因此,我们都应该成为有礼貌的人,才能共创一个温馨又祥和的未来!
“如果你有很多钱,你会干什么?”这是一个非常复杂的问题。有人也许想买一辆昂贵的车,还有人想买一栋豪华的房子。或着有人想经营一个公司等。我也有我自己的想法。
If I have a lot of money, I will publish an English book under my name. Maybe I will be famous someday, because everyone will know the fact that I'm good at English.
如果我有很多钱,我会用我的名字出版了一本英语书。也许有一天我会很出名,因为每个人都会知道我擅长英语的事实。
If I have a lot of money, I will help my best friend to set up a training school. Since this is his greatest dream. If I can make his dream come true, I will be very honorable. I will let him be the boss, but I only want to be his assistant.
如果我有很多钱,我会帮助我最好的朋友建立一个培训学校。因为这是他最大的梦想。如果我能实现他的梦想,我会感到很光荣。我会让他成为老板,而我只想做他的助手。
If I have a lot of money, I will travel to various coast cities. As they are facing the sea, I can spend a wonderful time at the seaside. It is said that the seaside is so wonderful and beautiful. The sunrise is glorious at the seaside and surfing on the sea is very exciting. While facing the sea, I can enjoy endless pleasure. How charming it is while feeling the sea wind blowing to us. It's also wonderful to enjoy the beautiful sunshine on the golden beach.
如果我有很多钱,我会去各沿海城市旅游。他们都面向大海,所以我能在海边度过一个美好的时光。据说,海边是非常美丽和美妙的。海边的日出很美,在海边冲浪也很刺激。面对大海,我可以享受到无穷的乐趣。多么迷人,感觉到海风吹向我们的时候是多么的迷人啊。在金色的`沙滩上享受美丽的阳光也是非常棒的。
These are my beautiful dreams. Even though I find it a little difficult to fulfill my dreams, it doesn't matter, because where there is a will, there is a way. I believe I can realize my dreams through my great efforts.
这些都是我美丽的梦想。虽然我很努力去实现我的梦想但是还是有点难度,不过没关系,因为有志者事竟成。我相信我能通过我的努力实现我的梦想。
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
冬冬不仅学习好而且还是个有礼貌的好孩子。
早上,冬冬来到学校见到老师就向老师敬礼、问好,老师微笑着点头直夸冬冬。
在家里,冬冬会帮助妈妈做家务,妈妈烧好饭菜,他会主动搬椅子、摆好碗筷、盛好饭,一家人围着桌子吃着香喷喷的饭菜,妈妈爸爸直夸冬冬是个懂事的好孩。
放学路上,冬冬看见一位老奶奶手里拄着拐杖吃力地过马路,冬冬不加思索地快步过去扶着老奶奶过了马路,老奶奶笑哈哈地连声夸奖冬冬是个有礼貌的好孩子,冬冬听了心里甜滋滋的。
学期结束了,学校要评选优秀学生,同学们一致选给了冬冬,冬冬的'昭片光荣地登上宣传窗。小鸟们叽叽喳喳的也都在夸冬冬是个有礼貌的好学生。
Supposing I have seventy-two changes, I'd like to change into a big fire to make the World warm.
Supposing I have seventy-two changes, I'd like to change into a sturdy old pine to protect from wind and sand.
Supposing I have seventy-two changes, I'd like to change into a cup of tea to offer our teachers.
Supposing I have seventy-two changes, I'd like to change into a good medicine to make all patients healthy.
Supposing I have seventy-two changes, I'd like to change into a big building to let all the sufferers live in and consist a big family.
Supposing I have seventy-two changes, I'd like to change into ...
In a word, I would try my best to let happiness and friendship live in the world for ever.
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