Although winter means cold weather, I love it all the same. I think winter is a beautiful season, especially when it snows. Snowflakes fall down naughtily. They fall on branches of trees, on roofs of houses and on wheat fields. Soon the whole earth will be dressed in white.
Everything is shining in the sun. Every time it snows, I will remember an old saying, "Winter has come, can spring be far away?
虽然冬天意味着寒冷,但我仍然热爱冬天。我认为冬天是一个美丽的季节,尤其是下雪的日子。雪花像玲珑剔透的小精灵,调皮地飘落下来。它们落在树枝上,屋顶上和麦田里。很快整个大地都银妆素裹起来。
太阳出来后,万物都闪烁着光芒。每次下雪,我都会记起一句格言:“冬天来了,春天还会远吗?”
一般说来,的创新构思,可有下列切入角 度。
一、从话题的另一意义的角度切入
许多中考话题都具有多义性,若只盯住其本义或其常用义,则构思很难出新,写出的作文虽不跑题但也显得一般化,若撇开其本义或常见义,转而从其引申义或 其比喻义的角度切入,构思定能出新。如黑龙江省2001年的中考话题是"水",若从自然界之"水"这个意思层面上去理解,把"水"当成名词,则构思很难出 新;若把"水"理解成形容词,如"这个人很水",在这个层面上理解"水"的意思,则其拟题、行文都会很有新意。
二、从缩小话题内涵的角度切入
有许多中考话题的意思非常宽泛,若给话题加上一些限制语或修饰语,便缩小了话题的内涵,有利于考场作文出新出奇。如海南省中考话题是"第一次",便应 缩小其内涵,才有利于构思选材,考场作文才能出新出奇。这里要强调的是:添加的限制语或修饰语,必须避开众生皆谈、人云亦云的误区,要从自己的材料库中那 许多不为人知的人、事、景、物着手。这样,新颖、独特的作文内容就会流于笔底,并能紧紧地抓住阅卷老师的眼和心。
三、从话题的逆向思维角度切入
围绕话题,自我多方设问,多方求答,用以开启思维,立意选材,这是众多考生的一般作法。然而,绝大多数考生只知沿着话题正向发问,而很少有逆向发 问的。如江西省2001年中考话题"尊重",考生可以提出"何为尊重"、"谁尊重谁"、"为什么要尊重"、"谁可做尊重或被他人尊重的典范"等等问题,这 些都是从正面发问,没能跳出常规思维的圈子;若舍弃"正向",从"逆向"角度思考发问,"为什么谁不尊重谁"、"不尊重他人好不好,为什么"、"不尊重的 事例或现象有哪些"、"怎样消除不尊重现象"等等,如此这般的提问思考,文章的构思、选材就避开了老调,步入了新境。
四、从话题的另一时空的角度切入
围绕考试话题,写自己经历的事,写自己身边的事,从家庭时空、从社会时空、从学校时空范围去立意选材,这本无不可。但这都是从话题的"现实时空"去构 思的。若能启动联想、想象或幻想,从话题的"过去时空"或"未来时空"角度去构思,只要联想、想象或幻想的人、事、景、物合乎情理,不管写的是话题的"过 去时空"或"未来时空",只要能含蓄、曲折地反映话题的"现实时空",便能写出颇具新意的考场作文来。如四川省德阳市2001年的中考话题"初三生活", 若一般人可能都会写自己或同龄人的初三生活,若启动联想、想象或幻想,写爷爷、奶奶的初三生活或几十年以后自己子孙的初三生活,只要合乎情理,则定能让阅 卷老师耳目一新,从而拍案叫绝。
Winter grandpa quietly come to earth, a day and a night under the swirl of snow, the white snow, like the earth mother clothed with a robe.
Morning, dong dong and cc a listen to mom said its snowing, go and dress they wake up face, and then immediately ran into the yard and the children playing together.
The yard good lively! Some kids skiing in joyfully, some in jubilantly make a snowman, and in a snowball fight fiercely, its interesting! Dong dong and he also joined their ranks, cc to roll a big snowball, while others are responsible for the snow together, dong dong vigorously piled the snow together. He stood up, yi? As a something! So she quickly ran home, running said: "I go home to take something!" After a while, he was holding a small bag excitedly ran out. First she mysteriously from the bag took out two round and the little black button in the lovely face of light snow person, then took out a root long thin carrots in below the eye, and then take out a piece of red pepper do snowman mouth labeled, then on the ground to find two young trees on both sides of a fork in a snowman, a lively and lovely snowman was born. Last winter winter took off his scarf and hat to wear of light snow person, snowman has become more lifelike.
Spring is coming, winter winter and cc after learning home found that accompany the yard daily snowman is missing, they were very sad. Mother cant bear to see them so sad, and told them: "light snow men afraid of you sad just wrote a letter to you, quick to see!"
Winter grandpa left, and I began the New Year, I thank you gave me life gave me dressed up so pretty! Accompany I had a great winter! I really dont want to leave you! See the next winter.
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