英语作文问路五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文问路五年级【二】
一天中午，小猪在森林找吃的，却迷了路。它心想：这可怎么办？怎么才能回家呢？
这时，从远处来了一头小熊。小猪傲慢地问小熊：狗熊，你知道怎样才能走出这片森林吗？小熊怒目圆瞪，看了他一眼，然后就走开了。小猪自言自语地说：它为什么不理我？它好像很生气的样子。小猪脑子里冒出许多问号。这时，有一只乌龟慢慢从草丛里爬了出来，小猪又问乌龟：老乌龟，怎么才能走出这片森林？乌龟叹了口气，心里想：这真是一个没礼貌的孩子。随后也默默地走开了。小猪很惊讶，心想：为什么大家都不理我呢？它自己一个人在森林里走来走去，还是找不到出去的路。小猪又累又饿又渴，哭了起来。他很害怕，这时猪妈妈找到了小猪，看见小猪在那儿大声哭着，就问：怎么了？小猪把事情的`经过都告诉了妈妈，问：他们怎么都不理我呢？猪妈妈说：那是因为你对他们都不礼貌。小猪听懂了。
和他人说话要礼貌，不能没礼貌。
英语作文问路五年级【三】
星期六的早晨，红彤彤的.太陽从东方缓缓升起，照耀着整个大地。一片生机勃勃的景象，空气清新，让人倍感舒心，我和姐姐走在去图书馆的路上。
清晨的街上已经人来人往，车水马龙热闹非凡，我们边走边谈，开心极了，不一会儿就来到了四叉路口，我四面瞧了瞧问姐姐，接下来该怎么走啊！姐姐左思右想，这边瞧瞧，那边看看，也拿不定主意该怎么走，真是寸步难行啊！
姐姐急得像热锅上的蚂蚁，在树底下来来回回的绕着圈，忽然眼前一亮，不由地对我说：“你看，这街上来来往往的人，我们可以去问问他们啊！”正说着，迎面走来一位阿姨，我三步并着两步跑上前，仰起红扑扑的脸问：“阿姨，请问去图书馆的路怎么走啊？你能告诉我吗？”阿姨看了看我耐心地说：“小朋友，你看，向前直走过了红绿灯左转就会看到图书馆了。”我顺着她手所指的方向，点了点头连声说：“谢谢阿姨。”
我们顺着阿姨指引的方向，很快到达了图书馆。
