英语作文改错常用符号(英语作文批改的符号及图示)

英语作文改错常用符号(英语作文批改的符号及图示)

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英语作文改错常用符号(英语作文批改的符号及图示)

英语作文改错常用符号【一】

一天,老虎大王让小动物去开会,可是一连十天都没有一个小动物来,老虎大王发怒了,它说:“我一定要找它们算算账。”

于是它出门,它看见了小马,背着很多东西走过来,忙问:“小马,你怎么不去开会?”小马立刻跑过来说:“虎大王,您没有说什么时候去,而且你可知道我很忙的',白天背,晚上抬。”虎大王听了点了点头,说:“好吧,这次放过你。”

虎王见到了小猴在树上玩,火冒三丈说:“小猴,你为什么不去参加我的大会?胆子真大,看我不吃了你!”小猴吓了一跳,说:“虎大王,别吃,别吃,我也很冤枉啊我,真想去的,可是我和松鼠正在玩捉迷藏,我正想下去开会,小松鼠一下子出来说‘捉到了’,就把我给推了下去,我骨折了,今天才好了一点,我现在腿还有点痛呢。”说着走给虎大王看,虎大王见了说:“好吧,这次放了你,下一个,我绝不轻饶。”

虎大王来到了小猪的房子,看见门关着,就上前咚咚咚咚的推门。过了好一会儿,小猪才把眼睛揉揉,开了门,虎大王说:“你干嘛不去开会?”小猪说:“对不起,您没说让谁去,我还以为我又脏又胖,还有一股臭味,您不会让我去的,如果要去,我还是把我洗得香喷喷的再去。”老虎大王说:“好吧,我放了你。”

老虎大王又来到小兔家,看见小兔提着萝卜,老虎大王说:“你为什么不去开会?”小兔吓了一跳,把篮子往边上一放,蹦蹦跳跳地来了:“我不知道去什么地方开会,我还跑了一大圈,竟然没一个人开会,所以还以为我听错了呢,你让我怎么去呢?还有我也不知道什么时候去呀,我连续五天跑来跑去,就是没见到你和别的小动物,我也是冤枉的呀。”老虎说:“好吧,看来是我出错了,我一定要重写一个开会通知。”一到家,它就写起来了:

请所有动物明天上午7点到我家来开会,共同商讨如何阻止人类破坏森林的大事。

那天所有的小动物都来开会了,老虎非常满意!

英语作文改错常用符号【二】

“小奇!”妈妈突然把门推开,“你昨天怎么没去补习班上课?”小奇吓了一跳,手机从手中滑落。“这……说来话长……”小奇支支吾吾地说道。妈妈盯着慌张的小奇,却没注意到地上的'手机一个跟斗钻进了书包里。

小奇不知道要不要告诉妈妈昨天是自己一个人在家里玩游戏,就迅速转动大脑,想着该怎么对妈妈说。说吧,肯定要被妈妈批评一顿,手机还会被没收。不说吧,怎么对得起养育了自己十三年的妈妈?一想到昨天玩游戏时玩得那么爽,小奇决定不告诉妈妈实情。“随便编两句谎言,混过去算了吧。”小奇在心里默念道,“妈妈,对不起了!”

“妈妈,其实我昨天和同学们一起去游乐场玩了,同学们经常去那里,但是我很少去,自己摸索了半天才回来,结果一看手表,都已经七点二十了,补习班也已经放学了,为了不让你们担心,我就自己一个人赶紧飞奔回来了。”说到这里,小奇为了增添几分逼真感,还装样子揉了揉眼睛,好像在流眼泪,又用手擦一擦眼睛。没想到妈妈还真信了。“我还以为我会找不到回来的路呢!”小奇又说了一句,手一直揉着眼睛,还悄悄地从指缝间偷看了妈妈一眼。他看见妈妈也哭了,不过妈妈的哭与自己的哭不一样,妈妈不是装的,她是为儿子担心而哭,是真的伤心。可是自己却骗了妈妈,小奇心里很不是滋味。

晚上,小奇做了一个奇怪的梦,梦中出现了一个白衣天使和一个黑衣天使,白衣天使很善良,一直鼓励小奇快把真相告诉妈妈,而黑衣天使却很恶毒,一直在与白衣天使争吵,让小奇不要告诉妈妈……小奇一下子醒来了,他思来想去,决定告诉妈妈真相,但是他又不敢当面告诉妈妈,于是他写了一封信,把它悄悄地放在妈妈的枕头边,信中写清了事情的来龙去脉,信的旁边还放着一个东西——手机。

第二天睡觉时,小奇在枕头边发现了妈妈写给自己的信,信里只写了九个字:知错就改,是个好孩子。小奇心里舒服极了,“心里没有秘密,再也不用提心吊胆地玩了。”小奇不禁暗暗感叹。

同学们,让我们一起做个知错就改的好孩子吧!

英语作文改错常用符号【三】

孙小圣跳着跳着就跳到了亭子里,它看见亭子那边有两根柱子,心想:“让别人知道我是‘齐天大圣’孙悟空的儿子。”想着想着就从头上拔下一根毛,用嘴巴轻轻吹了一下,马上一支毛笔出现在孙小圣的手里,只见它两只脚倒挂在一根柱子上,手里拿着变出来的毛笔,在另一根柱子上写下了这样几个字:“孙小圣到此一游。”

笨笨熊看见了,赶紧对孙小圣说:“孙小圣,赶紧下来!”它把孙小圣拉到旁边的草地上,严肃地对孙小圣说:“这是公共场所,不能乱涂乱画,你这样做,还像个少先队员吗?要是人人都像你这样,环境就会被破坏的.。”孙小圣听了笨笨熊的话,惭愧地低下了头,不好意思地说:“我……知道错了……我马上改……”说着从头上拔下两根毛,用嘴巴一吹,就变成一个桶和一块抹布,把它写的字擦掉了。笨笨看了,对孙小圣说:“知错就改还是好孩子。”这时太阳公公也露出了欣慰的笑容,小鸟也叽叽喳喳地唱着歌,如同在说:“知错就改还是好孩子。”

英语作文改错常用符号【四】

1。 It is considered /thought that人们(有人,大家)认为

2。 It is generally /usually accepted /agreed/recognized that普遍(一般,通常)认为

3。 It is believed that有人(人们,大家)相信

4。 It is well—known that大家知道(众所周知)

5。 It is said that据说(有人说)

6。 It is learned that据闻(悉)

7。 It is supposed that据推测

8。 It is estimated/predicted/calculated that据估计(预计)

9。 It must be pointed that必须指出

10。 It is reported that据报道

11。 It must be admitted that必须承认

12。 It will be seen that可见(可以看出)

13。 It will be seen from this that由此可见

14。 It is understood that不用说(都知道)

15。 It can not be denied that无可否认

16。 It has been proved/demonstrated that已经证明

17。 It may be confirmed that可以肯定

18。 It may be safely said that可以有把握地说

19。 It is sometimes asked that人们有时会问

20。 It is expected that/hoped that人们希望

21。 When it comes to要说到,要谈及

英语作文改错常用符号【五】

1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ……

2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.

3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.

4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ……

5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……

6) Never in our history has the idea that …… been so popular.

7) Faced with ……, quite a few people argue that ……

8) According to a recent survey, ……

9) With the rapid development of ……,

10 When it comes to…, (当说到…

二、列举观点

I.Some people think/believe that…,

Other argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true

1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages.

2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.

3.Compared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages. ,

4.Although computers bring people a lot of convenience,they have many disadvantages.

5....has many advantages.For example,…

6. However,just as every coin has two sides,…has it’s disadvantages.

II…play(san important role/part in……

1.Computers play an important role in science and technology.

2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life.

3.Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies.

4.Education plays an important part in developing our mind.

5.Addiction to alcohol and drugs plays a role in homelessness.

6.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.

7.In the past,letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication.But now,telephone,email,and fax have taken their place.

III.With the development of…

1.With the development of our economy,many Chinese families can afford a car.

2.With the development of our economy and society,pollution is more and more serious.

3.With the rapid development of Science and technology,people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home.

4.With the current social and technological developments,employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed.

5.With the rapid increase of China's population,housing problem is becoming more and more serious.

6.With more and more women entering the society,people's attitude towards women is changing.

7.With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up, an increasing number of (a growing number of,a significant number of

families can afford a car.

三、陈述自己观点

There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements,but…

四、批驳

1)It is true that ……, but one vital point is being left out.

2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.

3) Some people say ……, but it does not hold water.

4) Many of us have been under the illusion that……

5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.

6) It makes no sense to argue for ……

7) Too much stress placed on …… may lead to ……

8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ……

9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ……

10) No one can deny the fact that ……

11) The idea is hardly supported by facts.

12) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ……

13) Recent studies indicate that ……

14) There is sufficient evidence to show that ……

15) According to statistics proved by ……, it can be seen that ……

五、结尾句型 :

英语议论文多以简要总结全文或对所讨沦的问题提出解决办法来结尾。总结全文时除常用到in one/a word,generally speaking,to conclude等外,没有固定模式。提出解决办法时却常使用下一句型:

1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ……

2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ……

3). We should take measures to control the rapidly increasing world population.

4). We’d better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams.

5). The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse.

6). Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks.

7) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ……

8) In conclusion, it is imperative that ……

9) There is no easy method, but ……might be of some help.

10) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ……

11) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.

12) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.

13) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ……

14) Taking all these into account, we ……

15) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear……

六、其他句型

I、There be结构

There+be+主语+(修饰成分,表示客观存在的'人或事物。 There must be a lot of fuel in the tank.

There remains nothing more to be done.

There is no point in talking about it again.

There is something you don't know.

There is not enough time to do the work. .

II、名词化结构

名词化结构用以表明抽象思维的逻辑性和概念化,从而使语体更加正式、更加具有书面语风格。

1.由of连接主谓关系

That the earth revolves around the sun causes the changes of the seasons.

名词化:The revolution of the earth around the sun causes the changes of the seasons.

2.由0f连接动宾关系

One of the most important natural phenomena is that energy is transmitted from one point to another in waves.

名词化:One of the most important natural phenomena is the transmission of energy from one point to another in waves.

3.用of连接含有by的短语,把简单句转换成名词短语

英语作文改错常用符号【六】

原因就是为了一个小铁片,原来奇奇在沙滩上找到了一个小铁片,上面有着许多美丽的图案,奇奇把他当宝贝保存着。这天奇奇的爸爸在造房子,房子眼看就快造完了,这时爸爸才发现还需要了一块小铁片,不然就会塔掉。这是奇奇正拿着那快小铁片蹦蹦跳跳的回了,这时爸爸也非常高兴,因为它找到了它需要的材料。它笑嘻嘻的朝奇奇走去,奇奇看了一下后面的房子越想越不对劲,因为爸爸今天特别热情。直到爸爸说出第一句话的时候奇奇明白了,爸爸是在打铁片的主意。奇奇眼珠子咕噜一转他想了一个办法来整一回爸爸。他对爸爸说:“这个小铁片好看吗。”爸爸回答道:“太好看了。好儿子能借爸爸看看吗?”奇奇大方的说:“好的,如果你能帮我找点吃的来,我就把他给你。”爸爸自信的说:“没问题,儿子包在我身上。”说着爸爸马上挥舞着大钳子,大摇大摆的走了,奇奇偷偷的跟在后面。爸爸才到一片沙地,用大钳子挖田螺。这时奇奇乘爸爸没注意在后面推了它一把,爸爸一头栽进了沙堆里。爸爸一下子拉不出它的头,它只能用自己的大钳子慢慢的刨了,过了许久,爸爸终于把自己的头给刨出来了。爸爸东倒西歪地在原地打转,不一会儿,就四脚朝天的倒下了。这时奇奇已经笑得停不住了,这时爸爸发现了躲在珊瑚后面的奇奇,它一下子就把奇奇揪了出来。爸爸气的火冒三仗,在它的再三逼问下,奇奇招了一切。爸爸听了后对奇奇非常失望,因为奇奇太贪玩了,是它没有教育好奇奇但他得让奇奇自己反省,他让奇奇出去流浪。

奇奇一开始以为他在外面能过的`很好,可是却不以为然,因为奇奇在第三天就已经饿的头晕目眩了。它倒在了一个老蟹奶奶的门前,老蟹奶奶看到后就把奇奇扶回家,给奇奇吃了东西。奇奇醒后把事情的经过告诉了老奶奶。老奶奶听了只后对奇奇说:“你以为这样做很好玩对吗?可是你有没有想过当时你爸爸的心情和感受。当你在捉弄别人的时候有没有想过别人的感受。如果你被别人捉弄了就会感受到当时的尴尬和心中的气愤了。”小蟹听了老奶奶的一番教诲后一下子明白了好多。它告别了老奶奶。

奇奇回到家中向爸爸道了谦,并且给爸爸讲了自己的经历和明白的道理。爸爸听了之后很高兴,因为它觉得奇奇长大了。奇奇陪着爸爸一起造好了那座还没造好的房子。

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