要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
这是我听到的最难受的话,就像龙应台所说的那样,渐渐地明白到,所谓父母子女一场,就是在一次次离别时看着她他的背影渐行渐远,而他用他的背影告诉你,不必追。
我们教会他仇恨,我们教会他宽容,我们教会他单纯,我们教会他们我们所恐惧,我们所愤怒,我们所拥有。
但不管是什么,我们都教会他爱。
因为爱才会滋生的仇恨,因为爱才会滋生的单纯,爱包容任何事物,不分种族。它会导致悲剧,会导致战争,会导致轮回,但这些事务皆因爱而生,否则不会有这个故事。
不会有术士去养育一条龙,不会有龙无论何地何时都称做爸爸的那个人,不会有龙在怒吼下去毁掉,去毁灭,在烟尘中留下灰烬,不会有一个四处游历又归去却再次一无所有的人,不会有那只愤怒的理智的.成为遥远天空的一颗星的龙,不会有那么一条龙,却在懵懂无知时,背叛了最亲的人。
我们不能一味地教孩子善良,因为善良不仅仅是单纯,单纯的背面便是毁灭。我们不能教他们仇恨,我们的明亮的双眼会失去它的意义。
树欲静而风不止,子欲养而亲不待。
这是我最爱的结局,因为当我们累了困了想家时,
那个人已经不在了。
他不会在沙滩上等到夕阳西下,尽管他那么怕水,他不会再在门口在冷风下等待,即使背后便是温暖的壁炉,他不会再说farewell my son,因为他们已没有机会了。
旦行旦坦荡,且行且珍惜,世界如此之大,却再也寻觅不到你存在过的痕迹,我们一生都能如此幸运的一些人,也在无奈的失去。
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
I love travelling. When I was young, my parents always took me to other places to visit, such as Beijing, Zhuhai and Guilin. But as I grow up, there s such a heavy study-pressure that I can hardly afford time and energy to travel. Fortunately, I can travel to a lot of far-away attractions in the fantastic world of books and TV. Recently I have learnt about Rio De Janeiro from books. I feel excited and want very much to travel there.
Rio De Janeiro lies along the coast of Atlantic Ocean. It s Brazil s second largest city. Firstly, I love the climate in Rio De Janeiro. Sea climate is comfortable and it never gets too dry or too wet. Secondly, I love the beautiful beaches. I always form a picture in my mind of being at the seaside. I imagine myself walking on the beach. The sunshine is mild in the late afternoon and I feel the soft wind moving across my face. I can see the sun moving slowly below the sea level, just like a hot, red ball falling into the water. Some seagulls are flying above the sea and others rest themselves on ship-boards. I take off my shoes. Soft sand flows through my toes. Little waves sometimes run towards me and wet my trousers, just like naughty children. I enjoy this feast for both my body and spirit. Now I know that the beauty of nature is the greatest beauty in the world.
Alone, I m just walking, walking and walking
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