初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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清晨,我睁开朦胧的双眼,发现我来到了一个黑洞跟前,时光老人微笑着对我说:“欢迎你,小朋友。你是第五万五千个被我们选中的幸运儿,在这里,将让你度过一个无忧无虑的星期八!”话音刚落,我便被黑洞吸了进去。短暂的昏迷过后,我来到了一个树屋前。
呀!这不正是我一直梦寐以求的树屋吗?粗壮的参天大树,结实的树梯,精致的屋子。我高兴极了,三步并做两步,爬上了梯子。推开门,一个图书馆印入眼帘。我酷爱看书,妈妈却把带我去图书馆的事一拖再拖,到现在也没带我去。我奔进房间,手脚麻利地从书架上拿了一本书,趴在地毯上读起来,贪婪地吸取书中的精华。正当我看得入神时,书屋摇晃了起来。硬生生地把我从书海中拉了回来。我很生气。把书放好,赶紧跑去窗口,原来是伐木工人在砍树呢!
我飞快地跑出树屋,气愤地叫道:“别砍啦!你们这样毁坏森林,贵遭到惩罚的!树木是有生命的,你们怎么……怎么可以……可以……”因为过于激动,我都有些语无伦次了。
可他们哪里肯听我的!他们不耐烦地嚷嚷:“去!去!去!哪里来的小屁孩!多管闲事!快滚开!”
我被他们无情的推开,手臂砸在了硬邦邦的石头上。我哭泣起来,因为我手臂疼,更因为心疼。心疼大树,也心疼那些无知的.人们,更心疼未来的地球。
我仿佛看到了未来:城市四处没有一棵树,毒气统治了天空,再也看不见笑容,再也听不到欢声笑语,四处一片混乱。
“小懒虫!快起床,太阳都晒屁股喽!”突然,我被妈妈叫醒,原来是一个梦啊!可是,我还是能听到远处的伐木声……
醒醒吧!人们!不要再破坏环境了,我们的地球真的需要好好爱护!利用空暇时间,组建一个星期八,一起植树,让世界重新充满欢笑吧……
又是星期天,爸爸妈妈忙碌自己的工作去了,我约的伙伴三三两两都来了。电脑游戏玩腻了,电视也看得有点烦了。今天玩什么呢?立军提议:今天来的人够多,我们一起玩“瞎子抓人”吧。“好……”伙伴们轰然答应着。
“瞎子抓人”的游戏很平常,就是一个人用红领巾蒙住眼睛,在房间里抓人。平时我们都在操场上玩,操场的范围太大了,而且没有什么可以躲藏的地方,抓起来总是觉得乏味。房间里就正好,桌子、椅子、床、衣柜、沙发,什么摆设都有,那边“瞎子”开始抓人,这边躲藏的人就边嚷嚷着边找地方“夺路而逃”了。
剪刀石头布之后,我竟然获得担任“瞎子”的工作,真是幸运。嘿,要说在别的地方,我担任“瞎子”可能不是很称职,可是在我家,在我熟悉的地盘,我一定是“无敌”的。
“丁零当啷……开始。”我大吼一声,“帅哥来也,各位将领统统受。”我把耳朵贴在地板上,开始探测各位躲藏者藏身的地方。这里是沙发,这里是桌子,这里是床,这里是房门……虽然我的眼睛被蒙上了,可是我根据伙伴们在房间里跑动的声音,我能够准确地判断出房间里的'各个部位。
“呀——”随着一声长长的哭腔,第一个落入“魔爪”竟然是号称“耗子”的立军。他平时玩起“瞎子抓人”的游戏,滑溜得像条泥鳅,可是,现在这条泥鳅被卡在桌子底下,只知道一个劲地往里缩,怎么能不落入我的“魔爪”呢?
挤在门后的是三个人,因为太挤了,竟然把门拱得震动起来,虽然声音不大,却逃不过我的“顺风耳”。衣柜里抓住一个,被窝里拉出一个,沙发后面挤出来一个,嘿嘿,还有一个藏在哪里呢?伙伴们都准备看我的笑话,认定我会“功亏一篑”,找不到最后一个。
“嗯,藏在床底下的那只耗子,自己爬出来吧。”我趴在地毯上嚷嚷。可是没有反应,难道是我听错了声音。不可能的,我在心里决断了,肯定是那只耗子抱着侥幸的心理,认为我是在虚张声势。我摸索着到门后找到扫帚,往床底下扫去。
“别,别……我,我出来。”哈哈,最后一条“小鱼”也落网了。我笑嘻嘻地拉下了红领巾,看到张挺灰头土脸地从床底下爬出来,头发上挂了几根蜘蛛网。
“怎么啦?大闹天宫吗?”爸爸推开房间的门一看,呆住了。
哈哈哈哈……我们都肆无忌惮地笑起来。
星期天是属于我们的日子,是快乐的日子。
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