Dr Know,
Our school has many rules.We have to dress uniform everyday,we can't eat at library and class,and we can't talk in class,we must finish our homework after school,we should talk in a polite way,we should greet teacher when we meet them.And we must keep the class clean everytime.
Yours
Emily
Dear Dr:
Know, I am fourteen years old. I am in the maturing age. However, I am smaller and shorter than my peers of the same age. Also my friends are all discussing about pubic hairs and menstrual cycle, but I still have not experience any of these. I am very trouble. Could you give me some sdvice .
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Dear Dr. Know,
I'm very glad to write to you. I have a lot of troubles these days. Every day I have a lot of homework to do at school. I don't enough time to sleep. I nearly have no time to do sports. My friends and I can hardly find time to talk, or play together. When I get back home from school, I'm not allowed to watch TV, surf the Internet or listen to my favourite music. I feel worried about them. I don't know what I should do. Could you please give me some sugestions?
Yours,
Li Ping
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
Deae Dr:
There are too many rules! At 6:00 a.m.,my mom says, "Get up now and make your bed!"After breakfast,my mom always says, "Don't leave the dirty dishes in the kitchen!"After that,I run to school becase I can't be late.At school,we more rules-- don't be noisy,don't eat in class,My ded says I can't piay basketball after school becase I must do my home homework.I can piay only on weekends. After dinner,I can't relax either.I must read a book before I can watch TV.But I have to go to bed before 10:00.Rules,rules,rules!
What can I do,Dr.Know?
Molly Brown,
New York
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参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
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