放暑假了,爸爸计划着带我们进行一次旅行。他问我喜欢到什么样的地方玩,我脱口而出:“有大海的地方!周未,爸爸回来了,说:“明天,我们去宁波玩吧!我问:“那儿有大海吗?“有啊,爸爸说。我高兴地跳了起来,“好啊,好啊!终于可以出去玩喽!可以到海边游泳了!
第二天早上,我们收拾好旅游用品,有防晒衣,有防虫喷雾,当然少不了游泳装备啦。我们高高兴兴地出发了。下午一点多钟,我们到了宁波。我们决定先到海边玩。
这时的海面非常美,一望无际的大海碧波荡漾,天上的朵朵白云就像漂浮在海面上似的,海风吹过,海浪裹着白云不断地向海边涌来,我多么想立即跳入大海捧上一朵洁白洁白的云啊!在更衣室里换好泳衣,我和弟弟就迫不及待地跳下海去游泳。我们像一条鱼儿,在大海里尽情地游玩。我把刚学会的.蛙泳,仰游,自由泳都用上了。海浪一个接一个地涌来,一会儿把我推上峰顶,一会儿又把我打入谷底,有趣极了。真是“不管风吹浪打,胜似闲庭信步!
游泳游累了,我们来到沙滩上。我和弟弟一起挖沙坑,垒沙堡。这时,我看见一片沙地上冒出了一个个水泡泡,用手一掏,竟然掏出了一个紫色的小海贝来,把我高兴坏了。于是,我们拿着水桶又开始捡贝壳。一分钟过去了,五钟过去了,十分钟过去了……我们捡了半桶海螺,海贝和五彩斑斓贝壳。我们玩得十分开心。转眼间,太阳就要落山了,妈妈和爸爸给我们拍了照片留作纪念。
我们高兴地回到了宾馆。晚上,我兴奋得睡不着觉,一闭上眼睛就仿佛躺在蔚蓝色的大海上,海浪把我荡来荡去……我做了一个奇怪的梦,梦到我已经长大了,正在探索大海深处的秘密。
这次旅游让我难忘!
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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最令我自豪的,是踏上书法之旅的串串“脚印”。我从四年级开始学习软笔书法,第一次看到教室里展示的或清新娟秀或者遒劲有力的书法作品,我就被深深吸引住了,沉醉在墨香之中,幻想着有一天我也能够写出这样的作品。从此,我每天都要凝神写字,它已经融入了我的生活,成为我生活的一部分。慢慢地,我的字越写越好,在学校里也算是小有名气。
这一天,学校迎接教育局视察,需要一位同学到主席台跟教育局的领导一起写书法。老师们正在发愁:谁能胜任呢?
我正巧路过,张老师一瞅见我,就仿佛看到了救星一般!他一边向其他老师夸赞我的书法,一边推荐我在主席台上露一手。被叫住的我一头雾水,过了一会儿,我才反应过来,原来让我去“主席台”上去与教育局领导写字啊!我犹豫了一下,还是同意了。
视察那天,整个校园彩旗招展,焕然一新。我站在主席台上,既兴奋又紧张,手心不停冒汗。调整好心情后,我便静静地等待教育局厅长的到来。厅长蔡老师一说开始吧,我就迫不及待地展示我的拿手好字----智永的'《真草千字文》。
智永写的字连贯、大气,仿佛一只准备起跑的猎豹,它们充满了韧劲。而我,就能把这股劲,淋漓尽致地表现出来。刚写完一个字,蔡老师便不由自主地点头夸赞:“写得真好!”此时此刻的我,信心倍增,写得更加用心了。身旁的摄影师、记者与吵杂的喧闹声似乎都离我很远,我沉浸在书法的世界里,如入无人之境,专心致志地写好每一个字。厅长蔡老师对我这份耐心和静心刮目相看,他竖起大拇指,赞赏地我:“你很有耐心,写出来的字也非常好!”作为奖励,厅长还亲自写了落款,盖上了他的私章呢!
消息像长了翅膀似的迅速传遍了整个校园,一到教室同学们就围着我问当时的情景,感觉个个羡慕又崇拜的样子。这一整天都让我沉浸在书法给我带来的快乐中!
书法这个“脚印”,让我难忘,让我快乐!
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