雅思小作文地图万能模板(雅思作文万能结尾模板)

雅思小作文地图万能模板(雅思作文万能结尾模板)

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雅思小作文地图万能模板(雅思作文万能结尾模板)

雅思小作文地图万能模板【一】

所谓议论文,最关键之处在于论述得当。支持句应使主题句更加令人信服,令考生的想法更加鲜明的呈现在考官面前。然而,中国考生在论述时往往存在一些误区:

雅思小作文地图万能模板【二】

Most female consumers shop unwisely and spend too much money.

这里的shop and spend就是复合谓语结构,但是到目前为止,这仍旧是一个简单句,我们继续丰富它。

雅思小作文地图万能模板【三】

2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?

3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?

4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.

7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.

雅思小作文地图万能模板【四】

选好词汇之后,就选择搭配,但搭配的组合一定要与自己的观点相符:

influences我们通常都和positive / negative 搭配;advertisements也可以分为commercials和non-profit adverts;people可以用the general public替代,所以句子如下:

Commercials and non-profit adverts have both positive and negative influences on the general public.

这就是将简单句进行华丽变身的方法啦~最后环球君要给大家出个题目哦!

本周考题

Community service is helpful for both students and society.

这句话老师的扩句版本为

Establishing community service as a compulsory part in high school education is not only helpful for students but also meaningful for whole society.

雅思小作文地图万能模板【五】

太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹,缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。

例:A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项调查显示。。。)

"65%"让文章看起来有些假,有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。

雅思小作文地图万能模板【六】

虽然来源于身边社会,但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮,拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到,只需要把事件中某一个具体的你,我,他,变成是客观群体,比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。

举例的常见表达方式:

for example,/for instance,(后加句子)

Such as/ like      (后加词组)

Take... as an example,

A case in point is that......

其次,在举例时还应注意尺度。

1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称,为了加强客观性,应将人称写成第三人称。

改正:Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.(那些养宠物,例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感)

2. 应避免引用一项调查研究,并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉,用含糊的方法表示。

改正:There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. (大量证据表明。。。)

3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家,尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。

改正:Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.(在全世界,许多孩子在屏幕前待太久,导致了他们的视力减弱。

“全世界”的表达方式:around the world, all over the world, across the globe

【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.

雅思小作文地图万能模板【七】

这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神,总是在主旨周围绕圈子,不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病,看似八九不离十,却总也不愿把话点破,让考官怎能不又急又气。

在所有的扩展方式之中,因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由,再扩展其结果,这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前,若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”,难免缺乏说服力,但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟,若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”,那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展,点头认同。由此可见,善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼,事半功倍。

引出原因的表达方式主要有:Because../Since.../As....

引出结果的表达方式主要有:so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..

【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.

【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...

雅思小作文地图万能模板【八】

IT产业,经过数十年的发展,在存储运算和运输能力上都已经有了几何级的,则升级。如本书所言,人工智能要在商业领域取得巨大的成功,就必须建立强大而复杂的智能系统,只需要四个基础条件。如今已经一一具备:第一个条件数百万倍的计算能力,条件更高级的算法,第三个万物互联的海量数据,第四个高容量大带宽的通信管道。

人工智能海啸,之所以把人工智能底座和战争是因为它相对于传统互联网发动的常规战争而言,无论是从企业竞争力的角度还是从社会影响力的角度,都将带来好几个量级的颠覆效应。事实上,阿尔法go战胜李世石只是人工智能海啸的第一波海啸,最厉害的地方往往是第二波第三波很快人工智能云计算大数据和物联网等技术的融合与发展,就会将互联网技术的竞争带入全新的高度。

不过,面对这场核战争,我们无需恐惧,甚至可以说中国企业在某些方面反而有特定的优势,比如说我们有巨大的互联网用户群,而庞大的人口基数又为我们提供了海量的数据。在这场人工智能时代的核战争中,首先是人才的竞争。因此,在培养吸收顶尖人才方面中国企业提出了比以往更加高的要求。其次,发展人工智能技术,开放与协作比以前任何时候都显得更加重要,我们要努力实现多种数据源之间的'合作,创建自由与实相讨论环境,实现网络和数据的一体化。

世界已经进入一个全新的智能时代,在这个时代世界将发生巨大的改变。历史上,人类大概只有在工业革命时期才会经历过类似的变化,政府企业都将面临全新的挑战,因此需要快速的学习和适应,并齐心合力创造全新的人工智能商业生态,这将会决定中国在人工智能领域的崛起与壮大。另一方面,目前国外人工智能领域的领跑者都是谷歌脸谱网亚马逊这样的庞大庞然大物,每一个都拥有高达数百亿上千亿的美金市值的公司,我们稍不小心机会就将转瞬即逝。

危险和危机最大的不同在于前者隐含可能的灾害,后者暗喻潜在的契机,但是没有危险,伤也不会做出颠覆性的变革。一场轰轰烈烈的人工智能领域认知商业革命已经开启。

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