英语作文当中容易出现的问题(英语作文普遍存在的问题)

英语作文当中容易出现的问题(英语作文普遍存在的问题)

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英语作文当中容易出现的问题(英语作文普遍存在的问题)

英语作文当中容易出现的问题【一】

复旦附中语文特级教师黄玉峰说,有的阅卷老师在打分时也是顾虑重重,打低了或打高了,都生怕复评人认为自己的水平不够,连作文的好坏也看不出,所以一般都是给个中间分数,高考作文指导《高考作文判分为何跌宕不定》。

10多万份作文,要求100多名老师在7天里判完卷,工作量很大,极个别作文被看走眼,也在情理之中。上师大附中语文特级教师彭世强说,为了适合应试的功利,有的老师就会传授一些所谓的 高考作文“技巧”,比如要求考生开头与结尾一定要写得精彩,最好多用排比句,多用名人警句等。如此教法,简直是把有有肉的作文,变成了纯粹的'技巧性机械训练。

英语作文当中容易出现的问题【二】

对那篇已经见诸媒体的被提高到64分的作文,黄玉峰老师则提出了自己的看法,认为如果中学生们模仿该文的文体和立意,以为这样的“创新”就能在高考中得高分,这就很有可能形成误导,因为高考作文毕竟不是文艺创作,更注重考查的是学生对社会生活的辨析能力和逻辑思维能力。

而彭世强老师也无奈地说,高考毕竟要求多拿分数,不能太冒险,对于平时写作水平处于中等以下的同学来说,最好不要轻易地搞所谓的“创新”,对于写作基础较好的同学来说,可以在角度、结构上赋予点新意,但也不能太标新立异,要能让阅卷老师在短时间内看得下去,说得直白一点,考生作文中有好的东西,要善于主动“喂”给阅卷老师。

英语作文当中容易出现的问题【三】

“我不喜欢弟弟或妹妹,因为那样爸爸妈妈就不会再爱我……”最近上网总能看到类似于二胎这样的话题。这个政策是去年新颁布的,瞬间引起了社会各界的更关注,它已成为我们备考高考作文的话题之一。

此政策在网络和微信上引发了热议(become a sensation on the Internet and We Chat。不少网友认为"00后"(children born after 2000太自私,即使是同意父母生二胎的`孩子,在有了弟弟妹妹后脾气也会变坏。但也有不少人认为,这仅仅是教育方式的问题而已(the problem lies in education。如青岛一所小学的一群四年级学生日前成立了"反弟弟妹妹联盟",说服父母不要生二胎。(A group of fourth-graders at an elementary school in Qingdao formed an "anti-siblings alliance" in an effort to persuade their parents not to have a second child.该校一名老师最近发现,班里有八个孩子常聚在一起窃窃私语,讨论这件事(hold secret meetings to discuss the issue。这些学生担心弟弟妹妹会分走自己独享的父母宠爱(steal their parents' exclusive love。

有话题就会有相关词汇,这就要求大家在平常的学习中多多积累,这样到用了时候心中自然就有丘壑。同时也可以扩充相关词汇,如:流动人口mobile population;独生子女家庭only child family;生育时间表birth time schedule;备孕plan for pregnancy。

二胎政策实施过程中,也给社会带来了一定的影响。这一部分探讨也可以作为作文的写作素材。如全面二孩政策(universal two-child policy出台后,中国内地主要城市三居室或四居室的大户型房子(large three or four-bedroom homes销量攀升。北京和上海等城市的很多夫妇正在搜寻居住环境更佳的大房子(hunt for larger homes with a better environment,为家里添丁加口早做准备。据估计,新的生育政策将使未来5年内多增加1700万新生儿(extra 17m babies being born within the next five years。

英语作文当中容易出现的问题【四】

st On January 2016, our country started to carry out two-child policy. It is good

and right for the development of our country now, because our country need more young workers. Many parents also want to have one more child. Althouth they may have some difficulties in affording another child’s life, education and so on, they will have another child to be with them. As for me, the only child in my family, I want to have a sister or a brother. Not only can we share happiness, but also we can help each other in our daily life.

2016年1月,我国开始实施的二胎政策。它是好的

现在对我们国家的发展,因为我们的国家需要更多的年轻工人。许多家长也想要一个孩子。虽然他们可能有困难提供另一个孩子的生活,教育等等,他们会有另一个孩子。至于我,我家里唯一的孩子,我想有一个姐姐或者哥哥。不仅我们能分享快乐,而且在我们的日常生活中我们可以互相帮助。 

1.二胎英文看图作文

2.二胎英语看图作文

3.大学二胎英文看图作文

英语作文当中容易出现的问题【五】

资深高考语文阅卷人、华东师大中文系教授王光祖坦承,由于作文阅卷主观性很强,就像做菜肴,各人的口味也不尽相同,所以每年都会有上千篇作文由于初评意见不一,被提交到阅卷中心组复议,改高改低的情况十分普遍。以今年为例,有篇作文初评时第一位老师判了20分,第二位老师给了43分,结果中心组反复阅读后,给出了64分的高分。而另一篇作文初评是70分,但中心组老师复评时一致认为,该文华而不实,脂粉气太浓,结果改到了60分以下。

英语作文当中容易出现的问题【六】

Emerging from the cartoon is an eye-catching scene that the parents are willing to have a second child, while their only child do not agree because of his worry that he doesn't want to have another child, even his own sibling, share toys with him. Simple as it is, the symbolic meaning revealed is profound and thought-provoking.

We are supposed to place our attention on, instead of its funny appearance, the implied meaning of the cartoon: as the overall second-child policy expands throughout China, some only children are so selfish that they cannot accept the second child in their family. What can account for this undesirable situation? For one thing, they, as the only child at home all the time, have no awareness of sharing what they like with others due to the fact that all the family members give their love to the only child. As a result, when faced with the problem of whether they are willing to have a sibling, their first response is to refuse it. For another reason, some couples are eager to have a second child as soon as possible, which makes them neglect to communicate with their only child to let them realize the advantage of having a sibling companion in their childhood.

From what has been discussed above, it's safe for me to conclude that it is urgent to take some immediate and effective measures. What I recommend is that parents should let child know the importance of sharing with others, which is beneficial for them in future life. In addition, it's better for parents to have more communication with their only child once they want to have a second child.

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