my star 英语作文【一】
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
my star 英语作文【二】
每个孩子心中都有一个偶像。他们追逐着明星，梦想着成为其中的一员。看看那些年轻漂亮偶像，而且还有很多粉丝的喜爱，所以我梦想成为明星。如果我是明星，首先，我可以赚很多钱。有了这些钱，我可以让我的父母过上更好的`生活，回报他们的爱。最令人兴奋的是还会拥有很多一直支持我的粉丝。我能看到我的才华，我为自己感到骄傲。但是成为明星意味着失去了陪伴家人的时间。
