英语作文时态错误扣几分高中【一】
In everybody’s eyes, I am a good girl, because I make the good marks in the exams and help my parents to do things. Unlike other students, who will go against their parents, I follow my parents’ words. I don’t think that to do something goes against the adults is the wise choice, but I do want to do something new. Recently, I want to cut my hair and make the short style. My mother doesn't agree with me, because she thinks a girl should have the long hair. This time, I insist on my idea. Finally, she supports me. Trying something new makes me feel happy and be myself. The short hair makes me look like a cool boy and I like this style. My friends admire me to have the courage to change my image.
在大家眼中，我就是一个好女孩，因为我考试成绩好，还帮助父母做事。不像其他学生，会和父母作对，我很听父母的话。我认为做一些违背大人们的.事情是不明智的选择，但我想做一些创新。最近，我想把我的头发剪了，留短发。我妈妈不同意我的做法，因为她认为一个女孩就应该留长头发。这一次，我坚持我的想法。最后，她支持了我。尝试新事物让我感到预约，做我自己。短发使我看起来像一个很酷的男孩，但是我喜欢这种风格。我的朋友都羡慕我有勇气去改变自己的形象。
英语作文时态错误扣几分高中【二】
As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption.
Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.
I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service.
Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods.
Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
作为消费信息的主要渠道，评级是我们消费中购物的有效信息来源。有趣的是，同样的评级可能对不同的消费者产生不同的影响。
我倾向于咨询消费评级无论我购买。首先，较高的评级意味着产品质量的提高，或更好的服务。
根据收视率，我买了我心爱的背包，看了有趣的电影，尝到了美味的食物。
其次，收视率可以节省时间作出决定，在购物。例如，有大量的参考书，我经常用于选择。在这种情况下，根据收视率买书既方便又经济。
毫无疑问，完全依靠消费的收视率是不明智的。评级的利弊往往密切相关。有必要对收视率持客观态度。
英语作文时态错误扣几分高中【三】
At the coming of the new year, it is also the time for one of the biggest tennis matches, the Australian Open. Since Li Na won her second grand slam here, more Chinese people fall in love with tennis. One of the popular male players, Roger Federer, who is more than 30, but he is still in the top level. The fans hope their hero can enjoy the match and they didn’t expect the next grand slam. But Roger made it happen again. He defeated his great rival, Nadal and won Australian Open. The world was cheering for him, and they witnessed this great man to make his career successful at the old age. If we have dreams, it is never too late to pursue. People always take the age as the excuse, actually, they lack of persistence, which differs them from successful men.
在新年到来之时，也是最盛大网球比赛之一的澳大利亚网球公开赛的时间。自从李娜赢得了她的第二个大满贯，越来越多的中国人爱上了网球。其中受欢迎的男球员，罗杰费德勒，虽然他已经年过30岁了，但他仍在顶尖水平。球迷们希望他们的英雄享受比赛就好了，不敢奢望下一个大满贯。但是罗杰做到了，他击败了他的对手，纳达尔，赢得澳大利亚公开赛。世界都为他欢呼，他们见证了这个伟大的英雄在晚年再次取得事业的成功。如果我们有梦想，永远都不会太迟。人们总是以年龄为借口，实际上，他们只是缺乏坚持，这就是他们和成功人士的区别。
英语作文时态错误扣几分高中【四】
For thousands of years， animals have trodden a slow path， their spirits together with the body。 But our human being\'s transportation is too fast。 The body moves but the soul is left behind。 We try to free ourselves in convenience， but we only imprison the soul。 Since we invented how to count hours， we do everything to short the time， short the deadline。 But the time saved can\'t be shorten。 Nowadays， we spend lots of time staying in front of a TV just changing the channels， while we have no time to talk with a good friend or play with our family。 We have plenty of time to search old news on the internet， while we hardly think about our life。 In the end， the only thing apparent is our loneliness。
Take your time， please。 Try to follow the natural steps and have your own clock。 Try to share your time with everybody you love， share your mind， your happiness and sadness。 Try to read the world we live in， do not only catch a quick glimpse at the society。
Someday， when we know how to spend every second in our life， we can then live our own life。
