好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
这天,小猴子再次下山。它吸取了上次的教训,这次它自己身上带了个袋子,方便装东西。
它走到一棵苹果树下,看见树上的苹果又大又红,非常高兴。它去摘了大苹果,把苹果放到袋子里,拿着苹果高高兴兴地往前走。走着走着,它到了一片南瓜地里,它看到橘色的南瓜,开心地旋转起来。它立刻摘了一个南瓜放到袋子里,兴高采烈地往回家的路上走去,脸上露出了快乐的笑容。
小猴子第1次下山,两手空空的回到了家,它非常不高兴,这次小猴子下山吸取了教训,他准备下山拿个篮子,这次就不会弄丢了,第2天小猴子兴高采烈的下山了,它走到苹果树下,看见苹果又圆又红,馋的小猴直流口水,就摘了几个苹果放到篮子里,它走着走着来到一棵香蕉树下,看到一串串黄澄澄的香蕉挂在树上,像弯弯的小船,于是又摘下一串香蕉放进篮子里,小猴子背起篮子往前走,走到一棵葡萄树下,一串串黑色的葡萄像小朋友的眼睛,他忍不住又摘下一串串葡萄,不一会儿的功夫,小猴子收获满满。他背着篮子准备回家,突然看到了一只小白兔蹦蹦跳跳的从这里路过,于是它就想抓到那只小兔,这回它变聪明了,它从篮子里拿了一根香蕉,一颗苹果给小兔吃,最后他俩成为了好朋友,一起高高兴兴地回家啦。
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