Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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未来的笔很奇特,和现在的笔可不大相似。
比如你的铅笔经常会折断,但未来的笔可不会。因为它是用橡胶造成的包着笔尖。
还有的时候你的手长期写字,会把手磨出一个包,奇异的未来的笔可不会像那样。因为它是用柔软、舒服、富有弹性的塑料膜造成的。
我造成的未来笔不仅仅只有这些,还有一种笔的名字叫批改通。这种笔的作用很多。它可以检查学生的作业是否完成作业,不过得把笔放在作业本上如果有,批改通便会响声音,并且批改通伸出两面三只用铁做的小手,把没有完成作业的人的本从里面拿出来。这样就可以让学生按时写作业。
我造的未来的笔是不是很适合你呀!
“快,穿上防晒衣,再喝一口水!炎炎夏日中,那一滴滴落下的汗珠是心与心的共鸣,爱与爱的默契,一股暖流在心底缓缓流淌……翻开记忆发黄的扉页,成长路上,有你相伴,真好!
记得那是烈日炎炎的暑假,热浪扑卷而来。平日里在太阳底下泛着绿光的柳树,此时已无精打采。四周的蝉声此起彼伏,仿佛也在埋怨着这夏日的燥热。就在这个正阳当天的中午,我要去上辅导班。
辅导班离家有三里多远,我未满十二周岁,禁止骑自行车上路,只好让年过花甲的奶奶骑自行车带我上辅导班。
吃过中饭,奶奶便带着我上路了。“吱嘎——吱嘎——的自行车在空荡荡的路上回响,老旧生锈的自行车承载着我们两个人艰难地前行。
“奶奶,你带着九十多斤的我一定很累吧?我关心地问道。
“是啊,你九十多斤当然累呀!不过只要你认真读书,再苦再累,付出再多,我也愿意!奶奶气喘吁吁地说,“快,你穿上防晒衣,再喝口水,别晒红了脸,又渴了自己!
“哦。我点了点头。奶奶仍在不停地踩着踏板,上身随着每一次用力蹬踏而左右晃动着。这时,我发现奶奶的呼吸声更沉重了,原来奶奶正在骑一个比较陡的上坡,我连忙说:“奶奶,我下来走一会儿吧。
“没事!奶奶下了自行车,摆摆手道,“我下来推自行车会省力一点,你不用下来了,省得累着。
我坐在自行车上,看着奶奶的侧颜,她顶着一头花白的头发,额头上密密麻麻的汗珠时不时化为一颗颗豆大的`珠子流落下来,脸上布满了皱纹,此时此刻,我的眼睛刷的一下红了:从小到大,我的爸爸妈妈常年在外,是奶奶帮我一手带大。奶奶为我们这个家付出了多少辛酸的汗水。奶奶,有你真好!
这个上坡终于爬完了,过了桥就是下坡,骑下坡就舒服多了,迎面而来的风,体贴地将奶奶头上的汗珠拭去几分。
过了二十分钟,终于到了辅导班,我下了车,看着奶奶在风中凌乱的头发,瞧看奶奶在烈日中流下的汗珠,对奶奶轻轻说了句:“奶奶有你真好!奶奶听了我的话,笑了,笑得像一朵菊花,那么美,那么自然。
花开花落,细水长流,不经意间,几度春秋早已从眼前翩然而逝。但是,我忘不了您的汗水,您的笑颜。奶奶,有你真好!
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