我重要的日子英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我重要的日子英语作文五年级【二】
在校医务室里，医生诊断说我是阑尾炎，所以肚子痛，要让我挂吊针。我一听就知道自己的老毛病又复发了，就向班主任请了假回家了。到了家，妈妈带我到乡村医院看看，医生也没有什么好办法，说挂一个星期的吊针吧。看到这种情况，妈妈就劝我说，经常输液吃药也不是长法，干脆动手术也就不再受罪了。我同意了，就又向老师请了两个星期的假，坐了120的车到了大医院。
交过了押金，医生把我领进了手术室，不一会我就朦朦胧胧的睡着了。当我醒来时，医生用担架车把我从手术室里推了出来。就听妈妈迷迷糊糊的问我怕不怕？我只记得睡意朦胧中妈妈眼圈红红的。我虽嘴里说不痛，但心里还感到像有只兔子在踹，而且手腕上的吊针冰凉得让人只想哭。但我还是忍住了。
麻药过后，我才感觉到刚才只是微微的痛，现在肚子可就越来越难受了。胃也在不停的反抗，因为我当时感觉没有不什么能吃到饭更重要的了。我已经四天没有吃进东西了。唉，也真的碰巧，我的15岁的生日也就是在这挨饿中的日子里，这怎么让人忘得了？
元旦刚过，我已经能健康快活的在教室里上课了。想想难忘的日子，我就更珍惜今天的美好时光。
我重要的日子英语作文五年级【三】
《离开雷锋的日子》讲了雷锋的战友乔安山的`故事。这部电影赚去了无数人的眼泪，太好看了。
一次出行，需要过一段窄窄的桥。于是雷锋下了车，为大家指挥倒车，楞因为车不小心撞到了桥边的木棍，木棍正巧倒在了雷锋头上，他栽在地上，因为出过多，昏迷过度，敬爱的雷锋叔叔还是牺牲了。在送往太平间的路上，司机乔安山上前，抱住雷锋大哭起来……一次，乔安山在路上看见一次事故，他助人为乐，可惜却被诬陷为事故引发者，最后还是警察为他洗清了冤。
还有他去送货物，开着开着，车在一片田里被卡住了，乔安山请了好几个老乡来帮助，可都不肯。一位小伙子真心地帮助了他，可货车实在太重了，搬不动，于是小伙子叫了许多们当地志愿都来帮忙。人多力量大，货车总算被拉了上来，他们助人为乐！
看完了它，我被深深地感动了，诬陷和帮助成了明显对比。雷锋同志，您的是光荣的，您牺牲后没有一点儿遗憾。今年是雷锋叔叔去世50周年，在这隆重的节日中，我向您学习，以助人为乐，作为自己最大的快乐，以雷锋叔叔作为自己的榜样！
