五年级英语我的一周的作文怎么写【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语我的一周的作文怎么写【二】
你好！
自从我注册了一个创网号后，每天我就拼命的发文，可是~，老天不饶人呀，63篇中只有6篇是精华啊！想起我的好朋友“宁静的夜晚”11篇作文中8篇精华。不是我说你，周周，又是你太偏心了，别人轻而易举的得到了一篇精华，而我，呜呜呜，费了大半天写的'一篇作文竟然、竟然是普通！恳切+恳求+真诚+真挚希望你们编辑部的工作人员能好好读读我的作文，给我评个精华吧！
每当我看见强力推荐里的作文上了杂志，我真的很嫉妒，为什么，为什么我就不能，我仍然能写出很好的作文。还有，我认为你、你偏心，那次我看见一个精华作文上了杂志，这且不说，我竟然看见有普通作文上了杂志，而且字数很少。我63篇作文，没有一片上杂志。如若不能让我的作文上杂志，那你也要给我几篇精华吧！我现在只能眼巴巴地看着别人的作文又是精华了，而我却丝毫没变。每当我听到别人拿炫耀的语气，我就觉得自己十分渺小，而他们是多么的庞大。我十分郑重+庄重+凝重的求你们给篇精华吧！周周啊！我有时也很羡慕你，因为你有10几篇作文上了杂志，并且是“钻石文豪”。我郁闷，我写的那么好的作文，你们却只给我个普通，我觉得写得一般的作文，你们竟给我个精华，希望你能给我个答复。
周周，你知道吗？我现在加入了七色花文学社，但是，由于我只有6篇精华，暂时没有房间，你可见一篇精华对我来说多么重要，施舍一篇精华吧。我现在想一个乞丐，而你是一个大富翁，我要求你给我一点点好处，你只要挥手一撒，就可以满足我这小小的心愿。我们亲爱+可爱+亲密+善良+慈祥+……的周周，我可怜啊！
祝：
身体健康、万事如意
五年级英语我的一周的作文怎么写【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级英语我的一周的作文怎么写【四】
周六3月3日大风
早上到学校报到，新的一学期就这样静静地拉开了序幕，准备好奋斗吧！望着窗外平静的天空，感受着室内宜人的温度，我的心里充满了信心。
不料下午，老天爷说变就变，天空中乌云密布，风也呼呼刮了起来。但在家里还不觉得太冷。
可当晚上我去上古筝课时，风却变本加厉了。一件外套加一件T—shirt根本无法抵御狂风的袭击，直冷得我瑟瑟发抖。再看看街上的行人，也在寒风中艰难行走。我赶紧裹紧了衣服，也许明天不会这么冷吧，但愿如此！
3月4日周日大风
今天也很冷啊！风好象更厉害了。明天就要上学了，希望能天气晴朗，求个好兆头吧！
3月5日周一有一点风
啊！今天天气果然好了一点，开学第一天，不要迟到了。不过早上出门时春寒料峭，还是把我冻得够呛。考虑一下吧！加不加衣服呢？
3月6日星期二无风但很冷
经过一番深思熟虑，我最终决定不加衣服。但结果就是：体育课跑步的时候，我的腿都冻木了，最后居然长了疹子。可怜的萱昭啊！
下午在风的威逼利诱下，我换了一条厚点的裤子。可惋惜，太迟了。
还是多穿点的好啊！
3月7日星期三
今天又刮起了风，温度也降低了。据说还会继续冷下去的。唉，还没去看花呢。
3月8日星期四风
今天是妇女节，女老师都走了。窗外继续刮风，我才不怕你啊，吹吧，吹吧。风，来的.再猛裂一点吧。
3月9日星期五
一个星期就要完了，风也刮得差不多了，下午天气还有好转的迹象。做大扫除真痛快，他们都听我的，嘿嘿！
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后记：昨天又看了一遍《阿甘正传》里那个羽毛飘飞的经典镜头，所以有些模仿的痕迹。人生总是有许多起伏，就像这一周的风一样（其实这周天气不完全跟我写的一样，为了写作，就稍有改动）也许会跌倒，也许会遇到大风大浪，但只要能勇敢的去面对这一切，去克服困难。我相信，是可以获得成功的。
五年级英语我的一周的作文怎么写【五】
Heiio,my name is Jim.I'm tweive years old.In the morning,I get up at six o'clock.I eat breakfast at six fifteen.After breakfast,I go to school.
Shool starts at seven o'clock.In the morning,I have four class.I eat lunch at twenty o'clock.In the afternoon,I have four class too.
I go to school at around six o'clock.I eat dinner at six thirty.After lunch,I do my homework.I go to bed at nine o'clock.
