四级作文参观城市（四级介绍自己家乡的作文模板） - 作文仓库

四级作文参观城市【一】

Dear Mary,

You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn't afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people's clothes. The followings are my ideas:

Firstly, you shouldn't put too much emphasis on physical appearance.

Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.

Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.

Since your family can't provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.

I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.

Yours,

Anne

四级作文参观城市【二】

Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.

So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.

In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.

首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。

第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….

第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….

第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….

其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。

段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。

统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。

连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。

完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。

再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。

1. It has been shown that … …

类似句型：It is known to us that … …

It is said that … …

It is reported that … …

It is controversial that … …

2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。

3. enable v. 使…能够

I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.

4. in that = because

表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：

The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.

此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：

Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。

最后，提纯范文“措辞”。

1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。

2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的

形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions

a multitude of

a great deal of

a large amount of

plenty of

many a

3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。

I argue that … …

I maintain that … …

I claim that … …

I insist that … … = I think that … …

I hold that … …

I assert that … …

I assume that … …

4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的

hold negative view = hold opposite opinions

5. phenomenon n. 现象

social phenomenon 社会现象

natural phenomenon 自然现象

6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever

(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever

在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：

1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会

2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会

3. 我的看法

Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.

However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.

In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.

四级作文参观城市【三】

春天，万物复苏，小河水哗哗地顺流而下；活泼机灵的小鸟们在枝头喳喳地纵情歌唱；小草们神不知鬼不觉地从地下探出了脑袋，大地换上了绿色的新衣；小野花们争先恐后地展示着自己的美丽；一棵棵大树好像正在返老还童，抽出嫩黄色的新芽；。年迈的`凤凰木也紧跟着春天的步伐，吐出米粒大小的嫩叶，就像刚出生的婴儿那般娇嫩。

夏天，太阳像一个火炉似地炙烤着地面。凤凰木的叶子早已变成了深绿色，枝条也向四周扩展了许多，变成了一把绿色的大伞。当太阳透过茂密的树叶筛下一束束金光时，美丽的凤凰花绽开了一张张笑脸，好像给凤凰木披上了红色的霞衣。

秋天，凤凰树的叶子慢慢地变成了金黄色，在微风吹拂下纷纷飘落下来，给地面铺上了一层厚厚的金色地毯。课间十分钟，我和小伙伴们在凤凰树下尽情地玩耍、嬉闹，甭提有多高兴了。

冬天，刺骨的寒风从耳边呼呼地刮过，古老的凤凰木褪去了繁华，仿佛一个弯着腰、知识渊博的老学者，正在讲述着她一百多年来的沧桑岁月，并勉励我们克服各种困难、勤奋学习，成为对国家有贡献的人才。

这就是我们百年老校的百年古树---凤凰木。

四级作文参观城市【四】

Dear my father and mother,

This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.

During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.

You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.

With best wishes.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

四级作文参观城市【五】

广场的路四通八达，走近体育场一个光辉灿烂，气势磅礴正大门屹立在我面前，踏上台阶是一排精雕细刻的象棋石凳子，每颗相隔一米，上面分别刻着：卒，马，炮，象，士，将等三十二字。棋子摆放在硕大棋盘里，排列得整整齐齐，就像是一个个时刻准备战斗的战士。我走过去搬了下，不搬不知道，一搬吓一跳，这么重的石头是工人们搬过来的吗？不是，听爸爸说这些是吊机一个个吊过来的。凳子后面有几个栩栩入生的园林运动造形。它们分别摆着各种姿势，有的骑自行车，有的射击，还有的丢铅球等。一个个就像在参加比赛。

广场上成了孩子们嬉戏的游乐场所，游人川流不息，熙熙攘攘，有的照相留影，生怕这美好的回忆会流失，有的围着鲜艳的盆景花赞不绝口，有慕名而来的游客，望着巍山高大的建筑惊叹不已，还有老人带者小孩在这里三五成群的高谈阔论，有说有笑，享受着天伦之乐。广场侧面有许多的场官。有羽毛球场、篮球场、网球场、门球场等等......

我门穿过弯弯曲曲的小道，小道两旁青松翠柏，藤罗翠竹，给人一种幽雅娴静而又充满生机的感觉。走出小道，我们来到一个古声古色，雕梁画栋的格林美.记忆长廊。在曲折的长廊里有一排长长靠背椅，是供游客们休息的。这长廊的柱子是株红色的，顶是红色的琉璃瓦有六个角的，四角的与清朝官员戴的帽子很相仿，在绿树翠竹掩映下，长廊犹如一位热情的少女在欢迎我们的到来。坐在长廊中，欣赏着动听悦耳音乐，仿佛人在仙境中。长廊每间都雕刻着每一届省运会的精美浮雕。浮雕介绍了每届参会人数和前四名参赛团队，及举办地点十三届在我们荆门举行。从浮雕上记载着第一届参赛人员仅有七百六十多人到一届多达一万二千多人说明热爱体育的人越来越多。这也说明一个道理：民强则强国，我国繁荣昌盛。

走出长廊，在我们面前的是一座雄伟壮观的拱行索拉桥。桥面宽阔、两边有花坛。人行道显得气派又明亮。站在桥上看，桥下的河水静静地流淌。闪动着粼粼的水光，就好似闪动着千万只明亮的眼波凝视着秋天的秀色。这时随着河畔音乐响起了，河里的喷泉打破了河面的宁静。顿时河里的各式各样的喷泉热闹起来。喷泉时而高，时而矮。风车形的喷泉越转越快，很快形成了一个个美丽的圆弧。波浪式的喷泉也随着音乐的节拍一起一伏，就像大海里的波滔，一浪接一浪，显得美丽而壮观。圆弧网式的喷泉越喷越高最后水柱合成一块渐渐的泻落下来。形成了无数的'雨点，似烟若雾。在阳光的照射下湖面出现了一道七彩彩虹，为这美丽的湖面又增添了一道自然而又明亮的景观。

河边有一片沙滩，沙滩的路边上铺满了各种斑斓绚丽的卵石，白似琼玉，红如玛瑙。下面是一片平展的细沙，没有一块碎石，踩上去又松又软，就像踩在地毯上。那里人声鼎沸，人山人海。有的小孩在那里奔跑、追逐；有的小孩搬来挖掘机、推土车在这里建城堡，忙的不也乐乎；有的小孩带来小锹、沙桶，在这里挖沙坝，筑长城；有的小孩在沙滩里捡贝壳......沙滩上成了孩子们欢快的乐园。

在晚霞映照下，我依依不舍的离开了体育场运动公园。我为这美丽而充满生机勃勃的体育场运动公园而感到无比的自豪。

四级作文参观城市【六】

Dear all,

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.

It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.

Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.

Yours,

XXX

四级作文参观城市【七】

这次我们要去的地方是宜昌城市规划馆。宜昌城市规划馆给我们全面展示宜昌的“昨天、今天、明天”。并且，在宜昌城市规划馆中，还有一个巨大的模型。这个模型采用了虚拟实境、幻影成像等高科技手段，给我们呈现出了一场未来美丽的都市景观。在参观中，我逐渐了解了宜昌这么多年的变化：从矮平房到高楼大厦，从一个小小的城市走向国际。这些，让我感到惊叹不已，城市变化日异月新。城市规划展示馆已成为市民了解宜昌、展望未来、进行爱国主义教育的重要阵地；也是宜昌加强对外交往，促进国际间相互了解沟通的宣传窗口。经过这次参观，我还知道了，宜昌在一九三八年三月展开了宜昌大转运，并正式打响了长达四年的宜昌保卫战。并且，在宜昌还出现了许多历史名人。例如：团结使者王昭君、为人造福的'嫘祖、文学家欧阳修……等等。但是，令我印象最深刻的还是那位十分爱国的屈原。他用自己的证实了自己的清白，就像于谦在石灰吟中写的那句诗一样“粉身碎骨浑不怕，要留清白在人间。”

通过这次参观，我知道了，宜昌的未来是由我们来创造的，所以我们要努力学习创造更美好的未来。