中考英语作文的感受【一】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的\'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
中考英语作文的感受【二】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成\"总—分—总\"结构
中考英语作文的感受【三】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
中考英语作文的感受【四】
年味在大街小巷散逸，沁入我的液，正不自觉地在胸膛里快乐地跳动。
——题记
年味，一个惬心的字眼。年味是什么呢？我细细地去品味着，感受她那浓厚的乡间气息。年味是王安石的“千门万户曈曈日，总把新桃换旧符”万象更新的景象；年味是林伯渠的“通宵灯火人如织，一派歌声喜欲狂”热闹非凡的气氛；年味是范成大的“除夕更阑人不睡，厌禳钝滞迫新岁”其乐融融的气息……也许，这就叫年味吧！
在年的开端，人人都会为这喜庆的佳节书写下一个校标题，给自己生命的崭新日子一份心灵的承诺。一家人都团聚在家中，餐桌上摆满了丰盛的食物。大家边品尝着旧年里靠自己的双手取得的果实，边辞旧迎新。大人们总是有讲不完的话茬，小孩们总有吃不完的美味。而我也按奈不住内心的喜悦，多么希望用自己的眼睛，更重要的是一颗诚恳的心去发现年味儿，感受年味儿！
走在熙熙攘攘的五马街，望着络绎不绝的人，我略有所思。走进一家别具特色的饺子馆，店内座无虚席。一股股浓厚的饺子香味扑面而来，孤身坐在空余的一桌。不一会儿，热情的店员端上一盘热腾腾的饺子，旁边有些醋、香油等美味的佐料。店员还精心介绍道“饺子象征着团聚合欢，也有‘招财进宝’的含义……”，隔桌的吃客也津津有味地品味着，似乎饺子里包含着对来年的一种美好期盼。老老少少脸上笑意盎然，无忧无虑地感受着年味。最令我感动的是，他们还向我问了声“新年好”，那种友好的感觉让人感到如此的温馨，真可谓是“良言一句三冬暖”呀！但心中又有些无法讲述的悲伤和苍凉在心中回荡着，情不自禁地想起刚刚瘫倒在路边的乞丐，没有人来关心他，只有成群的苍蝇陪伴着他。新年之际人人都是合家团圆，而他只能把此当作一种“奢侈的”，并不是因为他心中年味越来越淡，他心里是非常想过年但找不着年味儿。因此，我觉得春节渐渐质变为一种具有内涵文化，但应让每个人都能得到享受，这样年的意蕴和风味才会遍布于社会！若这也是一种年味，那么它只让我感到丝毫的落寞与凄凉。
走出饺子馆，映入眼帘的是一家家的热闹店面。挂着喜庆的红灯笼，贴着洋气的年画海报，给温州平添了许多兴旺欢乐的喜庆气氛。一些店面已经开始紧张不絮地打扫，到处洋溢着欢喜的气氛。一些人也在购买新的衣裳，热情井喷。古语说的好：人靠衣装马靠鞍。人人都想让自己看上去更精神、生机。这样的话，新年的初一，人们都早早起来，穿上已买好最漂亮的衣服，打扮得整整齐齐，出门去走亲访友，相互拜年，恭祝来年大吉大利。
让我们告别过去，面向未来，感受年味儿！那浓浓的年味你感受到了吗？
