我的笔友为题写一篇英语作文(英语作文我的笔友40词)

我的笔友为题写一篇英语作文(英语作文我的笔友40词)

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我的笔友为题写一篇英语作文(英语作文我的笔友40词)

我的笔友为题写一篇英语作文【一】

Dear Jeff,

I'm Li Hua from Beijing I-Iongxing Middle School。 I'm very happy to learn that you're going to stay with my family while you're in Beijing。

While you are here, we'll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV。 You'll also have your own bathroom。 Our school is quite close to our home。 So we could go to school together by bike。 At noon we'll eat at the school dining hall。 I'm sure you'll like the delicious Chinese food there,and enjoy talking with friends over lunch。 Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon。 You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming。 It'll be a lot of fun。

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know。 We'll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience。

Best wishses !

Li Hua

给杰夫的一封信

亲爱的杰夫:

我叫李华,来自北京红星中学。听说你来北京将住在我家,我感到非常高兴。

当你来的时候,我们将为你提供一个属于你自己的房间,里面有一张床、一张桌子、一对椅子和一台电视机。你还有你自己的卫生间。我们的学校离我家不远,因此我们可以一块骑自行车去上学。中午我们可以在学校的餐厅里就餐。我相信你会喜欢那儿美味的中国食物。午饭期间你也可以和周围的朋友聊天。在我校,下午4点放学。放学后,你可以和同学们一块儿打球或去游泳,你将会玩得很开心。

如果你有一些问题和请求的话,请让我知道。我将尽力让你在北京度过一段愉快的时光。

祝万事如意!

李 华

我的笔友为题写一篇英语作文【二】

你好!

你的笔友多年了,我很高兴再次收到你的来信。遗憾的是,我没有看到你在过去几年的网上提交,我希望你可以拿起你的笔在网络上看到你的影子。

那么言归正传,你对我的评论,你在过去几年的写作和写作风格,提到了这封信,我愿意用尽我NuDun,给一些不成熟的看法。

第一次是在第六年级的时候,你写一篇文章,雪石”,我也是在那个时候关注你,而我的观点是“语言优美,但是缺乏线索”。我指出你的缺点,很高兴你可以改正,然后我们以前的错误我们以前不提,现在谈你的不足之处。

你经常向我抱怨“作文字数不够”“练笔小说人物单薄无力”,我想着重从以下两个方面与大家讨论,如果有不足或不到位,还请指出。

“作文字数不够”我认为这是写作所要解决的一个问题是特别容易,通常一个成分或是轻小说,有一个相对完整的故事,这个故事可大可小,但语言描述必须做到细致,有时你到一个高度概括的话语描述一件事反而会把这东西向的茫茫大雾使读者明白你想说些什么,有什么困难,或流水帐,然而话盲目的追求将好文章“深渊”。为了解决这一问题是思维的综合源,常提示有利于更紧凑的结构,本文的另一个例子是穿插“插叙”气氛或场景描述铺平道路,不仅可以让故事完整的逻辑性强,另一方面,在词的数量大幅度生长。

最重要的是说明的细节,在平时的作文里通常只有650个字加,没有盖,这一次可以穿插的细节描述,例如在描述他的母亲给你一杯牛奶,往往会扩大开放至少100字的.描述,发散思维的想法或回忆起当时的情景,如“母亲递过牛奶的神情”“牛奶的味道”“指尖感受到的温暖”“台灯灯光照在母亲脸上泛起的迷人光芒”“我口中的干渴和对牛奶的渴望”等等。

其次,是写作(尤其是轻小说)感觉很顺利“意识流”联想的使用方法穿插回到你平常的知识和现在相比,相似性或是特别突出的对比,或母亲递给他一杯牛奶,例如,你可以描述“我的心头涌上一股温暖”,但发散思维,也许会想更多的事情,如“孟子身上那件他的母亲为他临行密密缝的衣裳”“冬日的一缕温暖的阳光”,甚至相反,如“某些同学在学校对你的嘲讽刁难”“学习上或者是生活上的困境”等等,与“我的思维”系列效果更好。

“轻小说中人物形象单薄无力”第二点这里,当然,并不意味着你对她外表的服装描述多么英俊和美丽的花,有时觉得你过于注重外表的描述和坚决忽视自身的特点,只有这样塑造出来的人物只能“穿着奢华衣服的木头人”。

语言描述是非常重要的,只是片面的或没有说明的事却会使人物更加模糊的个人意见,市长陈怡选择“戏剧的人物形象更为生动,如“偌大一个上海我都进得去,我就不相信进不了这扇门!”,汉字语音自然是不言而喻的。

动作描写往往是与语言描写相结合,然而动作和性格的不符合性是一个大禁忌,动作往往决定人物,如:在一位女士手里拿着一本书放下杯子这一简单的动作描写,细节描写可以勾勒出来。

1、错过肘光靠椅子扶手,离开了她的前额,在第二行书聚焦视线,右手缓缓放下杯子,嘴里吐出几个色调:“真是可惜。”

2、一位女士左腿卷曲的右腿,手指快速敲击桌面,在第二行书聚焦视线,右手食指和中指力矩和杯子碰到桌子,口吐出内心的愤怒:“搞什么!”

因为时间,如果没有明白,请联系我,我愿意帮助你。

我的笔友为题写一篇英语作文【三】

Dear friend,

I’m Sweet He, very glad to write letter to you! I hope we can make friends with each other. I’m 19 years old and my sign of the Zodiac is dog. How old are you? My hometown is a fascinating palace, which is located in the north of china. My hometown, Shan xi, is famous for its abundant coal resources. Beijing is my second hometown; I will study here four years at least. Beijing is the capital of China, which has rich cultural heritage. Where is your hometown? And how about your hometown?

I’m an outgoing and friendly girl, in fact , I’m crazy sometimes. I have lot’s of habits, such as singing, dancing, running, playing badminton, and so on. What kinds of sports do you like?I’m a house female and I like watching Korean dramas and comedy movie. What kinds of movie do you like?Thriller, action or comedy? I think pink is the most beautiful color in the world, and I hope I can have a house in the future, which is decorated by pink things. Can you imagine the scene? What’s your favorite color? And do you have a dream about future?

That’s all about mine. I’m eager to know about you. Please write to me soon and reply my questions which are referred to in the letter. Thank you!

Yours

我的笔友为题写一篇英语作文【四】

Dear Jack:

I am a student, in jinjiang China. My English name is Diana. I am a girl. I'm thirteen years old. I'm in class 1 grade 7. I have a round face, a wide mouth, a small nose and a pair of big eyes. My hair is black and long. My favorite flower is rose, because it is very beautiful and fragrant. My favorite country is England, so I want to visit it. I like to drink afternoon tea, cake is my favorite food. I like reading books, it gives me happiness. My favorite book is "Anne of green gables", it is very good. What about you, I think you are very lovely. Would you like to visit me?

Yours,

Diana

我的笔友为题写一篇英语作文【五】

你好!我是你的笔友龚xx,已经两年没见面了!我的家乡在南京,南京有美丽的玄武湖,壮观的中山陵,还有大名远扬的夫子庙,秦淮河都在南京!欢迎你到南京来玩!

如果你到南京来玩,最好是去玄武湖!如果你能春天来,那是再好不过了。一到春天,玄武湖公园里的花儿竞相开放,芳香怡人。金黄的迎春花开了、粉红的`桃花开了、雪白的梨花开了,远远望去,迎春花黄得似金,桃花粉得似霞,梨花白得如雪,好似春姑娘编织的云锦!蜜蜂和蝴蝶飞来飞去,各种鸟儿婉转歌唱,让人流连忘返。

如果你能春天来,那就太棒了!春天的玄武湖湖面平静,就像一面没有打磨过的铜镜,正如大诗人刘禹锡在诗中所说“潭面无风镜未磨”。湖水把蓝天、绿树、红花倒映在水中,显得十分和谐!柳树的枝条长出了嫩绿的叶子,对着湖水美滋滋的照镜子。所有的树木都穿上了绿色的外套。

春天的早晨,公园里有许多老人在锻炼身体、散步。到了下午,尤其是礼拜天,这里便是咱们小朋友们的天地。我们可以在公园里放风筝、捉迷藏、玩耍嬉戏。

盼着你快点来!

祝你好好学习,天天向上!

你的笔友 龚xx

10.28

我的笔友为题写一篇英语作文【六】

hello.how have you been?

I have read magazine advertisement knowing you are hunting for some people who can be your pen-friends

firstly,please allow me to introduce myself.I am LiPing and I have a happy life with my parents in Shanghai.my father who is working for a big company is a legal adviser and my mother has retired.

I am working for an advertising company as advertising design.

My hobby is sports such as playing basketball,football,swimming and so on.I think that sports can not only lose your weight but also give you a good shape.I am fond of billiards other than that.

As far as i know one of your hobby is learning foreign languages.I could teach you to learn chinese if you will.

If only I could be accepted and be good friends with you.

good luck to you.

Yours sincerely

Li Ping

我的笔友为题写一篇英语作文【七】

Dear Linda,

亲爱的琳达,

I saw your name in a newspaper. You asked for pen pals in China. I am fifteen years old and I live in the city of Shenzhen. I am in my second year at No. 1 Middle School. You can see from my photograph that I have a big smile and long black hair.

My father is a worker and my mother is a doctor. I like stamps, music, movies and reading. I enjoy dancing and helping my uncle on the farm, too. I am also interested in your country. Please write to me soon.

Yours,

Li Jing

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