英文作文评分b【一】
Last year, I went to Guang Zhou in the summer vacation. I felt so excited, it took me about four hours to get there. In the daytime, the air was so stuffy and the sun was so hot, so my friends and I decided to take a rest in the hotel. When the sun almost got down, we started to go on the street, the first thing was to find something to eat. There were so many delicious snacks, we had no idea which to eat, so we planed to eat as much as we could. I found myself couldn’t stop eating, the food was tasted. After we finishing eating, we started to go shopping.Guang Zhou is famous for the foreign trade, its clothes are fashionable and cheap. We went to the shopping street, trying on all kinds of clothes, at last, we bought many clothes. This trip is so unforgettable to me.去年暑假，我去广州旅游。我感到很兴奋，我花了大约四个小时到那里。白天，空气很闷，太阳很大，所以我的朋友和我决定去旅馆休息。当太阳将要下山了，我们开始逛街，第一件事就是找东西吃。街上有很多美味的小吃，我们不知道吃什么好，因此我们计划尽可能多吃。我无法停止下来，食物太美味了。吃完以后，我们开始购物，广州的外贸很出名，衣服时尚，价格便宜。我们去了购物街，试了各种各样的衣服，最后，我们买了很多衣服。这趟旅程对我来说是很难忘的。
英文作文评分b【二】
In recent years, tourism has been popular and played an important role in our nation’s economic growth. However, I am afraid that if tourism develops over, it will bring harm to the environment and give rise to many problems.
There are a few reasons accounting for my views and I would like to list three of them. One of the examples is that a large number of woods and other plants were replaced by all kinds of accommodation facilities or scenic spots. That definitely breaks the ecological balance of these areas and destroys the natural beauty of the scenic spots. Worse still, more pressure has been placed environment protection in that many tourists left their garbage in the scenic spots. In addition, over-developed tourism will occupy large numbers of farmland and lead to the shortage of the land.
In a word, tourism will be harmful to our environment if it is over development. Thus, I do not advocate that we development tourism without considering the environment. And we should keep the balance between tourism development and environment protection so that we can achieve the sustainable development between our nation’s economy and the environment.
英文作文评分b【三】
This summer my sister and I follow my mother to travel to the United States, we went to the three cities and one island, San Francisco, Los Angeles, Las Vegas, and Hawaii.
Hawaii is my favorite, although only two days, but I went to the beach for several times, is the famous waikiki beach, listening to the tour guide said where the sand came from Australia, where the water is clear, the sand is very clean, when I was in the sea waves to see the small fish, I also into base sand castle on the sand beach, made apple mould sand, crabs, bottle gourd, the shape of a fish, I also want to go to the seaside.
英文作文评分b【四】
In recent years, tourism has developed rapidly in China. Many people believe that tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and we should try our best to promote tourism. But what these people fail to see is that tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment. As for me, I\'m firmly convinced that too much tourists bring harm to the environment.
The bad impact of tourism on the environment has mainly expressed itself in various ways. One way is the proceof exploiting a new scenic spot. In order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment. This proceusually breaks the ecological balance of the area. In some mountainous places, trees are being cut down to build hotels for others to see and explore the beauty of the mountains. Then land slides and mud-rock flows come up. Another way the development of tourism has damaged the environment occurs when tourists go to scenic spots. Some tourists don\'t have the awareneto protect the environment, and ignorantly throw their garbage here and there. Some people even kill the local wildlife to eat, which badly damages the balance of the natural environment.
It is wrong to sacrifice the environment for the growth of tourism. We must keep in mind that too much tourists bring harm to the environment. We need to find a balance between satisfying the needs of tourists and reducing to a minimum the pollution they cause.
Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? Tourism has developed by leaps and bounds in the past de
Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? Tourism has developed by leaps and bounds in the past decades in the whole world. Therefore, the issue of whether the tourism will bring harm to the environment is becoming a matter of concern. As for me, I hold that the tourism does more harm than good to the world. In the first place, the more places we travel to , the more pressure will be added to the environment. Take Dunhuang as an example, the greatest scourge these days comes from the tourists who swarm here by the busload , bring destructive amounts of carbon dioxide and moisture into the caves along with their eagernefor a glimpse of ages past . Secondly, It has become fashionable for travelers to drive a private car to the place they want to . In this case ,a large number of cars are mushroomed in the road and it cause twice as much as air pollution .At this speed ,we may live in a world which is full of dirty air instead of fresh air. In sum , although tourism is playing an indispensable we`d better try to limit role in the society , I still believe that its speed according to the harm that brings to the environment.
The world we live in is becoming more and more intolerable because of environmental destruction. Bird flu and Sars are two typical examples that environmental destruction may threaten our life. Besides, forest destruction , water and air pollution result in decrease of planting land and unpleasant weather.
Serious as the problem seems, we can come up with some measures to deal with it. First of all, the authorities should adopt the policy of \"sustainable development\", and laws concerning environmental protection should be put into effect and enforced strictly just as our government has been doing.
What\' s more, every citizen should realize the seriousneof the problem and make concerted efforts to protect our environment. In addition, planting trees helps improve and beautify the environment.
英文作文评分b【五】
st summer holiday, I took a trip to Yunnan. It is in the southern part of our country .It is really a very beautiful place grand mountains, clean rivers and kind people. Trees and flowers are seen everywhere. Every year there are lots and lots of visitors.Maybe you have heard about Shi Lin (stone forests. There are all kinds of strange stones. Some of the small stones look like graceful girls; and the big stones look like handsome men. Other stones look like cats, peafowls, double-edged swords, mice,
elephants and so on. Of all the stones, the stone like a beautiful girl in a legend is the most famous .Its name is A Shima.
I also went to Li Jiang. The roads in that city are just like the Eight Diagrams. Any road in the city goes to the center of Li Jiang. A river runs through the whole city. If you go along the river, you\'ll never get lost. There are many ethnic minority people in Yunnan. They are very cordial. And they all like singing and dancing. We danced with them around the campfire that night. I really had a good time.
I like the elephants and fruits there best. An elephant is even taller than me! I even mounted the elephant, though I was very afraid at first. But the elephant seemed very friendly. I took some photos with it. The fruits there are very fresh and delicious. They are very good for our health.
The trip to Yunnan impressed me GREatly. I will never forget it.
英文作文评分b【六】
一是“源波讨源”、“依文论文”。“源波讨源”即要求阅卷老师要充分明白手头的作文，是考生在特殊场合和有限时间里写的“急就章”，且中学生阅历有限，因此阅卷老师应根据中学生的实际情况来评阅，按照中学生的思路来理解，不能按成人的标准来进行评价。“依文论文”就是，阅卷老师要按照文章的体裁来充分理解文章，是什么体裁（议论、说明或记叙）就按什么体裁标准来评价，不能有个人的好恶。
二是“立足给分，不立足扣分”。刘教授说，一般老师往往喜欢对学生的文章“找问题”，但考虑到考生写的是“急就章”，所以阅卷老师应立足于尽量发现考生的“闪光点”，今年作文强调感情真挚，内容充实，文体符合。此外还鼓励考生的个性发展，“个性”就是“闪光点”，因此在发展等级分方面，只要涉及标答中的一点，就可给分，直至满10分。
三是“以宽容开放心态评阅”。刘教授说，今年强调老师要以宽容、开放心态评阅考生作文。凡是和话题沾边（所谓“进了门槛”）的作文，都不当作偏题处理，当然要宽严有度。此外，鼓励阅卷老师敢于给考生作文打满分，“满分作文允许有个别瑕疵存在”。
四是“通过阅卷起到一定导向作用”。刘教授说，高考作文评卷要体现导向作用，促进教育向素质教育发展。比如说，现在倡导作文应告别模式化，端正文风，内容与形式统一，摒弃华而不实的、空洞的.东西。今年作文强调是否体现了考生的独自的、真实的生活和情感体验，思维状态是否清晰、有序展现，是否有“我”在（即个性化）。刘教授还说，今年对作文十分重视“符合文体”这一点。因此，像那种追求形式华丽、文体怪异的文章，将不受欢迎，“非驴非马”（即文体不正）的文章，不可能得高分。
据刘教授介绍，今年高考语文评卷还将严格控制速度，每位老师每天只能评120份试卷，落实到每份作文上，阅卷时间平均在4．5分钟左右。以前有媒体曾报道高考作文评分“90秒钟定生”，这在我省是无稽之谈。
英文作文评分b【七】
Dear Headmaster,
I\'m writing to tell you about the discussion we\'ve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
Opinions on the question are pided as follows:70% of the students think that the school should organize the spring outing. They believe that the spring outing can make them enjoy the nature\'s beautiful scenery, which can broaden our vision and fill us with more knowledge. They also say that the air in the open fields is fresher. What\'s more, fresh air does a lot of good to our health.
On the other hand,30% don\'t like the idea of going out for a spring outing. In their opinions, time is very precious, so they have to grasp every minute to work hard at their lessons. Traveling costs a lot. In that case, it will add to their families\' burden. Above all, no one can be sure of the safety of every student.
Yours truly
Li Hua
尊敬的校长，
我写信告诉你关于学校是否应该组织一次春季郊游的讨论。
对问题的看法有如下：70%的学生认为学校应该组织“春季郊游”。他们认为，春季郊游可以使他们享受大自然的美丽的风景，它可以扩大我们的视野，使我们更多的知识。他们还说，在空旷的.田野的空气很清新。更新鲜的空气对我们的健康有很大的健康。
另一方面，30%不喜欢外出郊游的想法。在他们的观点中，时间是非常宝贵的，所以他们要抓紧每一分的努力，在他们的课程中努力学习。旅游成本很多。在这种情况下，它会增加他们家庭的负担。首先，没有人能确保每个学生的安全。
你真正的
李华
