中考英语将来时作文（将来时中考英语满分作文） - 作文仓库

中考英语将来时作文【一】

1。叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：

The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。

用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。

2。动词的时态

在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3。叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。

4。叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：

In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。

The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。

What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5。叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：

I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。

这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：

I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。

中考英语将来时作文【二】

1。头绪分明，脉络清楚

写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。突出中心，详略得当

在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：

One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。用活语言，准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文：

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后：

The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。

"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

中考英语将来时作文【三】

“你这只懒虫，看你睡到什么时候了？”“哎，这一觉睡得可真久呀！”他们围着我又说又笑。我一看日历，心中一惊，今天是20XX年的3月28日了！而且还是我十岁的生日。怎么回事？原来我和伙伴们不小心呼吸了从太空飘散下来的花粉，竟都沉睡了七十多年。我从床上蹦起来，决定和小伙伴们出去遛一遛。

我从小泥猪里拿出零花钱，当然这还是半个多世纪以前的呢。我想，时过境迁，这些钱成了古币，不知道还能不能流通呢。我们来到古董店。古董店的老板看见我们递过来的钱，惊得直吐舌头：“你们这些钱是从哪儿来的`呀！现在，世界上仅存几张呀！”于是，我们把这些钱换给了这位老板，得到了一大笔钱。

我们买了一台车。这台车比卡丁车大一点，不仅操作便捷，而且安全性能极好，是专为小孩子设计的。我们坐上车，兴冲冲地来到一家宠物店。只见里面好是热闹，传说中的飞马、天龙、凤凰等等都有。我们挑了一匹飞马，一条天龙。接着又来到了武器店，买了一些古代打仗用的剑、盾、长矛之类的东西。

到中午了，我们的肚子都唱起了“空城计”。我和伙伴们来到一家蛋糕店，因为今天是我的生日呀。这里有最新发明的楼层蛋糕，设计人员把我们引到电脑前，让我们自己设计蛋糕的楼层和内部结构。我们一不做，二不休，设计出了一座蛋糕别墅。蛋糕店的人连忙把我们的设计存盘，说我们的设计是最有创意的，他们将会做出一个标志性的蛋糕，以展示他们店最高的水平。并且，我们的蛋糕别墅完全免费！以表示对我们创意的嘉奖和谢意。“哦！”我和伙伴们欢呼起来，把头上的帽子摘了丢来抛去。

我和伙伴们成了十足的“蛋糕寄生虫”，在蛋糕别墅里边吃边玩，还觉得不过瘾，我们又搬来了一台电脑，这台电脑是多维数码全息电脑。我们兴致勃勃地进入游戏区，用手点了一下按钮，忽然什么也看不见了，我们来到了游戏区里。一切都和真的一样，一切就像梦幻一样神奇。我们成了身穿铠甲的勇士，和一群稀奇古怪的外星人搏斗。可不一会儿，他们就把我们这些全没的外行抛了出去。我们只好灰溜溜地滚出电脑。哎，真是不幸。

正沮丧间，忽然听说有一群不明来历的人到了地球，向我们地球人挑战。这还得了！我和伙伴们二话不说，就拿着长矛、盾牌、宝剑，骑着飞马、飞龙去了。那些人是驾着最新的宇宙交通工具来的，不过都戴着面具，看不清模样，个头和我们差不多。他们看见我们的武器都哈哈大笑。他们的头儿说：“咱们先礼后兵，如果我们出的题你们做出来了，我们就不发起战争，如果做不出——”他把手臂举起来，只见上面全是机关，看来藏着非常厉害的武器。我气冲斗牛，说：“来吧！看你们有什么高招！”

那个头儿说：“一个两位数，十位数是个位的两倍，将个位与十位的数字调换，得到新的两位数，这两个两位数的和为132，求这个两位数。”我仰头大笑：“太简单啦，得84！”那些人凑在一块儿商量起来，大概是在验算吧。我心里又是一阵暗笑。

过了一会儿，他们说：“好，算你有种，再出一题。”那个头儿把手一挥，只见地上出现了五个农夫，有四个农夫脸上分别有“大、小、无、食”四个字。他指着最后那个农夫说：“你给这个农夫画张脸吧。”我还没说话，一个最会画画的小伙伴就冒冒失失地跑上去，给这个农夫画起了眼睛……我急坏了，连忙跑上前，抢过笔，在这个农夫脸上写了一个大大的“中”字。那个头儿忙问为什么，我说：“这还不简单吗？把这五个农夫想成五个手指，不就差个‘中’字吗？”那个头儿大叫佩服，伙伴们都为我鼓掌。

那个头儿一定要我和他交朋友。原来，他们是外星上的小朋友，因为老师要他们学习地球人的课程，他们做不出，没办法才到我们地球上来讨教的。我笑着拍拍他的肩，语重心长地说：“好样的，以后多动动脑子，少来点武力。有什么难题，尽管再来找我吧！”

望着他们远去的身影，我的豪情还在心中激荡。此时天色渐晚，夕阳西照，我觉得20XX年的地球好美，好美……

中考英语将来时作文【四】

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.