ouranimalfriends英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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ouranimalfriends英语作文五年级【二】
话说，唐僧师徒西天取经后，唐僧与八戒寻找工作，他们在此之间发生了许多事情……
在某年某月某日里的一个落后的村子里，唐僧正在闲逛，无意间发现了一则招工启事，唐僧上前一看，启事上这样写道：长年招收佛家弟子，工资面议，电话：1234567890，非诚勿扰。看完之后，唐僧暗喜，心想：这份工作就是为我准备的啊！完全符合我的特长啊！想完，他就打去了电话，一阵彩铃过后，电话那头说道：“你好，这里是乌龙寺，请问你来这的目的。”唐僧说：“我是来应聘的。”那人说道：“请说一段佛经。”唐僧一听，便把手机放在地上，掏出木鱼，坐在地上，对着手机说道”一切皆为虚幻不可说，色即是空，空即是色。’’那人说道；“你被录取了，请明日到乌龙寺来当一名佛家弟子，工资一个月20xx元。”说完便挂了电话，唐僧十分高兴，便回到了家，今晚，他做了一个幸福的梦。
在唐僧被录取的第二天，猪八戒来到了码头，他找到了工头，对工头哀求道；“求你让我在这打工行吗？多少钱都行。”工头说道：“你在这干活可以，先让我见识一下你的力气。”猪八戒说：“可以。”说完，他就来到了货物前，轮起袖子，轻松举起2袋朝货船走去，现场的人及工头看的是目瞪口呆，猪八戒回来后，工头说道；“你可以在这干活了，现在就干，工资一个月1500元，就这样，猪八戒也找到了工作。他也十分的高兴。
就这样，他们两个都找到了工作。
ouranimalfriends英语作文五年级【三】
在家乡 My Hometown’>我的.家乡有一个小湖，那是我最喜欢的地方之一。我总是和我的朋友一起去湖边，我们经常游泳、玩耍。有时我们会去划船，享受安静的时刻。现在的湖因为污染已经不那么干净了。我意识到保护环境的重要性。
ouranimalfriends英语作文五年级【四】
大家看到我这个题目一定会感到很惊讶吧！四大名著之一《西游记》家喻户晓，书中的故事情节耳熟能详，我又会给大家介绍什么呢？
话说这唐僧师徒四人到灵山取经回来后，孙悟空一直捉弄八戒呢，而八戒为了不被大师兄捉弄，就拼命地学习起来。孙悟空翻一个筋斗来到八戒身边说：“呆子，你说说看海为什么是海呢？”八戒说：“海是以周围气沉沉，毫无生机而得名的 。”悟空说到：“呆子，不错呀，长进不少。”八戒得意地说：“那当然，我这几天可是拼命学习过的。”悟空又问：“海是不是一碰到就会了呢？”“这。个。嘛。"八戒抓耳挠腮，就是搭不上来。
悟空说：“呆子，这下你答不上来了吧！”八戒想：猴子，就会卖关子，万一真是那样，我老猪这条性命可就完了。就这会儿工夫，八戒和悟空腾云驾雾，来到海，一到海，八戒捂着鼻子用手指着海的水对悟空说：“猴哥，这儿的水怎么那么咸呀？”悟空说道：“还真让你说对了，海中的水含盐量非常的高。”“哦，原来是这样。不管怎么样，还是先到水里去吧！”说完八戒就一头栽到海中去了，可是意想不到的事情发生了。八戒拼命喊道：“猴哥，猴哥。”这一说可不得了，把正在晒日光浴的悟空给吓了一大跳，责备道：“呆子，你叫什么。”八戒说到：“我本想下去游一游，可是一下去就浮上来，一下去就浮上来。累我了。”悟空听了哈哈大笑起来：“你这个呆子，我跟你说过了海的含盐量非常高，正是因为含盐量高才会浮起来呀！”八戒恍然大悟：“原来是这样。”看来我平时还不够博览群书啊！
自从这件事以后，八戒成天钻在书堆里，与书为友。终于成了一个博学多才的人。
