一篇优秀的小学作文具备哪些要素【一】
“阿门阿前一颗葡萄树……”还记得这首歌吗？
也许你还记得。这首歌的名字叫做《蜗牛与黄鹂鸟》。意思就是蜗牛想要吃葡萄，然而于就是它早早地爬了上去……
对了，这天我要去观察蜗牛。
我看到一只蜗牛慢悠悠的往前走着，它这就是要去干什么呢？答案要揭晓了，这只蜗牛走到另一只蜗牛面前，好像说了一会儿话，然后一齐走到有许多草组成的“森林”里去。他们大概就是要去游玩吧！我想。
我还看到许多蜗牛一齐爬墙，他们有5、6个吧！哦，我明白了，他们的家族就应就是在举行赛跑！我仿佛听到墙下的美女蜗牛拉拉队里传出加油的呐喊声。运动员们爬得这么慢，然而但他们一听到下面的呐喊声，忍不住激动起来，看啊，1号蜗牛比其他蜗牛快一些了！2号蜗牛，你要加油了。虽然我不明白他们要爬到什么时候，但就是我依然很高兴。
更吸引我的就是蜗牛的精神，他们虽然走路走得很慢，但就是精神还就是不错的！他们从来不会半途而废，即使他们的家在屋顶上，他们在屋下，蜗牛也会慢慢地爬上去。三天三夜，然而对他们来说一点也不就是问题。
我发现了蜗牛的小天地，我多么得意呀！
我愿意带你一齐去观察蜗牛！
一篇优秀的小学作文具备哪些要素【二】
转眼间，“五一”劳动节就到来了，我开始想怎么度过这个劳动节，最后，我想了一个好主意，那就是大扫除。
今天中午，就开始了大扫除。
我拿起干抹布擦电视机，因为妈妈对我说过如果不用干抹布擦电视机的话，那电视机就容易坏。还有开关，电脑……等有电的东西都要用干抹布擦。
我还要擦一些家具和玻璃，甚至连门都不放过。我仔仔细细、认认真真地把家里从头到尾、从上到下在用抹布、拖把擦，拖了一遍，抹布上粘满了灰尘。这下可把我累坏了，我满头大汗，上气不接下气。但我一想：“我是要给妈妈一个惊喜的，再说了，大扫除本来就是要卖力的呀，如果我现在就坚持不了，那么刚才干的不就是白费了吗?”做事得有始有终。于是我又开始扫地了。我连角落都不放过，总算扫完了。仔细一想，还有房间忘记扫了，我进去，熟练地拿起扫把，慢慢地扫起来。然后，我装了一桶水，洗了一下拖把，扭干水，开始拖地。我握着沉重的拖把，慢慢地从这边拖到那边。
一篇优秀的小学作文具备哪些要素【三】
A wind and the calendar of the afternoon, me and my mother, cousin and the cousin yo dog to clean air, scenic Geleshan play. Small colorful flowers to welcome our arrival with a smile; Xiaocaohu their small head out and waved to us. We enjoy the beautiful scenery while hiking.
Along the way, yo dog to hop to hop from time to time naughty and jumped into the water hole, the others have a muddy splash. We came to a rock and saw the beautiful, fragrant honeysuckle fill the fields. Cousin cousin and I could not wait to pick up the pick pocket honeysuckle. Pick a pick, and I was honeysuckle mixed with a bit of rattan, the foot-slip, fall down on. If my hand tightly grasped the honeysuckle vines and perhaps on to pieces of it. End mining flowers, the mother asked us: "Do you know what the benefits of honeysuckle it?" Cousin said: "Honeysuckle is Shannon." Cousin said: "Honeysuckle Qingre, Reduce Pathogenic Fire." I said : "Honeysuckle can also be down summer heat." her mother said: "You are right, but the best place honeysuckle is native, does not appreciate other people's live."
After the play, I not only enjoy the beautiful scenery, but also to understand the truth in life. Ah really gain a lot.
一篇优秀的小学作文具备哪些要素【四】
On the first day of the rest, mom and dad and I went to ningbo sea world and youngor zoo.
We first came to the sea world. Once in the aquarium, dad took me to see the sea precious animals. Have the hippocampus, giant salamander, heavy sea turtles, and cute little penguins. Overhead transparent glass in all kinds of fish swimming happily in the, I seem to feel also came to the underwater world.
Out of the aquarium, went to the ocean theatre, there are Marine animals.
Walrus in sit-ups, music we call "good", then we show the water ballet, see it stretch your head, around circle, also push the feet, how interesting! From Japan's "three sisters" sea lions, each have each skill: within a will do ten arithmetic, a lifting weights, is another ball player. Next, two beluga whales the staff with mouth top up from the water. Finally, dolphins sang a song for us, that caused a cheer.
Out of the sea world, we went to the youngor zoo. In the zoo, I saw a fierce the east-northern tiger and the tiger, mighty lion and white lion. In the panda garden, I finally met our national treasure, the giant panda. They are naughty flip, also eat bamboo. Beautiful peacock contended for the tail, to show us their beauty.
Travel over, although very tired, but I am very happy!
