用手机给作文修改【一】
dear mike,
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yours,
li hua
用手机给作文修改【二】
Dear XX,
i am very happy to see you,i think you teach very well,we all love you!
i think your english class is better than our old english teacher's class,i believe you can do better than better!i believe in you!
Best wishes to you!
yours,
XXX
XXXX.X.X
用手机给作文修改【三】
dear vvx,
my name is vvx.i'm writing to you to introduce my family to you.there are four people in my family.they are my father, my mother, my sister and i. my father is a worker in a factory. my mother is a teacher in a middle school. my sister is a primary school student and she is 8 years old. i’m a middle school student and i’m 14 years old.
look forward to hear from you soon.
yours,
vvx
用手机给作文修改【四】
要准确规范，忌前后不一
有一指令性通知的初稿，提出了三点要求：
1.明晰责任、齐抓共管。2.分流管理、分级负责;3.查改并举，重在治理。
这段中，第一点、第二点的前半句用的都是顿号，而第三点前半句用的却是逗号，前后不一致。还有，第一点的结尾用的是句号，而第二点的结尾用的却是分号，也是前后不一致。这些都应该统一起来，才显得对称。公文的标点符号使用不能马虎，要注意顿号、逗号、分号、句号等点号表示的是不同层次的停顿，使用得当，句子就能形成起伏均匀的节奏感。后来，这段修改为：
1.明晰责任，齐抓共管。2.分流管理，分级负责。3.查改并举，重在治理。
这样，通过标点的规范使用，可以表明"三点要求"相互之间的平等、平行关系。
用手机给作文修改【五】
1.学生原有的本、本等，课前学生找出，仔细阅读教师作文本中的“眉批”、“总批”。
2.学生摘录的描写各方面的好词好句，适时利用。
