2023邢台中考英语试卷作文【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
2023邢台中考英语试卷作文【二】
7月11日早晨，随着妈妈和她的同事及小伙伴出差去邢台，顺便准备游览天河山和邢台大峡谷。
我们首先来到了天河山，因为它是牛郎织女传说的原生地，所以被称作中国爱情山。一路上鸟鸣回响在耳旁，漫步在绿荫中，泉水从山顶源源不断的流向山脚，处处都能看见清澈的水洼，雄伟的瀑布、浓绿的树丛、俊俏的山脉以及一些不知名的野花都惹人赞叹。
但在天河山最令我难忘的还是那里的'漂流。
我们一行有说有笑到了半山腰，这里便是漂流的始点，我们穿上救生服，每两人一只汽艇，一人一个船桨。我戴上帽子，拿好水枪和船桨，把一些不能进水的东西放在塑料袋中放置好后，便上了汽艇，我略带紧张的出发了！
这里的漂流似乎更人性化也更刺激。路线是这样的：首先是一个开阔的湖泊，供人们在那里玩耍，一会儿，就驶入漂流的急坡，一冲而下，又是一个略比刚才小一些的水域，还可以在那里“打上一战”，接下来的就大概都是这样：一个急坡，一片水域；一会漂流，一会玩水。到了最后，便没有了缓和的余地，一冲到底，水流时而湍急，时而舒缓；漂流的速度也随着漂流道的坡度变得时快时慢。下第一个坡时，我的心便像失去了重力，猛地下垂，随着激起一个硕大的浪花。之后的漂流，我便好了许多，甚至还希望来个更刺激的路段。到了最后那个“一冲到底”的路段，两边的美景飞快的从余光中闪过，模糊成一团。一声响伴着一簇浪花，到了出口地，我们依然没有走的意思，又各自拿起水枪喷，有的干脆拿船桨撩水，大家衣服都湿了，但是依然很开心。
晚上，我们入住宾馆，为第二天游览大峡谷做准备。
早上7：30我们准时出发，驱车驶向邢台大峡谷。大峡谷位于邢台市邢台县西南路罗镇贺家坪村，由24条峡谷组成，其中长1000米以上的达8条，是太行群峰中的一大奇观。那里的峡谷真叫一个雄伟，陡峭断崖直入云霄深处，野核桃、野柿子树郁郁葱葱，由山腰上而来的泉水没有规则，遍地漫流，水到之处，变成一条水渠。这与天河山的景象全然不同，天河山的岩石秀气而俊俏，山泉舒缓而恬淡，瀑布壮丽而内敛，整个给人以静谧气息；而这里的岩石陡峭而险峻，山泉急促而大方，瀑布雄伟而霸气，整个给人以大气风度。
大峡谷中最为有名的算得上是一线天了。那里看不见日光，石壁因潮湿的地带而变得湿润、布满青苔。往下看去，水流不住的奔流，碰到石头，发出哗哗之响，水流底部，各色石子依稀可见。抬头望去，两边峡谷隆起身，只为人们留下了一条细细的天穹的影子，高处的溪流贴着石壁滑下，又落下，落到人们身上，石阶上，发出叮咚细响。习习冷风不断吹拂着，凉凉的。
再一个便是瀑布了，瀑布的名字记不得了，只是它那霸气外露的威风在我的脑海中不住的返现：三四丈宽的水帘从高崖间喷泄，两旁是略微乌黑的山崖，脚下是一片水洼。瀑布拍击着山石，水柱疾降，所到之处猛然掀起轩然大波，又碎成蒙蒙细雨一般，映出一片长虹。那瀑布雄伟的气势犹如百万雄狮愤然下山；那瀑布轰天般的巨响像万马在天边奔腾；那瀑布的英姿好似白虎在施展雄风。
当然除了一线天和瀑布以外，还有树木丛生的竹会峡、十字梁……
经历六小时终于游完大峡谷，筋疲力尽的我们，便在接近山顶的地方乘缆车下山，乘坐缆车时心里微微有点害怕，毕竟那是悬在百米高的空中啊。峡谷的风景一览无余，满眼的绿色，满眼的山脉。
流连忘返大峡谷、天河山！再见了！
2023邢台中考英语试卷作文【三】
大峡谷入口是一个非常壮观的石门，石门后面就是大山，让我无限向往。
爸爸买了门票还找了一位导游阿姨，我们就兴高采烈的进山了。一路上导游阿姨就边走边给我们讲解各处的景观和典故。她说：邢台大峡谷是国家4A级景区，国家重点风景名胜区，国家地质公园，由24条峡谷组成，其中长1000米以上的达8条，是太行群峰中的'一大奇观。主要景观有鬼门天堑、瑶池妆台、卧峡晴虹、济公观海等。
我们首先进入的是大峡谷的第一景——长嘴峡。峡谷两侧悬崖像被鬼斧劈开，陡峭无比。我们走在山间的木头栈道上，站在峭壁边缘，面临万丈深渊，虽有护栏挡着，来自深渊的魔力仍然让人胆寒，不敢正视。在大峡谷奇特的震慑力面前，我们觉出自己竟是如此地渺小。
接着我们来到了黄巢峡，传说是黄巢练兵之处。黄巢峡长约4000米，壁高150米，像是一把巨斧在山间劈开的一道长长的口子。导游阿姨还给我们念了有名的诗句：“待到秋来九月八，我花开后百花。冲天香阵透长安，满城尽带黄金甲”。这气势凌厉、惊人心魄的诗句，似乎仍回响在黄巢峡中。
再沿栈桥前行，便到了“一线天”。我紧贴大峡谷的峭壁往前走，抬头看见的只是被逼成一线的天空。一会儿转入幽深谷底，寒气袭人；一会儿又盘上垭口，豁然开朗。
我们整整走了四个小时，累并快乐着，一路欣赏着山间美景，听着导游阿姨嘹亮的山歌，这一天真是太美好了。
2023邢台中考英语试卷作文【四】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
2023邢台中考英语试卷作文【五】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
2023邢台中考英语试卷作文【六】
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
