则,有时要求谈论个人观点;二是根据内容提示写谈论规则的短文,这种文体通常
是夹叙夹议。写作本话题常用的结构除了课本上的含有情态动词的被动语态结构
should(notbeallowedto之外,haveto,must,can’t,should,shouldn’t,you’dbetter
等也很实用,大家应根据需要灵活应用。
OurSchoolRules
Istudyinastrictschool,andtherearemanyrulesinourschool.disagreewithit.Theoftheuniformsisbadandtheymakeusfeel
uncomfortable.Ithinkstudentsshouldbeallowedtoweartheirownclothes.Wewant
tobedifferent.Atourschool,evengirlsarenotallowedtohavelonghair.Thatis
reallystrange.Longhairmakesgirlslookmorebeautiful,andinChineseculturegirls
shouldhavelonghair.
Ofcourse,therearesomerulesIagreewith.Youngerstudentsarenotallowedto
ridebikes.Itisdangerousforthemtoridebikesduringtherushhours.Wearen't
allowedtoeatsnacksatschool.Ithinkmostsnacksarebadforourhealth.The
studentsshouldn’tbeallowedtogettheirearspierced.
一),从你的好友WangLin的appearance,personality,hobbies等方面叙述他过去和现在
的不同。
Ihaveafriend.HisnameisWangLin.Wehaven’tseeneachotherforthreeyears.Hehas
changedalot.Heusedtobethinandshort.Hewasalittleshywhenhewasintheprimary
school.Hisfaceturnedredwhenhetalkedtogirls.Butnowheistallandalittlefat.Heisn’tshy
anymore.Heisoutgoing.Heoftenplaysbasketballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Heusedto
likeplayingpingpong,butnowhelikesplayingbasketball.Hethinksplayingbasketballcan
makehimgrowtallerandstronger.Hedidn’tusetolikeEnglish,butnowheis
interestedinit.Nowheispopular.Lookatthegirlsaroundhim.
二),可以从长相,性格,学习等方面谈论自己的变化。
Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.Iusedtohaveshorthair,butnowIhavelong
hair.InthepastIwasquietandshy.However,nowI’mactiveandoutgoing,andlliketalking
withothers.
ThebiggestchangeinmylifewasthatIusedtoplaycomputergamesanddidbadlyin
English,butnowIhavemadegreatprogresswiththehelpofmyEnglishteacher.Thisisthemost
importantchangebecauseatalkwithherinfluencedme.IfIwanttoplaybetter,Ishouldlearn
Englishbetter.NowIamgoodatEnglish.Thismakesmyteacherandparentstakeprideinme
now.
三),生活多姿多彩,变化无处不在。假设今年暑假你回到了你三年前就读过的小学,你发
现学校已经发生了很大的变化。原来陈旧的教学楼变成了高大的新教学楼;过去学生们只能
在教学楼前活动,现在他们可以在绿树成荫的大操场玩耍。原来只能整天在教室里学习,现
在有了电脑室,美术室,音乐室····
Thissummervacation,Iwentbacktotheprimaryschool.Istudiedtherethreeyearsago.
Ifindtheschoolhaschangedalot.Inthepast,theteachingbuildingswereold,butnowthereare
tallandnewteachingbuildings.Weusedtodosomeactivitiesonlyinfrontoftheteaching
buildings,butnowtherearebigplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.Wecanplaythere.
Weusedtostudyintheclassroomallday,butnowtherearecomputerclassrooms,artclassrooms,
musicclassroomsandsoon.Ihopetheschoolwillbecomebetterandmorebeautiful.
四),(改自江苏省南通市中考题请你按照下面表格的提示,写一篇题为“ChangesinMy
Hometown
要求:1.2.或者以单项对比的方式写一篇短文;
3.词数:80词左右(包括已经写出的单词)。
ChangesinMyHometown
分析:本篇作文的题目和要点已经给定,有两种写法,一是今昔整体对比,也就是先说明过
去的总体情况,再说明现在的总体情况;二是单项对比,也就是先说明过去的房子是什么样
子的,而现在的房子是什么样子的,按照不同的比较项目逐一列举。最后也可通过对比,表
达自己对家乡变化的喜悦之情或对家乡的热爱。
在选词方面,同学们可灵活运用本单元重点结构usedtodo/be或thereusedtobe/do,注
成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐,每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如:
必须按时回家,不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况,根据下面的提示
和要求,以“MyFamilyRules”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:1、家里有哪些家规;2、对家规的感受;3、对父母的建议。
要求:1、必须包括提示内容,可以适当发挥;2、词数:80个左右;3、文
中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
MyfamilyRules
Myparentsarestrictwithme.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Letmetell
yousomeofthem.IamnotallowedtospendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorsurfing
theInternetonschooldays,andImustgotobedbefore23:00,becauseIhavetodo
myhomeworkandgetupearlythenextmorning.Ihavetocleanmyroomevery
morning.Myparentsthinkitisaverygoodhabittodoso.ButIdon’tagreewith
them,becausemyroomisnotalwaysdirty.EvenIdon’tagreewithsomeoftherules,
Iwillfollowthem.Ithinkmyparentswon’tdoanythingthatisbadforme.
Unit8ItmustbelongtoCarla
【原创习作点评】
请以Jack的身份根据下面提示帮他给他的老师Mr.Black发一封电子邮
件。词数在80词左右。
提示:1.当Jack到家时,他发现自错拿了英语书,他认为肯定是Tracy
的,因为书上有Tracy的名字。
2.Jack的书可能在Mr.Black家的书桌上。如果在,请老师帮忙保存起来,如
果不在,麻烦Mr.Black告诉他Tracy家的电话号码。
DearMr.Black,
Iamsorrytotroubleyou.Iwantyourhelp.AfterIgothome,Ifoundthatmy
Englishbookwasn’tinmybackpackandItookawrongbook.Ithinkitmustbe
Tracy’s①book,becausehernameisonit.IthinkmyEnglishbookmightbeon
yourdesk.Ifitisthere,pleasehelpmekeepit.Ifitisn’tonthedesk,pleasetellme
Tracy’stelephonenumber.Shemighttakemybook.Iamlookingforwardto
youre-mail.Thankyouverymuch.
Jack
教师点评这是一篇比较优秀的学生习作。得分点(1)内容完整,行文流畅(2)
我爱吃粽子,特别是刚出锅热乎乎的,每到端午节,只要有人煮了粽子,那味道准会香飘十里,老远就能闻到。
说道粽子,就不得不提起屈原,他是一位伟大的爱国主义诗人,那一年,屈原的国家打了败仗,他向皇帝提了一个建议,皇帝不仅没有听他的建议,还撤了他的官职,无奈之下,屈原只好跳江自,人们打捞屈原的尸体,却怎么也找不着,人们不想让鱼虾吃掉屈原的尸体,就把米扔到水里喂鱼虾,后来就有了吃粽子的习惯。
每年农历五月,奶奶都会包粽子,她先给绿油油的粽叶洗个澡,然后拿几片叶子,卷成了个角锥形的桶,再在里面放上糯米,添一点肉或红豆、糖之类的,然后用粽叶把糯米裹的紧紧的,不让它们漏出来,最后用一根细细的线把粽子扎紧,就这样,一个小巧玲珑的粽子就做好了,奶奶动作很快,不一会就做好了很多个。
奶奶把它们放进锅里煮,进过几个小时的漫长等待,粽子终于出锅了。
我跑到锅前,奶奶看出了我的心思,递给我一个粽子,我小心翼翼的拿起它,啊,好香啊!
我把线剪断,剥开粽叶,便迫不及待的咬了一大口,啊,糯米的甜和肉的香以及粽叶的清香留在我的唇齿之间,久久不能消除。
我吃了一个又一个,直到我吃不下,这粽子的香味真的无法用言语形容。
我爱吃粽子。
TherearemanytraditionalartsinChina.AkiteisoneoftheChinesetraditionalarts.Akite
wasmadefirstinChina.ItwassaidthatthekitewasmadebyMoDifirst.Itismadeofsticks,
paperandplastic.Ithasdifferentcolors.Longlongago,kiteswereusedtosendmessages,but
nowkitesareusedforfun.Peoplelikeflyingkitesintheopenair.InChina,Weifangis
famousforthekites.Thekitefestivalisheldhereeveryyear.Kitesarepopularallover
2,请根据提示介绍你家乡的特产.(pancakes,wheat,flour,process,pack
Myhometownisknownforpancakes.Theyareverypopularnow.Ilikeeating.Theysmell
niceandtastedelicious.Theyaremadeofwheat.Somearemadeofrice.Wheatorriceissentto
theflourfactoryandprocessedintoflour.Thentheflourismadeintopancakeswithapanata
veryrightheat.Atlastthepancakesarepackedwithplasticbagsandsoldinthestoresand
supermarkets.It’ssaidthatpancakesweremadefirstbyZhugeLiang.Nowmanypeoplecan
makepancakesinShandong.Pancakesareusedformakingdifferentdeliciousfood.They
arespecialbecausetheyareeasytomakeandconvenienttotake.
Therearesomephotosonthewall.They’reverybeautiful.
Inthemiddleoftheroom,thereismybed.It’snotsobig,butit’svery
comfortable.Everynight,Ilayonthebedandhaveagooddream.Ontherightofthebed,thereismydeskandchair.They’reinfrontofthewindow.Mycomputerisonthedesk.Thereisalamponthedesk,too.Icandomyhomeworkhereandplaycomputergames.
Mybookshelfisontheleftofthebed.Therearealotofstorybooksandpicturebooksintheshelf.Ilikethemverymuch.
Noteveryonehasabedroom.I’mverylucky,becauseIhaveaverybeautifulbedroom.I’lltrymybesttokeepitcleanandtidy.
1.OurSchool
Ourschoolisinthewestofthecity.Itisverybigwithatallteachingbuilding.Therearethirtyclassrooms,amodernlibrary,adinninghallandagym.Thereisabigplaygroundwhereweoftenhavesports.Therearelotsoftreesandflowersbesidetheplayground.Therearemorethanfivehundredstudentsandteachersinourschoolandweallworkhard.Ourschoolissobeautifulthatwealllikeitverymuch.
2.Howdidyouspendyoursummervacation
Ihadabusyandinterestingsummervacation.IdidmyhomeworkeverydaysoIfinisheddoingmyhomeworktendaysbeforethenewterm.Ialsoplayedtabletennisandbasketballwithmyfriendseveryday.Isometimeswent
moviesandwenttotheparkswithmyfriends.Isurfedtheinternet,readbooksandwatchedTVeveryevening.Ivisitedmygrandparentsandhelpedthemwiththehousework,too.Ihelpedmyparentscleantheroomandcookmeals.ThemostimportantwasthatmyparentsandIwenttoHannanIslandandspentaweekthere.
3..AhappyDay
Itwassunnyandveryhottoday.Igotupearlyandhelpedmyparentscookbreakfast.ThenIwashedthedishesandcleanedtheroom.AfterashortrestIdidmyhomeworkinthemorning.IntheafternoonIwentswimminginthe
nearestswimmingpoolwithmyfriends.Itwasreallycooltoswiminsuchahotday.Isurfedtheinternetandreadastorybookintheevening.Ireallyhadabusyandhappyday.今天天气晴朗比较热。我起得很早,帮父母做早饭。然后我洗碗打扫屋子。休息一会后我上午做作业。下午我和朋友去我家最近的游泳池游泳。在如此炎热的夏天游泳的确很棒。晚上我上网、看故事书。我今天很忙过得很快乐。
4.给笔友的一封信
DearLucy
Iamverygladtohearfromyou.Nowletmeintroducemyselftoyou.MynameisLiLei.Iamelevenyearsold.Iamtallwithapairofglasses.NowIam
studyingatYuyingPrimarySchool.IaminClassOne,Grade5.Ilikesingingandplayingthepianoverymuch.IamgoodatEnglishandChinese.很高兴收到你的来信。现在让我介绍我自己。我叫李雷。11岁。我高个子、带眼镜。我在育英小学。我在五年级一班。我非常喜欢唱歌和弹钢琴。我数学和语文学得都很好。
6。暑假打算
Iwillhaveabusysummervacation.Iamgoingtodomyhomeworkeveryday.Iamgoingtothelibrarytoborrowsomebooksandgototheshopstobuysomebooks.Iamgoingtodosportssuchasplayingtabletennis,swimmingandsoon.Iamgoingtovisitmygrandparentsandstaythereforaweek.Iamgoingtohelpmyparentsdosomehousework.我暑假会很忙。我每天要写作业。我打算去图书馆去借书、去商店买书。我要做运动,如:打乒乓球、游泳等。我要去看爷爷奶奶并在那住一周。我要帮父母做家务。
7.自我介绍
Hello,everyone.MynameisKelly.Iamfriendlyandhonest.IamgoodatEnglishandmaths.Ilikesurfingtheinternet,playingcomputergames,watchingTVandtraveling.IalsolikeplayingtabletennisandIamgoodatit,too.Ioftenplaytabletenniswithmyfriendsonweekends.AndIwanttobeafamoustabletennisplayerwhenIgrowup.WhatIlikemostistoseethe
seagullsflyingfreelyintheskysoIoftengototheseainsummer.MyfavouritecolouriswhitebecauseIthinkwhiteissymbolizepurity.大家好我的名字叫KELLY.我很友好、诚实。我擅长英语和数学。我爱上网、玩电脑网络游戏、看电视和旅游。我也喜欢打乒乓球。我经常和朋友们在周末打乒乓球,长大了我想当一个乒乓球运动员。最喜欢在海边看着海鸥自由自在的飞翔,因此在夏天我经常去海边。白色是我的最爱。因为我觉得白色是纯洁的象征。
8.海南之旅
wenttoHainanIslandwithmyparentsforaholidyandwestayedthereforaweek.IttookusonlymorethanthreehourstogettoHaikouairport.Weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandthesoftwind.Wewalkedonthebeachandpickedupthebeautifulshells.Wealsosufedonthewavesanditwasreallyexciting.Weplayedballgamesonthebeachaswell.IbelievedHainanwasreallyanattractivecitywithfamousbeachandmountains.WereallyenjoyedthebeautifulsceneryofHainan.
9.AniceSunday
ItisSundayanditisafinedaytoday.WecometothePeopleParkwithourEnglishteacherwhocamefromCanada.Look!Tomandotherfiveboysareplayingfootball.Cinaandsomegirlstudentsareflyingkites.AliceandIaretakingphotosnearthepark.Aliceandweareveryhappy.AlicehelpsusalotwithourEnglish.
今天是星期天,天气晴朗。我们和来自Canada的英语老师Alice来到人民公园。瞧,Tom和五个男同学在踢球;Cina和一些女同学在放风筝;我和Alice正在公园附近拍照。Alice和我们都非常高兴。Alice在英语方面帮助了我们很多。
10.Thismorning,Iwokeupwithastart:myclockwasalarming.Unwillinglyopenedmyeyes,Ifounditwas6:30already.Nevertheless,theroomwasverygloomy,foritwasrainingoutside.Whatacoldday!HowcomfortableitwouldbeifIcouldstayinbedforthewholeday,readingafavouritebookinthe
soundofrain.But,Ididhavetogotowork.Thoughitwasarushhour,ontheway,therewerefewerpeoplethanusual.Manypeoplearduouslyheldanumbrellawhichwasalwaysblowndownbyablastofwind.Fortunately,Iwasdressedinaraincoat.Severalyardsaway,apolicemanwasguidingthetrafficintherain.Iwasfilledwithdeepesteemforhisseriousness.Ikeptthinkingoftoday'splanforashortwhileand,then,Iwasinmyoffice.Abusydayisbeginning……
“粽子”想必大家都吃过吧!可是,你们有没有自己亲手包过粽子呢!我就包过一次,才知道粽子是多么难包呀!
十几天前的早晨,天气还不错,我漫步在楼下院子里赏花。无意间,瞧见外婆坐在井边的椅子上,专心致志地不知道在干些什么,走进去一看,才知外婆在包粽子住给我们吃。一个个粽子包得有模有样的,我真是羡慕极了!连忙跑到外婆面前,说:“外婆,我想学包粽子,您能教我吗?”外婆不停地点头:“有什么不可以的呢?我现在就教你!”
说着,那边拿来一片包粽子的叶子交到我手里,手把手地教我:“先把这片叶放到那片叶子叠在一起,弄成一个类似什么圆锥形的样子。”外婆便做了一个给我看:“然后在上面倒上适当的米,最后包回起来就可以了,你自己包包看!”
我学着她的样子包了起来,眼看就要包好了,可包到最后时手不小心没拿住,米撒了一地。我鼓励自己:“没关系,在包一遍!”没想到因为没有包牢,米又撒了一地。接二连三的失败,我失望了,气愤地说:“粽子太难包了,我再也不包了!”这时,爸爸走出来,看到我烦躁的样子,语重心长地说:“婷婷,你是不是很想包粽子?如果是的话,你就要有耐心,坚持下去,不要半途而废,就会成功,你就再包几遍看看吧!”我听了爸爸的话静下心来坐在椅子上,认真仔细,一心一意包了一遍又一遍,总算是包好了,我高兴得一蹦三尺高。我包了好几个粽子,一个比一个包得好,还懂得了一个道理:无论做什么事,只要有耐心,坚持不懈,你总会成功的,甚至有丰收的成果。
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