初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
第二天早晨六点钟,两位妈妈就把自己的宝贝叫醒了。糖果揉着眼睛,不满的嘟哝道:“这么早叫我们起床,有什么事嘛?”“嘿嘿,你们不想去夏威夷啦?”糖果一听到夏威夷三个字,立马从床上跳下来,刷牙洗脸吃饭只用了35分钟。而糖豆那边的情况就不乐观了,无论妈妈爱丽莎怎么叫她,她都不起来。糖果把爱丽莎叫出糖豆的卧室,说:“阿姨,我有办法叫醒糖豆。”“那请你试试看吧。”糖果蹑手蹑脚的走进了糖豆的卧室,趴在糖豆的耳边轻声重复她妈妈爱丽娜的话:“你不想去夏威夷啦?糖豆。”糖豆的反应和糖果一样,听到夏威夷三个字,就从床上蹦了下来,糖豆一看时间,呀呀呀,六点36分啦!她冲进厕所,刷牙洗脸吃饭比糖果还快,只用了15分钟。两个小伙伴拖出了自己昨晚整理的行李箱,拉着妈妈就往岚特蔓的蓝月亮机场跑。目前才六点55分钟,开往夏威夷的飞机7点起飞,只有五分钟了!糖豆和糖果坐在椅子上哈欠连天,差点就要睡着了的'时候,广播响起了:“开往夏威夷的飞机er1719准备起飞!请到2号检票口检票!”两个小伙伴立刻清醒过来,两个妈妈也拉着孩子们跑。检票完后,她们登上了er1719号的飞机。飞机起飞了,糖果问妈妈:“妈咪,如果等我上幼儿园了,幼儿园的老师会教我和糖豆魔法吗,我和糖豆能骑着扫帚飞得比飞机还高吗?”乘客们不知道这四个人来自岚特蔓,心里想:要是真有一个幼儿园教魔法就好喽,这两个小朋友真是异想天开!大家聊着天,很快就到了夏威夷。糖豆和糖果在一家冷饮店吃了一碗刨冰,便换上泳衣,跳进了大海里,她们在水中玩耍嬉戏。突然,一只大白鲨过来了,大家都赶紧游到岸上。而糖果和糖豆却直接坐在了鲨鱼的背上,鲨鱼带着她们游呀游,最后,这只大白鲨竟然和糖豆糖果成了好朋友,它还听得懂人类的语言呢!大白鲨对两个小伙伴说:“以后如果你们需要帮助,可以叫我帮忙哟!”说完就把糖豆和糖果驮到了海岸边,自己游走了。所有游客们都对这两个小女孩能逃出鲨鱼的手掌心惊讶不已,包括她们的妈妈。
糖豆和糖果坐在金灿灿、软绵绵的沙滩上,望着夕阳,说:“美丽的夏威夷,我爱你!”
元旦那天我和爸爸、妈妈、小姑、去西丽湖度假村玩。
西丽湖度假村里面主要是因为有一个长方形的湖,所以得名叫西丽湖度假村。
我本来要骑马,因为小孩不能骑,所以改成坐马车。马车可以坐四个人,前面有一匹马拉着我们。我们围着西丽湖度假村转了一圈,看见里面有:儿童乐园、马场、动物奥林匹特竞赛区、别墅。我们问马夫:“动物奥林匹特竞赛区里面有什么?”马夫说:“那里每周有三个晚上进行赛狗。”我们走回马场那”我们走回马场那里看见有许多匹马,我们又问马夫,这些马是从那里进来的?马夫说:“是从新疆运过来的。”那里的马可真多,走近了会闻到一股臭哄哄的感觉连气也不敢出。马都很强壮,有黑的、红色的、褐色的,每只马都不停地甩着尾巴,它们呆呆的站在里面,好像呆在里面很无聊。
我和小姑还玩了碰碰船。刚开始我们不敢碰别人的船。我想:碰碰船就是要你和别人的船碰在一块。我把我的想法告诉了小姑,小姑觉得我说得对,我们便也开始碰起别的船来了。开始被人撞得落花流水,后来我们找到了技巧,一会儿就把别人的船和衣服弄满了水。
我没来之前觉得西丽湖应该非常美丽,可到西丽湖一看水很浊很脏,觉的名字真是名负了其实呀!愿西丽湖的明天会更好!
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