中考李华作文课(李华老师讲语文作文)

中考李华作文课(李华老师讲语文作文)

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中考李华作文课(李华老师讲语文作文)

中考李华作文课【一】

说明文的阅读复习有了准确的目标定位,才能选择科学的教法。这节课,教学的重难点就在提高学生筛选整合信息的能力。那么,如何达到这个目标呢?经过几天的思考和尝试,我还是觉得应该最大程度的利用摸底测试的篇目——《台风》一文。 于是,我沉下心开始读这篇文章,我的师傅甚至建议我把它背下来。

经过认真地分析探讨,我渐渐开始感受到教研室张宝华老师的用心。这是一篇非常典型的说明文:行文思路非常明晰,段落特点又各个不同。

首段由“台风”的定义引入,接着写一般人看法,然后用“然而”转入正题——“台风的功甚至大于过”。只要学生阅读时关注到这句话,答第三题时就能基本找到答题区域。加上第六段“除了……外”的提示,答题区域就能被准确地定位到2—6段。下文分写的部分有五段。第二段是阐述+总结+补充说明(推测未来的情况)。第三段是一个总分结构的段落:中心句+阐述。此段的信息提炼很少有人出错,直接提取主句即可。第四段没有明显的中心句,关键信息提炼不准确。三个分句,关键信息分别为:节约用水用电、节约原煤、用于风力发电。前两个是并列关系,连接词“一方面”“也”标识;第三层用连接词“而且”“甚至”表明是递进关系。前两层有可以归并为“节约资源”,第三层递进,需要信息叠加。这是“分层归并法”。关注连词,解读句子之间的关系很重要。第五段是典型的承接式结构:海水上翻——鱼饵增多——有利于鱼群生长。关键信息也比较明显,出错率较低。第六段信息提炼错误较多,首句就是段落中心句,组合要言:“台风会引发慢地震,逐渐释放地壳能量,避免大型地震”。很多学生都选择尾句:“台风有助于减轻地震带来的损害”作答。如何取舍?必须要对这一段的段内层次进行分析:首句就是中心句;第二句讲述“慢地震”,诠释中心句;第三句是举例子说明慢地震与台风的关系,也在为中心句服务。比较来说,前者是中心信息,后者是辅助信息。明白了这一点,就容易取舍了。

因此,我结合这篇例文归纳了三点筛选整合信息的方法:组合要言法、提取主句法、分层归并法。过程中提醒学生关注关键词(中心词、连接词),注意作者对说明方法的运用,解析段落层次。以此达到准确筛选整合信息的目标。当然,这一切都要以端正的阅读态度和耐心细致的阅读习惯为前提。

中考李华作文课【二】

假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇,记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。

写作要点:

1.做家务的理由;

2.做家务的过程;

3.你的感受。

注意:

1.短文词数不少于100;

2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数;

3.不能使用真是姓名和学校名称。

Possible version:

I am an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help.

Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping,I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books,newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that,I swept and mopped the floors.

At this very moment,my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and Icould see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was,I never felt so happy.

我是一个18岁的中学生。我一直忙于我的学习,很少帮父母做家务。感觉挺对不起,我开始思考怎样做才能帮到他们。

上周日,当我的父母出去逛街时,我突然有一个想法:为什么不把房间进行彻底清洗?首先,我收集了所有的`书籍,报纸和散落在房间的其他东西,并把它们放整齐。然后,我所有的家具都掸去灰尘。在那之后,我扫了地,还擦了地板。

就在这个时候,我的父母回来了,看到所有的房间整洁,地板闪闪发亮之后非常惊讶。我的母亲给了我一个拥抱,我可以看到她的眼睛透露出满意。虽然我很累,但我从来没有感到这么高兴。

Our hotel我们的酒店

Our hotel我们的酒店

Ladies and gentlemen,

女士们,先生们,

Welcome to our hotel! The Blue Sky Hotel is very big. There are 150 rooms and 2 restaurants . You’ll taste many delicious food. You can swim in the swimming pool. You can see the beautiful flowers in the garden. And the hotel is near the downtown. It is very convenient.

欢迎来到我们酒店!蓝天酒店非常大。有150个房间和2餐馆。你会品尝很多美味的食物。你可以在游泳池里游泳。你可以看到漂亮的花在花园里。和附近的酒店是在市中心。它非常方便。

Oh, sorry, I forgot to tell you the address of the hotel. It is No.156 on Huanshi Road, Yuexiu District, Guangzhou. You can call us at 020-74083868 or you can fax us at 020-84081868.

哦,对不起,我忘了告诉你酒店的地址。这是No.156环市路,越秀区,广州。你可以叫我们在020 - 020或者你可以传真020 - 84081868。

I think you’ll enjoy yourself in our hotel. We’ll try our best to help you.

我认为你会喜欢在我们酒店。我们将尽力帮助你。

中考李华作文课【三】

课堂内容有点多,时间安排还可优化。

筛选信息概括要点的能力,是我们阅读说明文的核心能力。在一堂课的时间内,我选择了随文而教。希望能够对这帮即将面临中考的孩子一点帮助。说到底,语文阅读的复习课要想高效,只有态度方法两手抓:在学生端正的阅读态度,良好的阅读习惯的前提下,“授之以渔”,才能高效实用。

中考李华作文课【四】

Dear Chris,

How are you doing? Recently, an important volleyball game will be held in our campus, which will be not only meaningful but also exciting. So, as captain of the team, I, on behalf of all our team members, am writing to invite you to join us in the battle!

Here are some relevant details about it. To begin with, it will be on the 3rd volleyball court from 2:00 to 4:00 on the afternoon of July 1st. Besides, we, the Giants, will confront the Eagles, which is undoubtedly a tough rival. As a result, adequate preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.

Hopefully, you could make it to this wonderful event. We need you! Looking forward to your reply and your presence.

Yours,

Li Hua

中考李华作文课【五】

Dear Li Hua:

You\'ve mentioned that you felt bad about telling lies. That means you understand your parents, it\'s really a good thing. Sometimes parents just figure that internet game is terrible, they just don\'t want their child spend all the time for games , not study. I think the most important thing you should do is make your parents know some advantages about internet games,such as it can make you relax after study ,things like that.By the way ,you should also ensure that you can make good use your time.

Yours faithly

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