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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
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第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
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第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
人们都说“桂林的山水”是天下最美的山水,可我却说”天马湖的山水”是世界上最美的山水,那里一年四季都很美。
春天,湖面上的冰雪化了,湖面像一面大镜子,小鹿在天马湖边散步,有的俯下身子喝水,有的侧着脑袋欣赏自己映在水中的倒影。
夏天,雨水多了,湖面也宽了,碧蓝碧蓝的真像一块蓝宝石,小草像绿色的地毯。最美丽的`就算火烧云了,从东边到西边都是红彤彤的,真像天上着了火一样。
秋天,鱼虾到处都是,渔民们架着小舟,到天马湖里捉鱼虾,这回鱼虾们可倒四辈子大霉了,吓得四处乱逃,但还是逃不过渔民们的手掌心,太阳下山了,渔民们满载而归。
冬天,湖面上结了冰,那晶莹剔透的冰简直就是透明的,又下起了鹅毛大雪,这一场雪把田野·山坡·房子都披上了银白色的冬装。
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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
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第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
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第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
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第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
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第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
天马湖在武威城东面,是杨家坝河滩改造而成的人工湖,数十里公里的湖岸边游人不断,人们或在河边拍照留影,或沿提散步,静心享受着美景,清水清凌凌,一湖碧波,给炎热的夏日带来阵阵凉意,不仅为武威增添了一道靓丽的风景线。
傍晚,天空已经是灰蒙蒙的,这时,就像是几颗星星落下来,在对我眨眼睛呢!接着,路上的路灯,车灯也争先亮起来,整条路顿时灯火通明,一盏盏灯就像一只只萤火虫在空中飞舞。等天空完全暗了下来,霓虹灯也亮了起来。这下天马湖仿佛穿上一件闪亮的新衣服,一盏盏霓虹灯千变万化,一会儿红,一会儿绿,一会儿半紫半黄,真是五光十色,还有那变幻无穷的形状,又像彩虹,又像鲜花,好比那衣服上美丽的花纹。一条条公路,一片金光,像是一条条彩带,真是美丽无穷。
天马湖的美景为武威城平添了几分诗情画意,多了一缕醉人浪漫,为武威建设西部加上了浓墨重彩的一笔。
三年级的暑假,我跟随父母去甘肃青海一带游玩。其中,最让我难忘的,莫过于敦煌的鸣沙山和月牙泉了。
下午三点左右,我们到达了鸣沙山。初见大漠,眼前的一切让我惊呆了:几十座沙丘连绵起伏,它好像被人抚摸了千万遍,不论怎么踩,总是那么柔顺、流畅。它一望无际,似乎连天空都不能与它相较,在太阳照射下愈发金黄。震撼之余,我瞥向沙丘的一条棱线,上面是密密麻麻移动的小黑点。不远处,响起了驼铃的“叮当叮当”声。
此时,正值一天中最热的时候,太阳无情地炙烤着大地,沙子因此发烫了许多,踩上去却还是格外舒服。回头望了望,就在沙漠的边际,有一串长长的骆驼脚印,朝我们伸展开来。在这里滑沙,最适宜不过。一想到这,我的心就痒痒起来,加快脚步向前行进,终于攀上最高点。沿着这条棱线向前走,不知转了多少弯,朝下望去,便是月牙泉,它因阳光的照射而更加灵动了。周围饰了一圈绿树,仿佛是它的项链,将它的轮廓勾勒得格外清晰。早听说,大漠和清泉相融,现在,终于见到了它的庐山真面目,我惊叹不已。
在一处坡度较大的沙丘上,我停住了脚步。没有滑板,没有任何防护措施,就这样措不及防地滑下——就像是滑滑梯一样,但快了许多。风在耳边呼啸,吹动沙子,沙子推动我,使我快速下行。我心中惊出了波澜,早已对其它视而不见。“嗡嗡嗡”我侧耳聆听沙鸣。悄悄睁开眼,风似乎无处不在,悄悄钻到沙子下,拨动着,又像是一条蛇,敏捷地游走……顺着沙子下滑,随着速度加快,风远远地被我落在后面。沙鸣带着风啸,欢快地演绎着进行曲。不知过了多久,风停了,我也随它慢慢停了下来,抬头望空,风轻云淡,仿佛什么也未发生过,但我还是惊魂未定。
夕阳西下,我们也开始往回走。当月亮刚升起时,我们就来到了月牙泉。晚风轻拂过树梢,掀起细沙,又吹起月牙泉的波澜。夜色如水,繁星点点。流动的泉水似夜空一般深谙,路边五光十色的彩灯,便倒映在泉中。晃动的泉水伴着灯光,月光与泉水交相辉映,形成一副动人的画面。
当离开月牙泉,已是华灯初上。丝丝凉意卷着风儿吹来,抚过面颊,钻到心中。“叮当叮当”驼铃又响起,似乎在跟我们告别……
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