要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went there together The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around.
How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a ten minutes break, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes(笑话 or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it,we had to say goodbye to the workers.
寒假生活即将结束了,回想我的寒假生活,令我最难忘的还是游黄山的经历。
寒假出去旅游是我们一项必备的活动,这次寒假我们一家游玩了黄山。黄山位于安徽省南部,面积1200平方公里,有72座峰。黄山自古就是旅游胜地,有“五岳归来不看山,黄山归来不看岳”之说,它有泰山的雄伟,华山的峻峭,衡山的烟云,以“ 奇松、怪石、云海、温泉”而得名,被誉为“天下第一奇山:。
黄山最高峰是莲花峰,海拔1864米,当我和爸妈爬上那耸立天外的峰顶,俯瞰四周,顿感一览众山小的磅礴气势。而莲花峰的两边都是万丈深渊,看的我心慌慌的。
说起黄山的怪石,更是生动有趣,有“梦笔生花 ”、“猴子观海”、“仙人晒靴”、“猪八戒吃西瓜”、“飞来石”等等,多的数不胜数,尤其是“松鼠跳天都”,只见那耕云峰上的“松鼠”纵身欲跳,惟妙惟肖。
黄山的奇松千姿百态,尤以玉屏楼前的迎客松最为著名,也是黄山的'标志性景观。只见它一侧枝桠伸出,如人伸出臂膀欢迎远道而来的客人,雍容大度,姿态优美。在这里游人如织,人们争相在此拍照留念,我也急忙找好位置,在黄山留下美好的记忆。
这就是我寒假游黄山的经历,我觉得那一幕幕真是令我十分的难忘啊!希望下次有机会我能再去黄山一游!
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