四级英语作文科学技术的飞速发展【一】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
四级英语作文科学技术的飞速发展【二】
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn\'t afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people\'s clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn\'t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can\'t provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
四级英语作文科学技术的飞速发展【三】
Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
四级英语作文科学技术的飞速发展【四】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级英语作文科学技术的飞速发展【五】
016英语四级漫画作文预测四级英语很快就要到来了，英语是占据重要的部分，快来看看下面的范文及写作指导吧。
下面请看一篇漫画式命题的作文预测题：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should express your views on the impact of air pollution. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【参考模板范文】
The Impact of Air Pollution
The cartoon vividly reveals the phenomenon of air pollution or the decline of air quality. In the cartoon we can see the air pollution is so serious that the earth can't bear it.
What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Possible reasons can be listed as follows: firstly, vehicle exhaust gases could be one of the most leading causes. With the improvement of economy and people's living standard, urban inhabitants in mounting numbers own their private cars. More automobiles will inevitably generate more exhaust gases. Additionally, household appliances widely used in cities also release a great amount of carbon dioxide gases, which further intensifies air pollution. Last but not least, many factories around the cities emit large quantities of untreated poisonous gases, which should also be responsible for the decline of air quality.
Definitely, air pollution will exert a detrimental impact on many aspects of people's life. For example, many diseases such as cough, skin problem and lung cancer are caused by it. Perhaps it is high time that we should adopt some measures to solve the problem of air pollution.
英语漫画作文写作指导
第一、读图审题
四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理，要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。因此，要写好四级漫画作文，审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画，弄清漫画的寓意，这是文章切题的保证。此外，在本次四级考试的三道写作题中，Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向，这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面笔者就来逐一梳理2013年6月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。
第二、谋篇布局
在把握文章的主旨之后，考生就可以构思整篇文章的架构了。四级漫画作文的写作可以分为下面三个段落。
第一段：开门见山，简要描述一下漫画内容，并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画内容是为了揭示其中的寓意，是手段而不是目的，所以描述要简洁明快，一般来说一句话足矣。需要提醒考生的是，写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题，但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述，因此考生切不可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。
第二段：表达考生对漫画寓意的看法，这是文章的重心所在。比如，就第一道写作题目而言，考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品的重要性;就第二道写作题目而言，考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言，考生应在第二段论述掌握基本技能的重要性。
第三段：指出漫画的寓意对大学生的教育意义，或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是，结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析，其主要作用是总结和升华，使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要，点到即止。
第三、论证方法
漫画作文的\'第二段要表达考生对漫画寓意的看法，这是文章的核心段落，也是作文字数达到要求的关键。因此，考生在这一段要浓墨重彩，写深、写透。在写这一段时，考生要尽量摆事实、讲道理，避免空泛的议论。针对这一核心段落，笔者在此推荐以下三种展开议论的常用方法，希望对考生有所启发。
1.条分缕析
在写作第二段时，考生可以从2～3个方面对观点展开论述，这种写法可使文章显得层次清楚、条理清晰。例如，本次四级作文第一道题目的第二段需要阐述阅读文学作品的重要性，考生就可以从以下两个方面展开：第一，相对于电子媒体，文学阅读更能培养人的想象力;第二，阅读文学作品能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请参考下面的范文。
There wasa time when children could relish (欣赏/ 也可以使用appreciate 替换 literature. But childrentoday can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen. “So why bother reading?” some ask. The reasonis obvious： It enriches our imagination. When we read apiece of literature， we are living the life of RobinHood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer. In addition， literature is the mirror of society，whether it be poetry， drama or fiction. We know thesociety better through literature.
2.举例论证
如果漫画所传达的是抽象的人生哲理，那么考生在论述时最好能举出具体的事例，尽量避免空洞的说教。比如，就本次四级作文第二道题目而言，考生可以在第二段中举出一些成功人士如何从小事做起的例子。笔者下面提供的范文中用到的是哈兰·桑德斯上校从一个小吃店做起，最后缔造出遍布全球的肯德基快餐帝国的例子，用以证明只有从小事做起，才能成就大事。请看下面的范文。
Everything is smallbefore it is big. A good example is KFC. In 1930 Colonel Harland Sanders beganserving food to his service station customers in Corbin， a city in Kentucky. He fried chicken in his own kitchen andperfected his secret recipe there. From the small roadside eatery， he went on to build an empire of fast food.
3.类比论证
如果漫画中的寓意不容易通过具体的事例来证明，那么考生还可以使用类比论证的方法，即通过打比方来论证一个抽象的道理。比如，对于本次四级作文的第三道题目，考生可以在第二段中用学习打篮球的过程来打比方。学习打篮球时，只有先学会了投球、运球、传球这些基本技能，才能进一步学习高难度的技能。以此类推，无论做任何事情，只有掌握了基本的技能，才可能取得更大的成功。此外，考生还可以举出统计数字，用具体的研究结果来证明论点。请看下面的范文。
Simple as they mayseem， basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success. Thisis analogous to learning to play basketball. If shooting， dribbling and passing are not mastered，learning advanced skills will become difficult， if notimpossible. A growing body of research has also documented that such basicskills as reading， writing and computing are highlycorrelated with success later in life. A 2012 study surveyed 300 CEOs ofFortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of their success tothe basic skills they learned in primary school.
四级英语作文科学技术的飞速发展【六】
厦门有两主城区，一个是“湖里区”一个是“思明区”。思明区是厦门的市政府的所在地，而在古时候这里则是郑成功在厦门的根据地之一，而思明区则是郑成功为思念明朝而因此得名，也是郑成功带动了当时厦门的商业发展，更是他奠定了厦门几百年后成为中国一类港口城市。他也成为了让世人敬仰的大英雄。
厦门有着优越的地理条件。位于福建东南沿海，九龙江出海口，背靠漳州、泉州平原，濒临台湾海峡、与台湾本岛和澎湖列岛遥遥相对。市区面积1516平方公里，包括厦门岛和鼓浪屿两部分，其中特区面积131平方公里。人口33万。为福建省第二大工商业城市。厦门本岛内的思明、开元、鼓浪屿、湖里四个区为经济特区。思明区以商业闹市区为主；开元区以工厂区和新市区为主；鼓浪屿区是著名的风景旅游区；湖里区则是新兴的工业投资区。厦门港阔水深，不淤不冻，避风条件好，海岸线长234公里，其中深水岸线40公里，5万吨级巨轮可自由出入。目前，厦门口岸与世界80多个国家和地区有贸易往来，拥有通往香港的货运船队，不定期货轮可直达日本、澳洲和新加坡等世界大港。陆上交通也很方便，通过鹰厦铁路与全国铁路网相连。工业有一定基础，文化教育比较发达。周围地区为我国著名侨乡，且与台湾仅一水之隔，特区建设具有国际、国内良好的投资环境。
厦门成为经济特区后，城区发生了巨大的变化，一条条宽阔整洁的马路把源源不断的`商业带入了厦门。首先特区确定以发展出口加工工业为主要建设方向，现在全市已经形成以电子、仪器仪表、轻工、食品、饮料、纺织服装、五金机械、家具工艺为主的工业完整体系。各类工业企业达近300家，不仅能生产轻工、纺织等各种产品，而且还生产多种机械和海洋化工产品。全市工业产值比50年代增长了二三十倍。其次是发展旅游业、商业，并向转口贸易和过境贸易发展，使之成为我国东南地区的经济中心。为了使特区经济走向世界，特别要注重港口和机场建设。目前厦门正在东渡建设新港，包括1—5万吨的泊位和集装箱装卸桥。
可有谁知道在这繁荣的背后又有谁知道以前的厦门又是怎样的面貌呢，当时的厦门可以说是杂草丛生的一片荒岛，到处都是梯田和地瓜地，而现在的厦门，到处是都是高楼，到处都是商业街，厦门的飞速发展是不可估量的，它正在以它的发展来告诉世人厦门是海峡西岸的龙头，厦门正带领的海西的建设。
厦门不仅现在是海峡西岸的经济区，将来更是，而其会更繁荣。我们要谨记邓小平同志所说的“我们要把经济特区办得更好些更快些”。我们要让经济特区绽放出璀璨的光芒。
四级英语作文科学技术的飞速发展【七】
厦门有两主城区，一个是“湖里区”一个是“思明区”。思明区是厦门的市政府的所在地，而在古时候这里则是郑成功在厦门的根据地之一，而思明区则是郑成功为思念明朝而因此得名，也是郑成功带动了当时厦门的商业发展，更是他奠定了厦门几百年后成为中国一类港口城市。他也成为了让世人敬仰的大英雄。
厦门有着优越的地理条件。位于福建东南沿海，九龙江出海口，背靠漳州、泉州平原，濒临台湾海峡、与台湾本岛和澎湖列岛遥遥相对。市区面积1516平方公里，包括厦门岛和鼓浪屿两部分，其中特区面积131平方公里。人口33万。为福建省第二大工商业城市。厦门本岛内的思明、开元、鼓浪屿、湖里四个区为经济特区。思明区以商业闹市区为主；开元区以工厂区和新市区为主；鼓浪屿区是著名的风景旅游区；湖里区则是新兴的工业投资区。厦门港阔水深，不淤不冻，避风条件好，海岸线长234公里，其中深水岸线40公里，5万吨级巨轮可自由出入。目前，厦门口岸与世界80多个国家和地区有贸易往来，拥有通往香港的货运船队，不定期货轮可直达日本、澳洲和新加坡等世界大港。陆上交通也很方便，通过鹰厦铁路与全国铁路网相连。工业有一定基础，文化教育比较发达。周围地区为我国著名侨乡，且与台湾仅一水之隔，特区建设具有国际、国内良好的投资环境。
厦门成为经济特区后，城区发生了巨大的变化，一条条宽阔整洁的马路把源源不断的商业带入了厦门。首先特区确定以发展出口加工工业为主要建设方向，现在全市已经形成以电子、仪器仪表、轻工、食品、饮料、纺织服装、五金机械、家具工艺为主的工业完整体系。各类工业企业达近300家，不仅能生产轻工、纺织等各种产品，而且还生产多种机械和海洋化工产品。全市工业产值比50年代增长了二三十倍。其次是发展旅游业、商业，并向转口贸易和过境贸易发展，使之成为我国东南地区的经济中心。为了使特区经济走向世界，特别要注重港口和机场建设。目前厦门正在东渡建设新港，包括1—5万吨的泊位和集装箱装卸桥。
可有谁知道在这繁荣的背后又有谁知道以前的厦门又是怎样的面貌呢，当时的厦门可以说是杂草丛生的一片荒岛，到处都是梯田和地瓜地，而现在的厦门，到处是都是高楼，到处都是商业街，厦门的.飞速发展是不可估量的，它正在以它的发展来告诉世人厦门是海峡西岸的龙头，厦门正带领的海西的建设。
厦门不仅现在是海峡西岸的经济区，将来更是，而其会更繁荣。我们要谨记邓小平同志所说的“我们要把经济特区办得更好些更快些”。我们要让经济特区绽放出璀璨的光芒。
