有关英雄的英语作文中考【一】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构
有关英雄的英语作文中考【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
有关英雄的英语作文中考【三】
感受不深刻，语言欠流畅，表述不清晰
秦琼把犯人送到潞州后，因欠下房钱，又患重病，被迫卖出自己的金刚锏时，遇到了绿林好汉单信雄。他一直敬重秦琼的为人和武艺，便厚赠银两。秦琼在回家的途中因被错认为是响马，打斗中，失手打捕快获罪，被当地官府发配燕山，之后他又因为罗成父亲的关系，去山东节度使唐璧处当旗牌官。
秦琼到达山东不久，杨广谋害了隋文帝篡位，当他强迫大臣伍建章伪造遗诏布告天下大时，建章不从被，引起建章的儿子南阳太守伍之召起兵反隋。杨广命韩德虎攻破南阳后大赦大下登基。被判重刑的程咬金遇救出狱后，单雄信见他是位英雄，便拉他一起做打劫的无本生意，却得靠山王杨林的几十万两饷银，便当众烧毁捕批牌票。不料单雄信和程咬金又在黄土岗被捕，于是徐茂公等好汉人返山东，救出二人，聚义瓦岗寨，拥戴程咬金为“混世魔王”粉碎了隋军的多次征讨。
瓦岗军的程咬金觉得当皇帝没趣，把王位给了谋士李密。李密便自立为西魏王，统兵扫隋，得到天下响应。游幸到扬州的隋炀帝终于被自己最信任的宇文化及。李密趁机拿下扬州。但他不思进取，开始腐化堕落不说，还猜忌部下。而胸怀大志、深谋远虑的`李世民却思贤如渴，广纳人才。他十分赞赏已成为他妻子的长孙姑娘的观点：统一天下的大战，也是争夺人才的大战。于是那些叛离李密的谋士大将们纷纷投到李世民的门下，众叛亲离的李密终于被中国籍的王世充击败。
在李世民的统帅下，徐茂公、秦琼等人等率兵扫平了十八路反王。演绎了场颇为神奇的故事。
然而才高功大的李世民一直被太子李建成和齐王李元吉所嫉恨，他们谋害李世民的阴谋暴露后，忍无可忍的李世民翦除了李建成和李元吉。事后李世民也被群臣拥戴登上帝位，是为唐太宗。
总之，我相信精彩，不是说出来的，而是出来的！
有关英雄的英语作文中考【四】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
