初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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今天就是除夕了,在我们这里有个习俗,除夕夜的时候要包饺子,初一早上的时候要吃除夕夜包的饺子。下午和妈妈一起去附近的集市上去买了饺子皮,准备晚上包饺子用的,然后看着妈妈和饺子馅,到了晚上吃完饭的时候我们就一家人坐在一起包明天吃的饺子。
看着妈妈包饺子好简单,然后就自己也想试试,心里想着这么简单我也会包,然后就学者妈妈的样子动手包了起来,但是我想的太简单了,我是学着妈妈的样子包的,结果包出来的饺子皮都捏不住,用力把饺子皮捏住了,可是饺子下边却裂破了,连着包了好几个都是这样,然后我就坐一边生闷气去了,妈妈看见了就耐心的给我说,包饺子的时候饺子馅不能放太多了,哟啊不然饺子皮会裂破的,饺子馅也不能放太少,要不然吃着不好吃,我听了之后按照妈妈的说法把饺子馅少放了点。果然饺子皮没有再裂破,可是我一看和妈妈包的饺子放在一起,我包的饺子好丑。然后我就继续问妈妈取经,妈妈就手把手的教我,慢慢的,我报的饺子果然越来越好看。不到一会会,饺子就包完了,妈妈夸我学的很快。
明天早上就能吃到我自己包的饺子了,原来享受自己的劳动成果是一件很快乐的事,以后我要多帮妈妈做家务。
今天天气好晴朗,处处好风光我一边听着歌一边看着精彩的节目,我像一只快乐的小鸟在蓝天翱翔到时候。
正在这时一个晴天霹雳向我砸来,只见大姨婆从厨房拿出饺子皮和一盆饺子馅并宣布今天包饺子不参与者没有饭吃,我的心情像坐过山车一样从山顶跌到山下,向被霜打的茄子一样耷拉着脑袋缩在沙发上,嘴张的老大似乎可以装下一个乒乓球,此时我急得像热锅上的蚂蚁,真后悔平时应该多向妈妈学习。妹妹高高兴兴的走到桌子边拿起饺子皮就开包,而我极不情愿地从沙发上走到桌子边机械地拿起饺子皮,眼睛望着饺子皮发呆不知如何是好。此时饺子皮在大姨婆的手中像一个听话的孩子一样三下两下的成了一个饺子。我试着包了一个,怎么也做不好最后撑破了。妹妹看见了捂着嘴笑了起来,听见妹妹的嘲笑声,我的心里像针扎一般的疼,我的脸刷的一下红得像个番茄。真想找个地洞钻下去。从来没被嘲笑的'我竟然也会被嘲笑。
大姨婆似乎看见了我的囧样,向我伸出援助之手。告诉我:先拿一张饺子皮放在手中,然后舀一勺饺子馅在皮中间,然后用水蘸在饺子皮周围,再用食指和拇指捻着饺子皮里捻,折。一个有角有棱的饺子出炉了。我鼓起勇气拿了一张饺子皮,这一次按照大姨婆教的方法再包一次,明显比第一次包的饺子就出炉了。我看着自己的得意作品心里正高兴,结果我无意中看见大姨婆包的明显比我好多了。我的心一点点往下沉,得意之心完全没有了。心里有点自卑为什么大姨婆比我包的那么好,大姨婆仿佛就是一个透明镜一样,看出我心里在想什么鼓励我说:人生往往有许多坎坷,只要你坚持用心去做就会成功。我的心慢慢浮起来。再次继续做,我包的饺子一个比一个好好了。我的自信心又回来了,包着包着不知不觉饺子皮快包完了。我包的饺子一个比一个好看,一个比一个骄傲的挺起的大肚皮似乎在说:小静,你厉害战胜了自己。
煮完饺子,吃着香喷喷的饺子。心里特别高兴。
从这件事我悟出了一个道理:世上无难事,只怕有心人。只要你坚持不懈,用心去做一件事那么一定会成功!
暑假天气炎热,我们来到了磐安,虽然比义乌凉快,但大太阳还是毫不留情的照射了下来。知了也拼命的叫着,“好热啊,好热啊。
外面这么热又不能出去玩,好无聊啊,这时爸爸提议:“我们和你的朋友去漂流吧。“好耶!好耶!我顿时高兴的手舞足蹈。
我们一行人坐着车,翻山越岭来到了龙溪漂流区,那里人来人往,好不热闹。山顶上的`云朵如同仙境一般,太阳照射在水面,像在和细细的波浪挑逗。水边,放着许多皮划艇,一旁古木苍天,树顶上晃晃悠悠的绿流了下来,像几条充满生机与希望的瀑布,一直流到石头缝里。
我们穿好了救生衣,坐着游览车,到了漂流的起点,这里有一条溪,一直往下流。我和爸爸和两个好朋友坐一条皮划艇,每条皮划艇配两支船桨。我们刚坐上皮划艇,就顺着水流开走了,没想到,一开始就有一条小水瀑。“唰——一下,我们差点飞出去,皮划艇把水花翻起,形成了一道水帘。“哗——水花过去后,我们已经全身湿了。稍稍平稳了以后,这时轮到我们用桨划了,我和爸爸划起了船,可船不是转圈就是歪歪扭扭的前进。
顺着水流的方向,我们的船向河流中间的几块石头冲去。不好,要撞上了,爸爸使劲调转方向,终于才没有被撞上石头。这时我们迎面而来的又是一条很陡的水瀑,我和同伴如同见了猫的老鼠,尖叫起来。这条水瀑大约有两米多高,我抓住一根竹子,想把船拉回来,可是来不及了,我们连同竹子一起冲了下去。更可怕的事情发生了,我们前面是一块巨石,我们又尖叫起来,但我们的船撞上了巨石爸爸的帽子,被这突如其来的撞击给震了下去,我们赶快划出这块岩石区域去抓爸爸的帽子,帽子却像个顽皮的小孩,忽上忽下,我们也不甘示弱,特别是爸爸生龙活虎,差点跳下水去抓帽子了。我们看见爸爸的帽子就在眼前了,我们几个小孩都伸手去抓都没抓到,最后还是爸爸用船桨把帽子给勾了回来。一路漂流下来,遇到了好多险境,都被我们一一化解。
最后我们是团队中第二个到达终点的,总路程3500米,我们用了近两个小时,这也是一个不错的成绩好了。第一次漂流的感受就是——刺激,特别刺激。
1.Iam___________________________________(四班班长。
2.I________________(上学lateyesterday.
3.Three______________________________(足球运动员arethere.
4.Tom_______________________________(给我写信everyweek.
5.Myfather___________________(努力工作.
6.She______________________(起床atseven.
7.Therearealotof______________________(景点inShanghai.
8.LastyearIwanttoBeijingandmetJoe.We_____________________(成为朋友.
9.Heis_____________________(寻找hispen.
10.Mylittledog______________________(洗澡everyday.
11._____________________(从前,therewasafarmer_________________(住在山腰withhisson.
12._____________________(那时.I____________(是agirlofeight.
13.Wemust_______________________(保持健康.
14.Mygrandmais_______________(如此重soshecannotwalkfast.
15.Lastnightthey_____________________(回家late.
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