我的动物朋友兔子英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我的动物朋友兔子英语作文五年级【二】
一个爽朗的星期天，我坐在桌前看童话书。看着，看着，我渐渐进入了梦乡……
一只快乐的小兔子在从林里欢快地玩耍。这时，一只憨厚的一狗走过来，说：“小兔妹妹，你知道吗？这几天，狐狸要来我们丛林了。在附近的几个树林里，他了十几个动物，要知道，狐狸是最狡猾的'，你可要当心点呀！”小兔感激地说：“谢谢你！小狗哥哥。”小狗笑着说：“没事，再见！”
过了两三天，狐狸真的来了。狐狸不愧狐狸，先不动声色，先来到丛林之王——老虎家里。狐狸一进门，就大声喊道：这是丛林之王
老虎吧！“是呀！”狐狸不脸红地说：“真是久仰大名。”老虎不吃那一套，威风凛凛地说：“请问狐狸光临寒舍，有何见教？”狐狸委屈地说：“岂敢，岂敢，我只是来参观参观。”狐狸见老虎视而不见，就悻悻地走出了老虎的山洞。狐狸大摇大摆的走在丛林中，突然，它看见小兔在快乐地玩耍，看着，看着，狐狸流下了口水。因为狐狸像吃兔子肉，所以就开始馋。它走近一看，着兔子细皮嫩肉的，它再一次流下了口水。它走着走着，想了一个办法，就是再去老虎家，这样，那样……
第二天一早，狐狸就在老虎山洞前等里好一会儿，老虎出来后，狐狸就开始编造甜言蜜语。狐狸说：‘老虎大人呀！你还不知道吧！兔子在丛林里都称大王了，根本没把你放在眼里。”老虎说：“你以为我会相信你呀！”狐狸急了，说：“真的真的。”老虎气急败坏，走出去把兔子给了，狐狸在外面美餐了一顿。
要知道，不能轻易相信别人的话，不然别人和自己都要吃亏。
我的动物朋友兔子英语作文五年级【三】
（二）这是一个关于城市孩子的故事。
五年级孩鲁科、鲁赛是一对有着强烈好奇心的双胞胎，他们对什么都有兴趣，对什么事都想参与，并且总想弄出个所以然。可是"所以然"并不总青睐他们——他们想试验出一个处理废电池的办法，把电池捣乱。放锅里煮放冰箱里冻，办法没找到却发现个"怪"现象：热水比冷水冻得快！一问"为什么"?连他们的博士爸爸都说不好解答。
他们热爱科学，爱护环境。有时候歪打正着，有时候正打了却又不"着".同学牛二发家开有饭店"鳝鱼官",味道鲜美，大家爱吃。为了炫耀，牛二发带他们去郊区养鳝鱼的姑姑家参观。孩子们无意间发现喂鳝鱼的饲料里竟有雌激素，鲜美的鳝鱼一下变了味道。
同学们都有玩具。丁咚的玩具是活的：两只蚕。他的蚕会行"注目礼",丁咚因此颇为"牛气".同桌上课玩蚕被老师发现，蚕被当堂处。丁咚病了。鲁科、鲁赛说丁咚患了心理病—一他们看过心理疾病方面的书。同学们跑到郊外买了很多蚕送给丁咚，丁咚终于打开了心结，并且认识到了自己在课堂上玩蚕的错误。
他们在市场上碰到有人卖小啄木鸟，就和买鸟的老人竟价，想把小鸟救下来。当他们千辛万普救下小鸟后，才知道老人也是救鸟的。 鲁科、鲁赛喜欢电脑，常常在网上"抓"东西。老师要制作音乐 "课件"参加区里的教学比赛，鲁科、鲁赛帮着她做。老师的"课件" 听说得了一等奖。可发下奖来却是三等。原因据说是因为他们的"吹牛".两个小家伙好伤心。他们找了很多理由想去安慰老师，没想到他们找到老师，却被老师安慰了一番，还带他们去饭馆吃饭。
我国的淡水资源匮乏，可双胞胎的妈妈所在的`报社每天都要倒掉许多隔夜开水，饭店"鳝鱼官"刚好也想节约用水量，孩子们成立了 "水的传说兴趣小组",专门对此进行调查、研究。他们不但证明：隔夜的开水仍然可以喝。还设计了五种节水方案，让家长们大为感动。
暑假降临，学校打算利用假期给山区手拉手学校送些礼物。同学们人人奋勇，个个争先，有的买书，有的备衣物，还有的准备了录音机。鲁科、鲁赛想给他们送台电脑。他们家有一台坏电脑，牛正威家刚好也有一台，他们就把两台坏电脑"倒腾"成一台好电脑，让山区的朋友过了把病瘾。他们在山区遇到了更神奇的东西，一只乌龟"懂得科学",能预测天气，知道污染。孩子们在山里住了一晚，体验了朋友的真情，也经历了寻找UFO的激动。他们热爱山区。他们多想有一只神奇的龟啊！意外的是，当他们离开山村打开礼物时，那只神奇的龟竟真的被作为礼物送给了他们。孩子们好感动。
为了能在2008年做一个现代人，孩子们努力学习电脑、英语、开汽车。他们把自己设计的2008年奥运规划图通过电脑发给市长，得到了市长的表扬。在与校友科学家们的见面会上，同学们奋勇发言，各抒己见，畅想着美好的未来。 全剧用孩子的事角写孩子，充满着浓情、宽容和理解。幽默，智慧，开心，动人。
我的动物朋友兔子英语作文五年级【四】
我家里有一只小兔子，它全身的毛都是灰色的，但是尾巴是白色的。四条腿都很短，爪子当然也很小，它的耳朵还没有长到成年兔子那么长，一双黑的发亮的眼睛和一张三瓣嘴，特别可爱。
爷爷给小兔做了一个笼子，我见它身上的毛是灰色，便叫它小灰，它跑的`可快了。有一次爷爷放它出来玩，它跑到外面，我们费了好大力气才把小灰给捉了回来。
小灰很能吃，我每天晚上都会在笼子里放许多青菜，第二天看都会被它全部吃掉。它变胖了很多，身体像个球一样，所以我又改口叫它“灰球”了。它吃菜的样子太可爱了，小嘴一动一动的，一直不停。
灰球睡觉只有一小会儿，因为它很快就会睡醒然后吃东西。我每天早上去上学的时候，发现它已经在吃早饭了，晚上回去发现它也还吃饭，我甚至怀疑它是不是一天24小时都在吃，怪不得会长这么胖。但它胖了之后更可爱了，圆滚滚的。
这就是我最喜欢的小动物——小兔子。
我的动物朋友兔子英语作文五年级【五】
My name is Wu Yuwei .I’m 13 years old. I’m a Chinese girl .I study in Xinqi PrimarySchool.I’m in Class 3,Grade 6. I’m in Row 3. I have many friends in class.For example, Che Lei is my best friend . She is 13 years old , too. She is a good girl. We often help each other.There are four people in my family .They are my father, mother, sister and me .My parents are formers . They work hard. My sister is a student . I love them and they love me ,too.
