要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
“理想是石,敲出星星之火;理想是火,点燃熄灭的灯;理想是灯,照亮黑暗的路;理想是路,引你去走向黎明……“这是作家流沙河写的诗歌《理想》,我也有理想,而且有多,它们随时间推移而消逝或出现。
小的时候,看到书中一个个科学家的故事,觉得既羡慕又妒忌,便立志要做一个发明家,做出许许多多的东西,让后人也把我编进书里作。不知从哪一天起,我爱上手工,一有空就捣鼓这些,渐渐的,也有些想法,但是升到六年级,没有那么多时间,所以,发明家渐渐的远。有些时候,来灵感,又想写一本书,可坚持不下去,写一点后就再也写不出什么,于是,书也跟着发明家跑。
五年级,我又有一个理想:考入高新一中或西工大附中,于是,我吸取前几个理想没有达成的经验与教训,越发努力的学习,坚持不下去的时候便告诫自己,再忍忍,不能再失败!终于,我以优异的成绩先后考入高新一中和西工大附中!在接到电话时,我喜悦的心情难以言表,我体会到成功的滋味。现在,我的理想是分班考试考出个好成绩,我一定会加倍努力的!
没有理想的人,永远不能体会到理想实现时的喜悦心情,我坚信,有理想才会成功。
茫茫宇宙中,有许多小黑点,那就是黑洞。
\"黑洞\"这个词大家应该都很陌生,但太阳大家应该都不陌生。太阳是一颗恒星,黑洞是由大质量恒星在自身引力的作用下一直坍塌而形成的。黑洞十分巨大,宇宙中已知最大黑洞的质量是太阳的1960亿倍!相当于一个小型星系,真不可思议!
在宇宙中有无数颗黑洞,但人类探索到的却寥寥无几。离我们地球最近的黑洞有2800光年,而一光年则是9.46拍米,合94600亿公里,可见一个黑洞离我们之远!如果让人去走一光年需要2.25亿年,乘坐世界上最快的飞机也得飞9万多年,一光年就这么远,2800光年更不用说了。黑洞形成后可以吞掉一切事物,包括光。这是因为黑洞的第二宇宙速度已经超过了光速,如果有一颗恒星在附近,它可以在5秒内就把恒星吞了。但如果两个黑洞相撞,则有两种情况:横着撞,两个黑洞会渐渐演化成一个更大的黑洞;一横一竖,则大的吞掉小的。总而言之,两个黑洞相撞会形成一个更大的黑洞。真不愧是真空吸尘器啊!太可怕了!
可那些被吸入黑洞里的东西去哪儿了?人类一进黑洞就会被咬裂,所以没有人知道。
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
昨天我还吮着奶瓶,躺在妈妈的怀里,今天我已经是一个小学五年级的学生。时间,总在不经意间从指尖流逝,而且一去永不回来。我梦想着时光能一直停留在过去,停留在那无忧无虑的、单纯快乐的过去。可这只是幻想,正如一个个绚丽的泡泡,虽然美丽,却终究是会破碎的。我们要面对现实,这是无法逃避的,不是吗?
“既然无法逃避,那为何不微笑着面对呢?”智者的话解开了我的心结。是啊!我们不仅要面对,更要微笑着面对。试想,当你遇到难题,绞尽脑汁,苦思冥想许久却还想不出头绪来,此时的心情一定很烦躁。这时,你不妨学学智者,给自己一个微笑,放松一下,大声对自己说:“我能行。”也许,在放松之际,你就会得到灵感,不费吹灰之力解开这道题。做题如此,人生更是如此。遇到困难时,给自己一个微笑;心情烦躁时,给自己一个微笑。相信这样乐观的态度,一定会取得事半功倍的效果。
我一定会微笑着面对人生,跨过人生的一道道坎,不让时光白白流失!
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