英语作文给学生改分【一】
Dear Dr.Know,
Can you help me?
I'm not happy because there are too many rules at home.Every morning I (have to / mustget up at six o'clock.At school I(have to/must wear a school uniform and I (have to/must keep my hair short.What should I do?
Yours,
XXX
英语作文给学生改分【二】
Dear Daddy,
亲爱的爸爸，
Thank you very much for your letter written to me. In your letter , you not only expressed your expectation to me , but also showed all your love to me . I was deeply moved . Thanks again ,Daddy .You said ," I hope you get bravery and perseverance, and can quickly grasp living skills like a lion ". Now I want to tell you that I will try my best to do everything well and live up to your expectations . Dear father , you are a great lion in my mind .
谢谢你给我写信。在信中，你不仅仅表达了你对我的期望，还展示了你对我所有的爱。我深深感动了。再次谢谢你，爸爸。你说，“我希望你能够变得勇敢和有耐心，并且能像狮子般快速的掌握生活技能。”现在我想说我会尽我最大的.努力把所有事情都做好来达到你的期望。亲爱的爸爸，你是我心中的狮子。
When I am absent mind , when I am depressed, you , my dear father is always there . Your advice and encouragement guide me through many difficulties . Thank you , Dad, for your help and understanding. I love you , Dad ,forever!
当我茫然、绝望时，是你，我亲爱的爸爸永远都在我身边。你的建议和勇气引导我克服许多的困难。谢谢你，爸爸，谢谢你的帮助和理解。我永远爱你，爸爸。
英语作文给学生改分【三】
"Freedom and progress are the goals of art, just as they are the goal of our whole life," said the great musician Beethoven.
This winter holiday, I read a great book - celebrity biography. The book touched my heart deeply. The author of celebrity biography is French romain rolland. The book is composed of three biographies of Beethoven, Michelangelo and Tolstoy.
Each of these three biographies enlighten me. One of the things that struck me most was Beethoven. Beethoven devoted his life to music, but fate always played a trick on him. He was sickly and sickly in his childhood. At the age of 3, hearing gradually declines, as a musician, this is a fatal blow, and his character, determined, does not bow to fate and continues to advance on the music road. Middle-aged, he hearing has completely recession, can only use to communicate with people, but this does not make him stop writing, but not to abandon all, into the arms of nature, continue to compose the immortal music chapter.
"Symphony of destiny" is one of Beethoven's most familiar and favorite works. The hero of Beethoven's eyes was so brave, so unyielding, so unyielding, as Beethoven himself was to write the music of the struggle with fate. Every time I close my eyes, listen to the music, mind is such a scenario: a brave knight, holding a sword, difficulties, setbacks and pain like the enemy, knight along the way encounter the enemy, knight did not flinch, but cut down all the way, the lost the courage, the triumphant return. When I finally opened my eyes, I found that I had the courage to overcome my courage and courage. After that, whenever I'm discouraged, in my heart silently singing "destiny symphony", encourage myself to like Beethoven don't blindly drown by misery and disaster, throat to do take fate of the strong!
"Man, you must strive for yourself!" This is one of the words Beethoven tells people. Yes, people can't cling to vegetation, create life with tough, bold heart and create art!
英语作文给学生改分【四】
Dear Dad,
Long time no see, I do miss you. Well, let me tell you something about my life here.To tell the truth, i live a normal life just as anywhere i can live.(我过着一个在任何地方都普通的生活 My life is revolved on work and work.(我的生活除了学习还是学习Frankly,i feel tired sometimes(老实说，我有时候觉得很累.But i see, studying is the whole life to students like me.(但是我知道，学习是像我这样的学生的全部 So no matter how difficult, i will do my utmost .所以不管多艰难，我都会尽自己最大的努力。
Best wishes for you .
英语作文给学生改分【五】
I'm wangNan,a student of No.1 Middle School.
I have a gooa friend,Jim.He' an USA girl.We are both in Class Two,Grade Eight.She is 15 years old,one year older than me. We both study hard.I'm good at physices,but she's good at math.We often help each other with lessons.Both of us like helping others. We both like sports very much.Jim enjoy playing basketball.but Ilike palying soccer. She likes green but Ilike red.
Tough we are different in my ways,we are good friends.
Yours,
XXX
