英语高分作文急救【一】
My name is li hua, and the most impressive thing of my life came to my life yesterday. When I walked near by a lake with my friend, he was falling into the lake, and I was so worried. I didt know how to swim, but I had to save my friends live. I was shouting and asking someone to help.
After that, the most impressive thing happened which was a young solder that jump into the lake without thinking, swimmed to the palace where my friend were, and got him out of the lake. After the young solder checked if there was nothing wrong with my friend, he went away. In conclusion, this young solder is the one who i respect a lot!
英语高分作文急救【二】
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ________(A的优点之一. Besides ____________(A的优点之二.
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ________(A的第一个缺点.To make matters worse,____________(A的第二个缺点.
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ________(我的看法.
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ________(对前景的预测.
英语高分作文急救【三】
The topic of ①________(主题is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②________(支持A的理由一What is more, ③________(理由二. Moreover, ④________(理由三.
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,________(支持B的理由一. Secondly (besides,⑥____________(理由二. Thirdly (finally,⑦____________(理由三.
From my point of view, I think ⑧________(我的观点. The reason is that ⑨____________(原因. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
(2 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Some people believe that ①________(观点一. For example, they think ②________(举例说明.And it will bring them ③________(为他们带来的好处.
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④____(我不同意该看法的理由一. For another thing, ⑤____(反对的理由之二. Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ⑥____(我对文章所讨论主题的看法.英语六级写作技巧
英语高分作文急救【四】
妈妈爱我，我要让妈妈知道我也爱她，学校也提倡我们爱妈妈，就要帮妈妈做家务。
一天，妈妈有些不舒服，说：“妈妈有些累了，想休息一会儿，晚一点吃饭吧。”看到妈妈憔悴的脸色，想到每次我生病时，都是妈妈忙前忙后，无微不致的关心我，我就自告奋勇的说：“妈妈，您先休息，晚饭的事，我来搞定！”真的，妈妈露出欣喜的表情，“当然是真的.，今天咱们互换一下角色，你来当孩子，我来当妈妈，让我来照顾你一下。”
“那太好了，我就放手了，你来负责吧，我来做一个听话的孩子。”说完乖乖进屋休息了。
突然让我来负责厨房，还有点小兴奋，做点什么呢，想想平时生病时妈妈照顾我，总说吃点粥吧，这个好消化，这个养胃，再来点西红柿炒鸡蛋，这个有营养，还有维生素，好嘞，有了，就是它了。我系上围裙，开始忙碌起来，放米，放水，洗菜，切菜，放油，剪鸡蛋……原来看妈妈做得又快又好，挺简单的，怎么到我这里就这么不听话呢，实际操刀，并不是那么容易的，为了不打扰妈妈，我自已慢慢摸索着干，费了半天力，终于把西红柿和葱花切成大小不一的一盘菜，我在外边忙活，油烟机嗡嗡作响，听到妈妈在屋里传来不放心的问候：
“你可小心点！”“没问题，放心吧，马上好了，一会上大餐！”说着，把平时从妈妈那学来的炒菜技术全都用上了，等等，还有，我生病时，特别爱吃妈妈做的煮苹果，对了，开始削苹果，放冰糖，又一番忙碌，终于，饭出锅了，我精心的盛到盘子里，看着热气腾腾的饭菜，好像平时妈妈一样快乐的叫着：“饭好喽，我家宝贝快来吃！”
当妈妈做在桌子前，看到我准备的饭菜时，非常感动，在我的催促下，尝了一口说：“真好吃，我的病全好啦！”我开心的笑了，当我吃了一口菜，哇，好咸哪！
原来，妈妈的爱，就好像是《猜猜我有多爱你》里的一样，你的爱有多少，妈妈对你的爱永远是它的好几倍！
英语高分作文急救【五】
妈妈好不容易放了一天假，可她并没有休息，却做起了各种家务活儿来了。我看在眼里，心想：妈妈这么辛苦，我已经长大了，应该帮助妈妈做一些家务活儿了。于是，我也去拿了一块抹布擦起窗子来了。擦窗真难啊：爬上爬下，擦了正面擦反面。有的地方的垃圾粘在窗上，得用指甲刮，用清洁济抹，用洗洁球儿擦。一会儿功夫，我就累得气喘吁吁，大汗淋淋了。
直到中午，我们还没有把全部窗子擦干净。我们只好吃饭了。吃好午饭，稍微休息了一会儿，我们就接着干起来。接着，我们一起上楼去扫地、拖地板。妈妈看着满头大汗的我，心疼地问道：“你累吗？”我说：“我……我……不……累……”妈妈笑着对我说：“你已经这样了，还说不累，快去休息一下，看电视去。”
我休息了一会儿，觉得身上不好像刚才那么热了，就起身去继续劳动了。这时候，看看妈妈，哪里比我出的汗少呢？只见汗球巴达巴达从她脸上往下滴，我夺下妈妈手中的抹布擦起地板来了。妈妈赞许地点了点头，随后倒在床上睡觉了。因为太累，不一会儿，她就睡着了。
我继续抓紧时间干活，轻手轻脚，生怕吵醒妈妈。
妈妈醒来后，我也正好做完了家务。于是，我就叫妈妈看一看地面，再看一看门窗。妈妈看着看着，脸上的表情逐渐丰富起来，一股劲地表扬我。
妈妈的肯定固然让我高兴，而用自己的劳动减轻了妈妈的劳累更让人欣慰，我想：以后，我会帮妈妈做更多的家务的。
