牡丹江英语中考作文真题【一】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构
牡丹江英语中考作文真题【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
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One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
牡丹江英语中考作文真题【三】
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第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
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第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
牡丹江英语中考作文真题【四】
在牡丹江的南端是美丽的江滨公园，一条大江缓缓流过。像一条弯弯曲曲的玉带。江边花红柳绿、绿草如茵。一尊八女投江的雕像矗立在公园中央，记载着那段凄凉的历史。在牡丹江北端就是迷人的北山了。它虽不如黄山的婀娜多姿，也不如长白山的妩媚动人，但它却能给人一种清新自然地美。站在山顶向南眺望可以看到繁荣昌盛的.牡丹江全景。牡丹江林地广阔、禽兽繁多，牡丹江曾被誉为“棒打獐子瓢舀鱼，野鸡飞到饭锅里。”的宝地。由于牡丹江冬季漫长，所以冬雪之景丰富多彩。江滨公园的冰灯、雪雕使人大饱眼福，牡丹江上的冬泳更令人称奇叫绝。
这就是我的家乡—美丽迷人的牡丹江。
牡丹江英语中考作文真题【五】
我的家乡是一座美丽的城市——黑龙江省牡丹江市，它既有不同寻常的过去，也有着辉煌的现在。
听爸爸妈妈说，他们小的时候，家乡原本是一个贫困的地方。当时，人们生活非常困难，只有几条泥泞的土路，下雨时路上都是泥，交通很不方便。人们吃的只有应季蔬菜，品种虽然少，但也算是够吃了。穿着的服装颜色比较单调，灰，黑，白，衣服基本上都会褪色，有的还需要打上补丁。就更别提什么家用电器了，有一台收音机，一块挂表，就算是当时最“富裕”的家庭了。
光阴似箭，日月如梭。一晃二十年过去了，随着经济的飞速发展，人们的生活水平不断提高，呈现在我们眼前的是一派新的景象。如今这里一座座高楼拔地而起，街道宽敞平坦，一条条高速公路贯穿南北。马路两旁花草成片，绿树成荫。有线电视早已送到千家万户，人们的物质生活和文化生活也都有了很大改善：人们穿起了各色的新装，样式新颖的皮鞋，五颜六色的裤子，使人显得春光满面，精神焕发。而且家用电器也都纷纷进入了家庭之中，电视、洗衣机、电冰箱、电脑、空调等一样都不能少，人们再也不用为吃穿发愁了。
泥泞的小路魔术般的变成了宽阔的柏油马路，下雨天也不怕出门难了，雨水的冲刷会让马路变得更加整洁，干净。公路上，样式繁多的汽车来来往往，川流不息，像一条彩色的河在流动。想去哪已经不成问题了，坐上车很快就能到。目前，这里最热闹最繁华的要属商业一条街了，真可以称之为“购物的天堂”应有尽有。我们的生活真是“芝麻开花节节高”啊!
另外还要告诉大家，我的家乡还有一个更大的改变，那就是它已经是一座美丽的.旅游城市，风光秀丽的镜泊湖宛如一颗璀璨夺目的明珠镶嵌在祖国北疆上，它以独特的朴素无华的自然美闻名于世，吸引越来越多的国内外游人。海林市威虎山城、牡丹江北山公园、八女投江英烈群雕、牡丹峰国家级自然保护区、吊水楼瀑布，还有黑龙潭跳水表演，这山、这水、这景、这情，令人惊叹神往，流连忘返。
家乡的变化使我倍受鼓舞，我一定要努力学习，掌握各种知识，用自己的双手来建设自己的家乡，使家乡的明天更加辉煌!
牡丹江英语中考作文真题【六】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
