本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
Mother is always the greatest person in the family, because she takes care of everything, she does all the housework, though she is a housewife, what she is so heavy and great. I nearly help my mother to do the housework, when I go home after school, I always go out to play with my friend and then until the dinner, I will come back. Now as I grow up, I start to realize that I need to help my mother, I should share some housework, so that I can reduce her burden. Since I help my mother with the housework, she looks so happy, she will praise me in front of her friends. I feel proud of myself.
妈妈总是家里面最伟大的人,因此她照料着家里的一切,她做了所有的家务,虽然她是一个家庭主妇,但是她所做的\'繁重而伟大。我几乎不怎么帮她做家务,当我放 学回家后,我总是出去和我的朋友玩,然后直到晚饭时间,我才回来。现在我长大了,我开始意识到我需要帮助妈妈,我应该分享家务,这样就能减少她的负担。自 从我帮助妈妈做家务,她看起来很开心,她会在她朋友面前表扬我。我为自己感到自豪。
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