五年级英语作文题大全【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文题大全【二】
沙滩上有无数贝壳，一颗比一颗耀眼，不过太多了，我就捡最耀眼的一颗来说吧!
母亲，最爱我们的人，然而那都成为一件件事过去了，但有两件最刻骨铭心的我至今记忆犹新。
记得那日，阳光明媚，我正准备背上书包去上学。“把雨衣带上，今天要下雨，千万别着凉。。。。。。”还没等妈妈说完，我就不耐烦地走了。我心想：今天阳光明媚，怎么可能下雨?想着想着，学校到了，我跟同学们一起开心的上课，放学了，一切依旧风平浪静，可不知怎的，突然打起了雷，我后悔极了，没听妈妈的劝告带上雨衣，今天中午怎么回家呀。同学们都被爸爸妈妈陆续接走了，我就像一只热锅上的蚂蚁焦急地等待着。这是一个熟悉的身影向我走来，渐渐的靠近我，原来是妈妈，妈妈你的爱是无私的!
还有一天，我和妈妈去公园玩，我由于一时贪玩，趁妈妈不注意，溜走了。等我返回原地找妈妈的时候，妈妈已经不见了，于是我哭了，这是我依稀看到了妈妈，然后我发现：妈妈像疯子一样，见人就问的寻找我。我出去抱住妈妈，我们一起回家了，虽然回家的时候妈妈骂了我一顿，但我知道妈妈这是爱我，我再一次感受到了爱的无私。
妈妈对我的爱是一首唱不完的歌，她用她那美丽的手一次又一次地编织着对我的爱。
我怎么敢伤害妈妈，妈妈时时刻刻都在关心着我，时时刻刻都在照顾着我，要什么说一声妈妈就会给我，我凭什么伤害她!
五年级英语作文题大全【三】
一路上，雨越下越大，小雨伞的下面我俩紧紧地靠在一起。雨点把我的衣角打湿了，小灵怕我的手也被雨淋湿，便悄悄地把雨伞移向我这边，我只顾着想快点回家，根本没发觉。不知不觉到了我的家门口，我见雨太大，便拉住了小灵的手，让她等大雨过后再走。说话的'同时，我发现小灵的手变得很冷很湿。我才发觉，小灵身上的衣服有一半被淋湿了。看到小灵这样子，我心疼地说：“小灵，你没事吧？”小灵若无其事地说：“别担心！我没事的。再见！”说完，她转身打起雨伞就走了，我大声喊道：“小灵，路上你小心点！”
望着小灵远去的身影，霎时间有一股暖流缓缓地流进了我的心里。
