我去过北京英语作文五年级【一】
当红彤彤的太阳从董藩冉冉升起的时候，我们和妈妈就要去中山公园观赏风景。
下了车，来到了中山公园的门前，在中山公园的门前上面写着“中山公园”，走中山公园，第一个映入眼系的就是湖，湖很大，在远处看就像一个碧绿的大圆盘。近看湖，湖清可见底，水边有许多小蝌蚪。一阵风拂过，一湖的水就漾起波纹，好看得很。
在湖中央有一座桥，我们们登上了桥，在远处看这座桥就像一座普通的桥，近看就不是这么回事了。因为这个桥上面刻有许多雕纹，所以很特别。桥下有成群结队的鱼儿，若你丢下一小块面包在水里，鱼儿一定会拼拼活地抢着块面包。鱼儿千姿百态，五颜六色，可爱极了。
前面是草坪，草坪上有一部分人在休息，大部分人都在放风筝。
我们们接着往前走，路旁的树木巍然直立，绿树成荫。我们们到了有孙中山的石像的地方。妈妈说孙中山是第一个领着中国人打日本人的呢，中山公园就是因孙中山而起名的呢。孙中山石像下面还有字呢，字里说得跟妈妈说的一样。
妈妈看了一下表就带我们离开了中山公园。
中山公园真美。
我去过北京英语作文五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我去过北京英语作文五年级【三】
自从学了关于首都北京的课文，我就一直向往着去看一看，想不到这个暑假完成了愿望。有一天清晨，妈妈忽然发现过两天的高铁有票，于是马上抢，居然抢到。因为外公家族那边都是铁路人，所以我很想坐一坐据说最快的铁路——高铁。这样就可以一次过满足了我的两个愿望——坐高铁去北京！
当我踏上高铁，感觉许多东西都很新奇。车厢里很干净，没有其他火车那样有股异味，车上有洗手池，冷热热水，每个车厢还有显示列车的时速，最快居然达到309公里的时速，好快啊！
经过八个小时的车程，我们在下午到达了北京西站。因为妈妈去过许多次北京，而且做好了攻略，所以很快就到了入住的酒店——北京首都大酒店。听说这酒店以前只接待外宾的，但现在我们也能入住。晚上我们去了附近著名的王府井大街。北京街头有许多警察，北京西站有，王府井大街这也有。我们去了很出名的全聚德吃烤鸭。虽然味道不错，但我觉得还是我们广东的＊＊＊鹅更好吃更便宜。
接下来几天，我们没有去人挤人的著名景点，因为妈妈说北京城里都是景。我们去了恭王府、北海公园、北京＊＊＊等，还去了许多很有特色的胡同。恭王府听说是清朝一个的家里，真的好大好大，我们足足逛了一个多小时才走完。府里面有许多房子，还有山和湖，就好像一个大公园一样。这次旅程北京＊＊＊是我们必去的地方，因为课本上写得很好。我们是下午去看降旗的，虽然＊＊＊广场非常大，但很多人，当看到解放军叔叔降下旗，护旗经过金水桥进＊＊＊时，大家都很激动。北京的胡同真多，而且很漂亮，在一处街头，我看见一间很有中国特色的房子，他的屋顶是尖尖的，门窗红红绿绿的，最漂亮是那些窗子上的玻璃，七彩缤纷，好漂亮啊！
北京真的很美，怪不得以前的皇帝都把这作为首都。这次的五天旅行实在不够，我希望有时间再来！
我去过北京英语作文五年级【四】
微风习习，我们从家中出发，穿过茂密翠绿的树林，坐着车向北奔驰，车行约二小时，到达了首都最大的北京科技馆。
一进科技馆，我们就看到了非常漂亮的球形方阵，其数量大约达到了９６０颗左右。随即我们开始参观科技馆。
第一层是“华夏之光”，我们参观了古代人民创造的各种新奇设备。我们还亲自进到“观星屋”内，“观星屋”里有一些小孔，小孔有的上面有一片“天”，“天”中有许多亮晶晶的东西，想必这就是“星星”了吧。这些“星星”照映在地板上，地板上就有了一些类似于眼睛的东西，可真是可怕啊！我和妹妹从里面出来后，其他人陆续进去参观。我们在一艘小小的“船舰”旁吃了点零食。这艘船舰可真奇特呀！这艘“船”的船尖两侧各有一个圆溜溜的“眼睛”，没有船帆。“华夏之光”中还有走马灯、各种古代天文仪器、水车。
第二层是“探索与发现”。在这一层中，有一个黑漆漆的“山洞”，里面有一些房屋模型。我们在这一层还了解到了各种星球的运行轨道、体质、重量、资源和形成。
第三层是“科技与生活”。在这一层中，有一些可以亲自体验的游戏和互动，还有一些考验智力和人体健康的游戏屏幕，而且还是电子版的。我体验了一个能骑却不能前进的“自行车”，这是测验身体还有多少卡路里的，骑得越快，卡路里就越来越高。我还亲自参观了曾经飞向过太空的飞船。当我走进飞船里的一刹那，我的心情无比激动、自豪，因为我以前只在电视中看到的飞船，今日却近在咫尺了！
一天的游览就这样结束了，真想再来玩一次！
我去过北京英语作文五年级【五】
我没有欣赏祖国的壮丽山河，也没有游览过许多名胜古迹，不过，我去过一个地方，枣的家园——柳林。
柳林是妈妈的故乡，也是我去过最美的地方。
在去年秋季的时候，妈妈对我说：“你想不想去妈妈的故乡柳林去看看?”
我迫不及待地问妈妈：“您的故乡是什么样子的呢?”我当时很好奇。
妈妈说：“那是大红枣的家园，秋季会结出了红彤彤的大红枣，由其是早晨的红枣，叫“水露枣”，特别香甜可口，这里的早晨雾蒙蒙的，很是一大好风景，这里还有你喜欢的羊、小猫、狗、鸡……还有一大片农田，我们可去大农田摘果实，吃大红枣。怎么样?你去不去?”
我一听，一口答应了。
然后，我们便出发了。路上，我一直在问妈妈：“妈妈，快到了没有?”“妈妈，你吃过这儿的红枣吗?”“妈妈，你从小就在这儿长大吗?”“妈妈，你摘过果实吗?”……我把妈妈都问糊涂了。
到了柳林，妈妈的亲戚朋友马上出来迎接我们，还问我们身体好不好?城里的生活好不好?……问了一大堆。我呢?站在远处，闻这里的各种香味和香气。
“嗯，浓浓的红枣味，嗯，玉米的香甜味，嗯，豆角的青香味，嗯，稻田的谷香味，嗯，西红柿的美味。啊!太好了”我赞叹道。
闻完香味和香气，就应该实际行动了吧。我和妈妈一人拿一个大袋子，出去摘果实了，“一颗、两颗、三颗、四颗、五颗、六颗……”我们先摘红枣，再摘玉米，然后摘豆角，最后摘西红柿。不一会儿，两个袋子就装满了。
我们边摘边吃，嗯，果真和妈妈说的一样，红枣香甜美味极了，我和妈妈一直吃呀吃呀，一会儿吃得我和妈妈肚子大大的，饭也吃不下了。今天我过了个红枣瘾。
不一会儿，天就黑了，我们得回家了，我恋恋不舍地离开了柳林。
我真想再去一次柳林，再吃一次红枣，再过过红枣瘾。
我去过北京英语作文五年级【六】
大家都知道去北京必须去的旅游景点吧!没错，那就是长城、故宫、天坛和鸟巢水立方，我今天就去了我今天就去了长城，都说“不到长城非好汉”不去那儿怎么行呢?
我们来到了长城脚下，景象却令我大失所挫，这哪是长城呀这完全就是个集市嘛!长城脚下的纪念品琳琅满目，各式各色样样都有，我们随便找了一个人问才明白：原来长城还没有到，还要往上走。这时大家看到了缆车，都要去做，不过，我们小孩不同意，但是少数服从多数，大人们凭借着人多的优势把我们拉去坐缆车了。在缆车上我们往下看，哇塞，只见长城像一条大蛇一样，在陡峭的山上滑行似的，我现在真惊叹古代人的工艺呀!
到了一半，我们就开始爬了，爬了一会儿，我发现长城每隔一会儿就会到一个“回”字形的一个小碉堡，是供古代人站岗和休息的，让我不禁想起了“烽火连三月”的情景。大家都说长城奇是奇在建在陡峭的山峰和长的，但我认为长城奇还因为虫子种类繁多，这里到处都是虫子，七星瓢虫、红蜘蛛、黑寡妇......样样都有!还有一些不知名的小虫，在长城上，你只要随便一看，都会是虫子!刚开始爬都是，我们一起的，可是后来，家长们越爬越慢，路越爬越陡峭，于是我爬一段陡峭的地方就等一下后面的家长，等他们过来后就继续追前面的妹妹他们。当我们登上长城时，又做了滑道下来，滑道是一个非常危险的体育运动，稍有不慎，就有可能被抛入山野中，我是和妈妈做的，我来控制快慢，往前推就是快，往后拉就是慢，妈妈叫我，一直慢慢的走，可是后面的爸爸一直追着我们不放，我们只得快一点点，到了最后一个弯，我跟妈妈讲，都最后一个弯了，就刺激一下吧!妈妈同意了，于是我把杆子往前使劲一推，滑轮立刻飞快的冲了出去，哇，太刺激了，就像是墨杜萨台风袭来一样!就这样我们回到了长城脚下。一路上，我都在回味那儿的景色。
亲身体验的比从书上看到的就是不一样!
