写北京英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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写北京英语作文五年级【二】
偶然翻动书页，竟从中滑落一片银杏叶，纵式的纹理在叶面上凸显，好似褪去金黄色外衣的古老油纸。
记忆的船缓缓摇进时间的河。那一次，我与北京相约。
火车驶了一夜才到北京，一下车便仿佛步入一个鼎盛的王朝。飞檐流金，霓虹溢彩，城门与高架桥齐飞，名园与广场一色，传统元素与新潮流相处和谐，我不禁高呼：“北京，我来啦！”
犹记得老舍的《四世同堂》中，那草木葳蕤的小羊圈胡同，沉淀着爱国主义者的深情，承载着亡国的苦难。辗转乘了几次地铁，出站南锣鼓巷，眼前并无高楼，而是用朴素的灰铺就的迂回巷道，如走进老屋时撞见的插在旧瓶中的一支芦苇，虽朴素平常却拨动内心的弦，百转千回。
北京人是善于在平凡中寻找情趣的。“总布胡同”“炒豆胡同”，从这些名字中依稀可以窥见那牵动人们生活的炊烟，轻轻淡淡地笼住几声鸟鸣，继而在蓝天散去。走入一条胡同，蓦然与一宅院邂逅。据说那是清代某户贵族的府邸，一道道高墙封住了闺中人对秋天的所有情思，唯见一棵银杏似哨兵高高瘦瘦地立着，小扇似的金叶缀了满满一枝头，风吹叶摇，一纸一纸的金黄翩跹飞落，似蜻蜓颤动金色的翅膀。
休息片刻，便去了香山。面前不是五岳般的险峻山峰，而是绵长开阔的缓坡，两旁的店铺鳞次栉比：暖黄的葫芦上飘着红丝带；京剧的生旦净丑，或巧笑倩兮，或怒睁嗔目，或花脸招摇……这一切怎能不唤起对传统文化的认知？
香山的枫叶只尖上泛点点朱色，似小姑娘脸上泛起的红晕。倒是银杏花枝招展，戴着金色的步摇，一步乐，一步一欢笑。
“那里，那里！”循着人们欢喜的目光看去，一棵枫树，“小枫一夜偷天酒”，秋日的醉意给它抹上了烈焰红唇，舍不得碰——红得那么透明，那么彻底，是秋日天空下璀璨的红水晶。于是乎，捡一落叶，聊以纪念。
火车穿过无边的田野，回头看，京都的轮廓渐渐淡出视线。掏出那枚红叶再看，它分明描绘了古都的历史，绣出了明日的辉煌。
写北京英语作文五年级【三】
考完试第二天，我和爸爸还有堂哥去了北京。
哈！终于放假了！告诉你们，我现在兴奋地不得了，因为，我可以到处欢快地游玩去啦！去哪呢？对了！北京！
到了北京，我听小姨说，有八只大熊猫从四川运到了北京，现在就在北京动物园。刚才我还愁来北京去哪玩呢，现在好了，不仅可以看到可爱的大熊猫，还可以看到其他的动物。我迫不及待的催小姨，想要快点起程。我们出发了！
到了北京动物园，首先映入眼帘的是一个大花坛，花坛里的话五颜六色，十分好看。可我已经对花熟视无睹了，我只想尽快看到可爱的`熊猫。于是我们以最快的速度先来到了亚运熊猫馆。人真多！一共才有三只熊猫，怎么那么少？我问小姨才知道，原来这里的熊猫不是从四川运来的。这里的熊猫真懒，好像雕塑一样。第一只好像很害羞，怎么也不肯把头转过来；第二只用一只手拄着脑袋好像很傲慢，却一动不动；第三只很活泼，在那里来回走动，好像很欢迎我们这些游客的到来......
接着，我们来到了奥运熊猫馆。这里的熊猫才是从四川运来的。我数了数，怎么才七只？哦！看！桥上还有一只啊！这只调皮的熊猫！这里的熊猫虽不那么懒，可是很贪吃，瞧！他们正吃香喷喷的竹子呢！这里的居住环境也不错，有水池，还有小瀑布呢！熊猫生活在这里真惬意啊！
我们还去了海洋馆，那里有五颜六色稀奇古怪的鱼。给我印象最深的是罗纹鱼，它不仅颜色好看，是紫色的，上面还有些罗纹。而且它样子古怪，头上像被人打了似的，鼓起了一个大大的包。我们还去看了海狮海豚表演，精彩极了......
这次的游玩，让我在饱了一番眼福！
写北京英语作文五年级【四】
大家都知道去北京必须去的旅游景点吧!没错，那就是长城、故宫、天坛和鸟巢水立方，我今天就去了我今天就去了长城，都说“不到长城非好汉”不去那儿怎么行呢?
我们来到了长城脚下，景象却令我大失所挫，这哪是长城呀这完全就是个集市嘛!长城脚下的纪念品琳琅满目，各式各色样样都有，我们随便找了一个人问才明白：原来长城还没有到，还要往上走。这时大家看到了缆车，都要去做，不过，我们小孩不同意，但是少数服从多数，大人们凭借着人多的优势把我们拉去坐缆车了。在缆车上我们往下看，哇塞，只见长城像一条大蛇一样，在陡峭的山上滑行似的，我现在真惊叹古代人的工艺呀!
到了一半，我们就开始爬了，爬了一会儿，我发现长城每隔一会儿就会到一个“回”字形的一个小碉堡，是供古代人站岗和休息的，让我不禁想起了“烽火连三月”的情景。大家都说长城奇是奇在建在陡峭的山峰和长的，但我认为长城奇还因为虫子种类繁多，这里到处都是虫子，七星瓢虫、红蜘蛛、黑寡妇......样样都有!还有一些不知名的小虫，在长城上，你只要随便一看，都会是虫子!刚开始爬都是，我们一起的，可是后来，家长们越爬越慢，路越爬越陡峭，于是我爬一段陡峭的地方就等一下后面的家长，等他们过来后就继续追前面的妹妹他们。当我们登上长城时，又做了滑道下来，滑道是一个非常危险的体育运动，稍有不慎，就有可能被抛入山野中，我是和妈妈做的，我来控制快慢，往前推就是快，往后拉就是慢，妈妈叫我，一直慢慢的走，可是后面的爸爸一直追着我们不放，我们只得快一点点，到了最后一个弯，我跟妈妈讲，都最后一个弯了，就刺激一下吧!妈妈同意了，于是我把杆子往前使劲一推，滑轮立刻飞快的冲了出去，哇，太刺激了，就像是墨杜萨台风袭来一样!就这样我们回到了长城脚下。一路上，我都在回味那儿的景色。
亲身体验的比从书上看到的就是不一样!
