雅思大作文 统计【一】
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
雅思大作文 统计【二】
虽然来源于身边社会，但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮，拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到，只需要把事件中某一个具体的你，我，他，变成是客观群体，比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。
举例的常见表达方式：
for example,/for instance,（后加句子）
Such as/ like （后加词组）
Take... as an example,
A case in point is that......
其次，在举例时还应注意尺度。
1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称，为了加强客观性，应将人称写成第三人称。
改正：Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.（那些养宠物，例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感）
2. 应避免引用一项调查研究，并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉，用含糊的方法表示。
改正：There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. （大量证据表明。。。）
3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家，尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。
改正：Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.（在全世界，许多孩子在屏幕前待太久，导致了他们的视力减弱。
“全世界”的表达方式：around the world, all over the world, across the globe
【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.
雅思大作文 统计【三】
严厉：50%
我的班主任老师真是多变，常常会对我们“雷电交加”。有一次，老师发了一张卷子，让我们改，改好后交。老师接过我们的卷子一张张认真地检查，不断点头，脸上时不时阳光灿烂，突然，老师紧盯着一张卷子皱起了眉头，脸阴了下来。看到了老师这张“晴转雷阵雨”的脸谱，我开始暗暗祈祷：天哪，不是我的，不是我的……继而，老师无比严厉地喊道：“荀英铭，过来，这道题你怎没改……墙角站着去。”我们无比同情那位站墙角同学，也暗自庆幸多亏好好改卷了，要不是绝对逃不过我们老师的“火眼金睛”的。
温和：23%
“咣当！”我在操场上马失前蹄，摔了个大跟头，无比郁闷地坐在地上，撩起裤腿，揉着磕破皮，冒出丝的`膝盖。“怎么了，别用手碰，会感染的。”传来老师的声音，不远处老师正向我这跑来，“走，到我办公室，我给你包一下。”老师一边搀扶我起来，一边说，一改严厉的常态，关爱之情溢于言表，我感到一股暖流涌进了心里，眼睛也潮湿了，原来我的老师也有这么温和的一面，她严厉的外衣下面是对我们深深的爱呀。
幽默：27%
某天我写卷子的时候，把贝多芬写成了贝多花，恰巧被老师看到了，她没生气居然幽了我一默：“你把人家的名字写错了，一会贝老爷子举着钢琴从坟墓里出来找你算账。”为这，全班同学笑了个没完没了，老师还时不时拿“贝花”说事，提醒我们千万要认真，千万别马虎。
这就是我的老师，严厉多点，有点温和，有点幽默。
雅思大作文 统计【四】
此类例子往往缺乏客观性和说服力，由于第一人称的局限导致所叙述事件难免“鸡毛蒜皮”。要明白，个人不代表整体。
例：I keep my dog to avoid my loneliness and I find a lot of fun.
这样的例子让人犹如在看记叙文，和议论文很不搭调。
