my weekend作文示范课(以my weekend为题目的作文)

my weekend作文示范课(以my weekend为题目的作文)

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my weekend作文示范课(以my weekend为题目的作文)

my weekend作文示范课【一】

市教研室孙主任点评了上午三位教师的精彩课堂,给予充分的肯定。

1、教学理念做到以生为本。对文本的解读到位,“要让学生读懂,教师先要读懂,教材先打动老师,再打动学生”这是孙主任经常告诫老师们的话。 教学设计不拘小节,根据阅读文章的需要而设计。

2、都做到品味、赏析、解读语言作为重点,举了《散步》中“健壮”与“高大”这两个词,能否互换?儿子眼中的“高大”是外在形象,“健壮”是指担负家庭的责任。而“熬”和“总算”结合起来,“稳稳的,慢慢的.,走得很仔细”是因为母亲老了。慢慢咀嚼,细细品味,词句的味道就彰显出来。这就是个性化阅读。

3、不足:导入、拓展部分占时多,而重点内容的品味相对少。继续加强对词句的“品”,强调“琢磨句子”,即会掌握文字的精髓。

个人认为:

《苏州园林》的过度自然,讲析简明、透彻,训练了学对词语美句的品味,加强对作者感情的深刻领会。教学过程由“发现美”的图片引入对苏州园林的表述,直接切入理解课文的重点内容--“4个讲究”。由说明内容的条理清晰引出对说明方法的分析,同时让学生想象,再现加深美段的理解,感受作者深切的眷恋之情。

悟:教师的教法如神笔,指点文字,交给学生阅读分析文章的方法,让学生发现、感悟、表述生活中的美!

《散步》:教师感情充沛,带动、引领每个学生揣摩人物的品质。整堂课,融汇师生对课文理解的浓浓亲情。 对词语的理解,并分组采用多种方式朗读优美的句子体会句子蕴含的深情,结合生活实际,换位思考文中4人的心理活动,身临其境的咀嚼文章的主题。

《散步》:教师的思维是快速的,所以带动学生的思维也是快的,以至于善意、理解的笑声不断产生,渗透着他们对课文内容的理解,结尾涌亲身经历的亲情,感染了学生对“亲情”的体悟,有的学生带着哭泣的声音讲述自己的亲情,打动学生的心灵,也打动听课者的心灵。

每堂课都带给了我深深的思索……

my weekend作文示范课【二】

这是我听到的最难受的话,就像龙应台所说的那样,渐渐地明白到,所谓父母子女一场,就是在一次次离别时看着她他的背影渐行渐远,而他用他的背影告诉你,不必追。

我们教会他仇恨,我们教会他宽容,我们教会他单纯,我们教会他们我们所恐惧,我们所愤怒,我们所拥有。

但不管是什么,我们都教会他爱。

因为爱才会滋生的仇恨,因为爱才会滋生的单纯,爱包容任何事物,不分种族。它会导致悲剧,会导致战争,会导致轮回,但这些事务皆因爱而生,否则不会有这个故事。

不会有术士去养育一条龙,不会有龙无论何地何时都称做爸爸的那个人,不会有龙在怒吼下去毁掉,去毁灭,在烟尘中留下灰烬,不会有一个四处游历又归去却再次一无所有的人,不会有那只愤怒的理智的.成为遥远天空的一颗星的龙,不会有那么一条龙,却在懵懂无知时,背叛了最亲的人。

我们不能一味地教孩子善良,因为善良不仅仅是单纯,单纯的背面便是毁灭。我们不能教他们仇恨,我们的明亮的双眼会失去它的意义。

树欲静而风不止,子欲养而亲不待。

这是我最爱的结局,因为当我们累了困了想家时,

那个人已经不在了。

他不会在沙滩上等到夕阳西下,尽管他那么怕水,他不会再在门口在冷风下等待,即使背后便是温暖的壁炉,他不会再说farewell my son,因为他们已没有机会了。

旦行旦坦荡,且行且珍惜,世界如此之大,却再也寻觅不到你存在过的痕迹,我们一生都能如此幸运的一些人,也在无奈的失去。

my weekend作文示范课【三】

要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。

思路点拨

写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。

这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。

参考范文

My Classmate

Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.

One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.

my weekend作文示范课【四】

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.

my weekend作文示范课【五】

My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.

Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?

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