英语作文怎么样改掉中式英文【一】
Winter is my favourite season.Winters ing also means snow \" following.
I believe no one dislike snow ,the white ,beautiful flowers.When it snowing,we will rush out of the warm and fortable houses,run and play on the ground in snow,enjoying the happiness that belongs to us children.
I also like to skiI with several boys.So, how can I forget the winter,and the white ,beautiful flowers,and our simple happiness.
英语作文怎么样改掉中式英文【二】
Winter is my favourive season,you know?the weather in winter is very cold,and even rain hard and snow,some animals sleep all the winter ,such as snakes,tree leaves have been fell down by the strong wind .I thing the winter is the most beautiful saeson,everywhere is full of snow,and I can make little snowy perpons with my good friends,and we also can play more games with snow,the snow give us so much
happiness,it make me feel relaxed and warm all the winter.
冬天是我最喜欢的季节，你知道吗?冬天很冷，甚至会下大雨和大雪，一些动物整个冬天都在冬眠，例如蛇，树叶被大风吹落。同时我认为冬天是最美的`季节，处处都布满雪花，我和好伙伴们一起堆雪人，还有许多和雪有关的有趣游戏，冬天的雪给我们带来很多快乐，让整个冬天使我感到放松和温暖。
英语作文怎么样改掉中式英文【三】
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英语作文怎么样改掉中式英文【四】
作者写中式英语之鉴是为了纠正一些中国人运用英语时错误的不地道的表达，那么首先要回答的问题是什么是正宗的英语。
在这本书中所倡导的正宗的英语无疑指的是简明英语，特点是”direct， simple and clear”.下面是简明英语的起源（摘自百度）。
“简明英语是由查尔斯·凯·奥格登发明的只有少量单词的英语，他的书简明英语--规则和 语法的.一般约定里对此有所描述。
奥格登说过：学习英语要七年，学习世界语要七个月，而学习简明英语只要七周。简明英语用于公司在国际上使用的书籍，短期内对学生进行基本英语教学。
奥格登不使用重复意义的单词，而且需要所有国家都适用这些单词。他利用大规模的测试和调整来得到这些词汇。在语法方面，他也做了简化，但是保留了英语通常的用法。”
在后面的发展中，简明英语在商务英语和法律英语上有了长足发展。简明英语无疑很适合用在商业上；而法律英语为了保证条款的确定性和权威性，一般冗长复杂，如一个含义要用两个甚至三个同义词来表示，在现在重视效率的社会渐渐向简明方向发展不足为奇。
但是这里我们要清楚一个语言是在不断成长和变化的，中古英语和现代英语自然是有诸多不同，而且每个人的风格也不同。在我看来简明英语的诸多规则只能算作是一种风格，一种在近代社会被提倡的风格。而我们在翻译或者写作时应依具体文本的需求和受众的需求适用不同的风格，而不是倡导每种文本都用一个风格。口语和书面语明显不同，书面语中，用途不同时风格也应做相应的改变。比如文学和非文学就有很多区别，文学讲究陌生化，要得就是一种朦胧的，”transparent”的感觉，才能让自己的文字更引人遐想有更多解释空间，而非文学为了交流方便，自然不会太晦涩难懂。非文学中又可以分很多类，商务性文本、法律性文本、政治性文本。比如政治性文本，你的翻译是为了让英语国家的人明白，就要模仿英语国家中的政治性文本的写法。但翻译这种文本的一个困境是：译者害怕丢失一个词就丢失了一个意义，不敢随意添加修改，所以偏向直译。其实也是很无奈。
一个语言中什么说法能不能用要取决于大多数人是怎么说的，因为你的目的是让大多数受众明白。比如clinch现在虽然被认为是不符合语法，但有些时代中因为大家都这么说，所以当时是可以接受的。所以这种情况下，”non native speaker” 就很吃亏，因为没有大环境让你了解其他人都在怎么说。
我认为在这里，中式英语中最应该摒弃的无疑是you can you up这类说法。当然这个是有点太low了,相信有点英文素养的人都不会犯。接下来要摒弃的就是不常见说法，也就是本书中part one所强调要纠正的。然后对于part two中少用名词多用动词、少用被动多用主动这类型风格类的倾向，我认为就要依文本需求和受众需求来定了，如果一个文本十分正式，翻译的很直白自然也是不合适的。
英语作文怎么样改掉中式英文【五】
My favorite season is winter, because I like the cold weather in winter and I like dress warm clothes.
Winter is the fourth season in the year. It begins around December.In the northern part of China, it usually snows in winter, so it’s a white season.There are many snow games to have fun in the winter.But in the south, it hardly snows. When it rains, it becomes very cold.People barely go to the outdoors.
英语作文怎么样改掉中式英文【六】
The northwest wind whistled and gently told me, \"winter is here!\".
The leaves danced and told me softly, \"winter is ing.\".
The earth was wrapped in white cotton, and gently told me, \"winter is here.\".
You see, the grass sister has hidden green clothes, the frog has escaped to sleep underground - Oh! When winter es, I hide my little hands and say \"&ldquo\" to the winter. Wele, Grandpa winter! ”
英语作文怎么样改掉中式英文【七】
Winter morning is very beautiful, not letter, please have a look at --
Pushed open the door to go out every morning, the bitter wind blowing, with ing to me from time to time. And, occasionally, there will be a naughty little snowflake swirl to fall down, just like dancing. Hexagonal snowflakes all kinds: some like silver needle, some like leaves, and as a scrap of paper... It looks good. Fall to the ground, as if the earth covered with a thick blanket; Fall in the trees, like putting on the silver; Fall in the car, like freshly baked fresh cream cakes. This beautiful snow makes people immersed in the fresh air. White everywhere, beautiful.
However, most can make people in the home can be the first to feel the breath of winter is the window on the ice, some like a forest, mysterious; Some like a stream, as if to flowing; Some like Santa Claus, as if to give people gifts... Winter girl is really ingenuity!
At the club, it is a sea of people, very lively. People wear thick cotton-padded clothes, like cotton. He (she is acpanied by beautiful music, for morning exercise.
Artificial lake on a thick layer of ice, some naughty little classmate play bat on the lake, there were laughter from time to time, the surface of the lake. ......
In winter, very cold. To be honest, I do not want it to e, but it es, but I have a strange feeling. Oh, I love winter, because winter \"of the wind tests the strength\", I love its character.
