读过三毛的文章不在少数,从《撒哈拉的故事》就坠入了她洒脱的文字中。她说,她的来生要变作一棵树。
我的家的后院也有一棵树,它始终那样站着,粗壮的枝干已被岁月刻上道道痕迹,但每年春季萌发的嫩芽依旧青翠诱人,好似一片片绿色的玛瑙,被人精雕细琢。
但我却对它十分羡慕。每当窗外车水马龙,华灯初上,一群又一群的年轻人为了梦想与生计而疲于奔命时,他们是否也想过,自己来生只化作一棵树,为来往的`行人献上甘甜的果实,从不依靠,从不寻找。
我的这十几年一直在争。至于在争什么,我自己也不知道。大概是受母亲的影响吧。她出生于将军的家里,自然是千金小姐。而我,不争也不行。一次考试,一次听写,甚至是一次小小的回答问题的机会,也要与他人争个高下。但我却竟从没想过,自己的心已经不堪重负。
又是一天下午,我又怔怔地望着大树发呆,发现原来家楼下的杂货铺的小姨坐在大树底下。我看她坐在树旁,不时用拳头捶着肩膀。阳光被叶片割成斑驳的树影,投洒在她的脸上。几年前,我见过她。那时她头上还是缕缕青丝,为了生计而奔波。我只是跟她讲过几次话。而如今,当年如云的青丝也渐渐落去,只剩了一小把,且已夹有丝丝白发。
看着这幅光景,似乎什么都在垂垂老去,只有那树是永恒的啊。这人世间,什么是爱,又什么是恨?在一棵历尽沧桑的老树面前又多么云淡风轻。看惯了历史兴亡,也不再害怕离别的哀愁。
假如可以让我重来,我要变作一棵树,站成永恒,从不依靠,从不寻找。
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
小时候平房门口有一大片黄色油菜花,我经常和爷爷在油菜地里捉蝴蝶,黄色的,白色的,每每蝴蝶落在油菜花上,就和消失了一样,找不到,也捉不到了油菜花与蝴蝶那么像那片油菜地仿佛还回荡着我们的笑声。
再后来我上了学,一受委屈就去找爷爷,爷爷就和我坐在油菜地旁边,手扶着柔软清香的.泥土,我把头倚在他身上,他就轻轻摇啊摇,然后他就给我讲他年轻的时候的故事,然后闻着清香的油菜花味,静静的悠闲舒适的,的我会清空所有的不好心情。再有时我与同学吵得面红耳赤,他就慈爱地看着我用沾着油菜地里泥土的手搭着我的肩膀,那泥土就好像有魔力,看着眼前异常明亮的一大片油菜花,我的心也温暖了起来。
现在我还会遇到麻烦,可是爷爷不在身边,这时我就闭上眼,想着爷爷摇动身子,想着那慈爱的笑脸,想着那一大片鲜黄色的油菜花,像爷爷沾着泥土的手,然后耸动鼻翼,似乎闻见一股熟悉的清新的夹杂泥土清香的油菜花香;侧耳倾听,朦胧听见捉蝴蝶时的笑声回响。我的烦恼,就像小时候的蝴蝶,飞到油菜地里消失的无影无踪了。
那个地方我经常回忆着,那个地方,我魂牵梦绕着,那个地方,还被我们的笑声温暖着,那个地方,黄色油菜花,还依旧遍地的开着。
我的油菜花地呀承载了我太多的回忆。
一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。
●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word.
●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word into serious consideration.
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